江苏高考新题型读写作文公开课课件.ppt

Task basedwriting高考英语之读写作文 考试大纲 要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇150个单词左右的短文 情景的形式包括图表 图画 提纲 信函 短文等 考生应能 1 根据特定的语境准确使用英语语法 选用适当的词汇 2 使用一定的句型 词汇 清楚 连贯地传递信息和表达思想 名师解读 内容趋同 广东省高考作文之读写任务 2013年广东高考英语语 2012年广东高考英英语 2011年广东高考英英语 读写任务 其实是 读 和 写 的有机结合 读 的材料是为了后面的 写 提供情景 同样 写 也是对 读 的材料的思考和延伸 读写任务的写作内容一般分为两部分 即TASK1 SUMMARY TASK2 OPINION Expressopiniontooearly过早表达观点 Usethefirstpersoninsteadofthethirdperson没有使用第三人称 Usetoomanyoriginalwordsorsentencesfromthepassage 直接或过多引用原文 lacktransitionalwordsorstatements缺乏过渡词句 Usetoomanyspecificdetailsinsteadofgeneralwords 过多细节而非概括性语言 1 keypointsarenotcomplete概括要点不全 2 Usethefirstpersoninsteadofthethirdperson没有使用第三人称 3 Usetoomanyoriginalwordsorsentencesfromthepassage 过多引用原文 4 Usetoomanyspecificdetailsinsteadofgeneralwords 过多细节而非概括性语言 5 Expressopiniontooearly过早表达观点 6 lacktransitionalwordsorstatements缺乏过渡词句 7 toomanysimplesentences句式单调 Commonmistakes 写作中的难点 1 如何迅速 准确地捕捉要点 2 如何灵活诠释 避免抄袭的嫌疑 3 如何巧妙串连 将要点串成篇章 如何写概括 Canwemainlyuseourownwordsorthesentencesintheoriginalpassage Whatshouldbeincludedinthesummary 3 Canwewriteitinthefirstpersonorthethirdperson 4 Canweexpressouropinion FOCUS Strategy1 从文体入手 分析文章结构 准确把握要点 注意区分事实和观点 重要和次要 普遍与特殊 相关与不相关 原因和结果等逻辑关系 Whatisasummary AshortenedversionofthetextMainpointsofthetextWritteninyourownwords Asummaryisabriefaccountofthemainpointsofanarticleinyourownwords Stylesofpassage narration Thesixelementsofanarrativepassage Hi IamMike Ijustwentthroughmyfirstyearofcollege Thetoughestpartonmeatfirstwasthegeneraladjustment Iwenttoaverysmallhighschoolwheremymomwasateacherandshedidpracticallyeverythingforme ButatthecollegeIneedtoknowsomebasiclifeskills suchasbalancingacheck book laundry andthethingsyouhavetobeabletohandlethatIneverthoughtofinthehighschool ItwasreallytoughformeatfirstandIgotbadlyhomesick OncethatfirstsemesterwasoverandIgotusedtothecollegelife Iloveit goodfacilities helpfulinstructors andagoodlibrary Thestudent sUnionorganizesvariouspartieseveryweek Ialsogotocinemasandconcerts andoftenspendSaturdaynightsinpubsandclubs OnethingIthinkisimportantistogetyourselfactiveinthings Iwasondanceteamincollegeandmetatonofpeoplethatway itwassomucheasiertomakefriendswhenyouhadacommonground thesixelementsofanarrativepassage Mike Hisfirstyearofcollege toughest adjustment gotusedtoit lovethecollegelife Gethimselfactiveinthings Mikesharedwithushisfirstyearofcollegelife Atfirsthe butaftergettingactiveinthingsforonesemester he and didn tadjusthimselfwell adaptedtoit enjoyedhimself congratulations Argumentation Gettingupearlyhasbeenregardasagoodhabitsinceancienttimes Manyyearsago peoplethoughtthatifwewenttobedearlyandgetupearly wewouldbeenergeticthewholeday So gettingupearlyisofgreatimportancetousall Infact morningisthebesttimeofaday Inthemorning theairisthefreshestandpeopleareusuallyinthebestconditions Manyofusmayhavetheexperiencesthatwememorizesomethingsmorequicklyandaccuratelyinthemorningthananyothertimeoftheday Ifwedosomemorningexerciseoronlytakeashortwalkinthemorning wecanbuildourbodiesandbecomemuchhealthier Alsowewillhaveenoughtimetomakeaplanandgetreadyforourworkorstudyofthedayifwegetupearly However ifwegetuplate wewillprobablyhavetodoeverythinginagreathurry Letusremembergettingupearlyisagoodhabitandtryourbesttokeepit Ifwesticktogettingupearlyeveryday wewillcertainlybenefitalotfromit 1 Astrongstatementofopinion thekeyidea Gettingupearly agoodhabit ofgreatimportance 2 Supportfortheopinion supportingsentences abettermemoryahealthierbodyabetterpreparationfortheday 3 Conclusion suggestions agoodhabit benefitalot Thepassagesaysgettingupearlyinthemorningisagoodhabitthatwillbenefitusalot Itenablesustohaveabettermemory healthierbodyandbetterpreparationfortheday Exposition Thepassagenarratesthatkoalaswhoarerepeatedlyawakenfromtheirdeepsleepareunhappyandcomplainingfortouriststakingphotos Theauthorappealstoustobemorekindtoanimals Strategy2 灵活变化表达 适度进行paraphrase 理清要点之间的逻辑关系之后 不能简单地照搬原句 还必须进行适度的paraphrase 即用自己的话进行改写 做到 雁过不留痕 Someusefulskills 1 Usewordsofsimilarmeanings同义替换法 2 Adopttheoppositewaywhensayingasentence正话反说或反话正说法Youwillnotsucceed Youwillfail Youcan tbetoocarefulwhendriving Youshouldbecarefulwhendriving Ican tagreewithyoumore Iagreewithyou 3 Changethepartofspeech词性转换法Thephotoisofimportancetome Thephotoisimportanttome 4 Changethestructureofasentence句式变化法语态变换 Parentsshouldgivechildrenmorepraise Childrenshouldbegivenmorepraise 简单句变复合句 Childrenshouldbeencouragedmore Thiswillhelpthemlearnfaster Childrenshouldbeencouragedmore whichwillhelpthemlearnfaster 削 枝 去 叶 实行精 兵 裁 员 由于字数限制 又要涵盖所有要点 用词必须 能省则省 Strategy3 Someusefulskills 1 主谓缩写theywill they ll weare we re cannot can t2 句式省略ifthey recorrectedtoomuch ifcorrectedtoomuch3 使用概括性的名词代替具体的词ShebroughthomeseveralChineseandEnglishnovels afewcopiesofTimeandNewsweekandsometextbooks Sheintendedtoreadallofthemduringthewintervocation Shebroughthomealotofbookstoreadduringthevocation 小试身手 ItmusthavebeenabouttwointhemorningwhenIreturnedhome Itriedtowakeupmywifebyringingthedoorbell butshewasfastasleep soIgotaladderfromtheshedinthegarden putitagainstthewall andbeganclimbingtowardsthebedroomwindow Iwasalmosttherewhenasarcasticvoicebelowsaid Idon tthinkthewindowsneedcleaningatthistimeofthenight IlookeddownandnearlyfellofftheladderwhenIsawapoliceman IimmediatelyregrettedansweringinthewayIdid butIsaid Ienjoycleaningwindowsatnight SodoI answeredthepolicemaninthesametone Excusemyinterruptingyou Ihatetointerruptamanwhenhe sbusyworking butwouldyoumindcomingwithmetothestation Well I dprefertostayhere Isaid Yousee I veforgottenmykey Yourwhat hecalled Mykey Ishouted Fortunately theshoutingwokeupmywifewhoopenedthewindowjustasthepolicemanhadstartedtoclimbtowardsme Arrivinghomeinearlymorning thewriterfailedtowakeuphiswifebythedoorbell Tryingtoclimbtowardsthebedroomwindow hewasfoundbyapoliceman Hisshoutingeventuallywokehiswife 35words Advertisingcanbeaservicetocustomers Thisistruewhenadvertisementsgivereliableinformationaboutthegoodsadvertised Suchinformationisneededifthecustomeristomakeasensiblechoicewhenhebuyssomething Itisusefulinthatitletshimknowofthekindsofgoodsintheshops Printedadvertisementsdothisjobbest Customerscancollectthemandcomparethem Theycanbetakenalongtotheshopsandtheirstatementscanbecheckedagainstandactualgoodsintheshops Someadvertisementsarenotveryusefultothecustomers Insteadofhelpingthecustomertosatisfyhisrealneeds theysetouttomakehimwantthings Theysetouttomakeusbelievethatwhattheyadvertisewillmakeuscleverer prettier morehandsome ifonlyweuseit ThevoiceonTVsays GetawaypeopleuseXYZpetrol Thescreenshowsapictureofpetrolpumpforafastexpensivecarownedbyaboywithaprettygirlfriend Theydriveofftothewonderfulcountryoralovelybeach Somepeoplemayfeelthatclever successfulpeopleuseXYZpetrol Somemightchoosethatpetroleverytimetheyfilluptheircars Advertisingcanbeusefulwhenitprovidescustomerswithreliableinformation whilesomeadvertisementsarenotthecaseastheyareproducedonlytopersuadecustomerstobuywhattheydon tneed 31words Studentsshouldthinknowaboutwhatextracurricular 课外的 activitiesthey dliketoparticipatein Participatinginextracurricularactivitiesmayhelpyoudeepenyourphysical creative social political andcareerinterestsbybringingyouintocommunicationwithotherlike mindedpeopleyoudidn tpreviouslyknow Youcanjoingroupsasawaytogetsupportfromotherstudents Acluborgroupcanalsobeagreatwaytomeetpeoplewhoaredifferentfromyou Lotsofyouthprogramsbringpeopletogetherwiththosewhoaredifferentasawaytobreakdownthebarriersbetweenpeople Participatinginextracurricularactivitieshelpsyouinotherways too Itlooksgoodoncollegeandjobapplicationsandshowsadmissionsofficersandemployersyou rewell roundedandresponsible Specificactivitieshelpwithspecificgoals Themostbasicreasonforjoiningacluborteamisthatitgivesyousomethingbettertodothanstaringatthewall wanderingthehall orsleepingallafternoon Peoplewhoareparticipatingarelesslikelytopickupbadhabits likesmokingordrinking Theauthor Thepassage discussedthebenefitofextracurricularactivitiesincludingbeingawaytoimprovestudents health widentheirsocialcircleandintroducethemtonewideasandpeople 30words Strategy4 巧用过渡词句和关联词 提升作文档次 SUMMARY和OPINION之间要有过渡语句 才能给人 形合 的感觉 而段落内部的关联词 可以反映出作者思路清晰 并增强文章的连贯性 记叙文的过渡语 1 Ihaveasimilarexperience 2 Ialsowentthroughsuchanexperience 3 Thisstoryremindsmeofanotherstorythathappenedto 4 Thisstoryremindsmeofasimilarexperienceof 议论文的过渡语表示赞同 不赞同 1 Iagreewiththestatementthat 2 Ido quiteagreewiththeauthor 3 I mforthewriter sideathat 4 Ifullysupportthestatement 5 Ican tagreemorewith 1 Ipartly don tagreewithwhatthewritersaid thewriter sview 2 I mstronglyagainstthewriter sidea 3 Thisopinionsoundsright reasonable butishardlypractical 4 Somepeopleargueasifitisageneraltruththat Buttobefrank Icannotagreewiththem 常见关联词1 先后次序关系 lastbutnotleast tobegin start endwith finally firstofall afterwards followingthis 2 因果关系 anotherimportantfactor reasonof since as for inthat owingto dueto inviewof forthisreason asaresultofthis therefore andso consequently asaresult thus sothat inconsequence asaconsequence 3 转折关系 but evenso however though eventhough despitethat inspiteofthat regardlessof yet andyet 4 并列关系 and also too aswellas either or both and 5 补充 递进关系 furthermore moreover further inthisway still notonly butalso not but inaddition to additionally 6 比较关系 similarly incomparisonwith whencomparedwith comparedwith like similarlyimportant apartfrom doing ratherthan bydoingso both and inthesameway notonly but also 7 对照 不同点 yet still forallofthat rather neither nor although though but however somethingisjusttheotherwayaround yet unlike opposedto asopposedto incontrast to onthecontrary differentfromthis asopposedtothis contraryto whereas while butontheotherhand 8 举例关系 forexample forinstance inthiscase namely asyouknow youmaysay like suchas inparticular including foronething foranother putitsimply Itisinterestingtonotethat 9 强调关系 infact especially particularly moreover naturally whatismoreimportant inreality certainly ofcourse indeed inparticular itiscertain surethat tobestrict tobetrue intruth10 条件关系 if unless lest providedthat ifitisthecase inthissense once ifpossible ifnecessary ifso ifnotall ifanything 11 归纳总结类 generallyspeaking generally asageneralrule ingeneral inasense intermsof inconclusion inshort inbrief insummary inaword onthewhole tosumup toconclude12 目的关系 withthisobject forthispurpose inorderthat inthisway since sothat onthataccount 由于那个缘故 incase13 重申关系 inotherwords thatistosay asIhavesaid again onceagain Strategy5 运用较为丰富的句式和高级词汇 为作文锦上添花 适时使用非谓语动词结构 with短语结构 定语从句 倒装句型 短语动词等 1 Tohissurprise thelittlegirlknowssomanythings 使用名词性从句 2 ThoughI mweak I llmaketheeffort 使用倒装句 3 Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper 使用强调句型 4 Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp 用虚拟语气 Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings practice WeakasIam I llmaketheeffort Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened Icouldn thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp 5 Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher 使用过去分词 6 Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool 使用V ing形式 7 Iwon tbelievewhathesays nomatterwhat状语从句 8 Ifyoustudyhard youwillmakerapidprogress 祈使句 and Followedbymanystudents shewalkedoutofthelab Singingandlaughing theywentbacktoschool Nomatterwhathesays Iwon tbelieve Studyhardandyou llmakerapidprogress 9 HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad 使用倒装句 10 Weallthinkheisagreatman thinkhighlyof 11 Asaresulttheplanwasafailure turnout 12 Whenhespoke hefeltmoreandmoreexcited themore themore NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanh