高中英语 Unit5 The power of nature 第五学时 Writing练习 新人教版选修6.doc

第五学时writing【写作素材】提示：黑体部分用本单元词汇表达。1与自然灾害，如台风、飓风、洪水、地震和火山等相比，人类很弱小。_答案：compared with natural disasters，such as typhoon，hurricane，flood，earthquake and volcano，humans are weak.2岩浆流经之处，一切都被掩埋在熔岩下面。人们惊慌失措，为自己的安全而担忧。_答案：wherever the lava flows，everything is buried under the molten rock.people are in panic and anxious about their safety.3消防队员赶到起火的地方。虽然他们尽一切努力灭火，但是许多房子都被烧毁了。_答案：the firemen make their way to the places on fire.though they make every effort to put out the fire，many houses are burnt to the ground.【连句成篇】可选用compared with，状语从句等将以上句子连成一篇短文_答案：compared with natural disasters，such as typhoon，hurricane，flood，earthquake and volcano，humans are weak.wherever the lava flows，everything is buried under the molten rock.people are in panic and anxious about their safety.the firemen make their way to the places on fire.though they make every effort to put out the fire，many houses are burnt to the ground.【短文改错】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。tianchi is a deep lake that has formed in the crater of an dead volcano in top of the mountain. the lake is 2，194 metres above a sea level, and more than 200 metres deeply. on winter the surface freeze over. it takes about an hour climb from the end on the road to the top of the mountain. when you arrive you are rewarding not only with the sight of its clear waters, but also by the view of the other sixteen mountain peak that surround tianchi.答案：tianchi is a deep lake that has formed in the crater of dead volcano top of the mountain.the lake is 2，194 metres above a sea level, and more than 200 metres . winter the surface over.it takes about an hour,to)climb from the end the road to the top of the mountain.when you arrive you are not only with the sight of its clear waters, but also by the view of the other sixteen mountain that surround tianchi.如何描述旅游景点技巧点拨旅游景点介绍实质上是说明文的一种，所以它首先要具备说明文的特点，即要按照一定的结构顺序(时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑顺序等)和模式(先总后分、由整体到局部、由概述到细节)来展开描写。其次，要重点突出，详略得当。写作时不一定要面面俱到，要重点描写该旅游景点的特别之处，突出其特色(如其独特的风景特色、历史典故、地理风貌、风土人情、传说故事、民族习俗或名胜古迹等)，这样才能给读者留下深刻的印象。最后，语言要生动，富有感染力，使读者有身临其境之感且产生强烈的旅游欲望。常用表达is located/situated in.stands/lies in the east.covers an area of.is surrounded by.has a population of.is a. with a population of.has a history of.is rich in.is famous for.is home to.黄山为“三山五岳”中“三山” 之一，位于我国安徽省境内。黄山有72峰，风景区自然景观秀丽，奇松、怪石、云海、温泉素称黄山“四绝” ，令海内外游人叹为观止。请写一篇短文来介绍一下黄山。注意：1.词数100左右。2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：山峰peak；不规则的irregular_答案：of all the famous mountains in china，huangshan，located in the south of anhui province，is probably one of the most famous.there are as many as 72 peaks in huangshan，and where there are peaks，there are wonderful rocks.the steeper the rocky peaks are，the more irregular the shapes of the pines look.as the range of huangshan is high and it has plenty of rainfall，it can be seen surrounded in clouds.huangshans hot spring is also very famous.the spring water is not only suitable for bathing but also effective in