广西九年级英语上册 Module 9 Great inventions主题写作九练习 （新版）外研版.doc

Module 9 Great inventions本模块以“发明”为话题，围绕数码相机的使用、纸和印刷术的发明展开，使同学们更多地了解历史上重要的发明。通过本模块的学习，学生应能用简单的一般将来时的被动语态介绍一项发明，或谈论某项发明对我们生活带来的影响或改变。上周，你们班举行了一个“初中生使用微信的利与弊”的主题班会，同学们各抒己见。班长针对同学们的不同意见，做了以下记录。请你根据表格的内容，以“The opinion of using WeChat”为题，写一篇英语短文， 说明使用微信的利弊并谈谈自己的看法。不少于80词。利弊提供交流的平台过度沉溺，影响学习认识更多的朋友交友不慎，容易受骗学习更多的知识长期玩耍，影响视力要求：1. 文章必须包括所提示的内容，可适当发挥，不要直译。2开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：platform(平台), affect(影响), trick(欺骗), eyesight(视力)The opinion of using WeChatLast week, we had a discussion about using WeChat. Here are the results._短语：1. communicate with _ 2by WeChat _ 3in my opinion _ 4in addition _ 5最后但同样重要的 _ 6交更多朋友 _ 句型： 1.spend too much time doing2And they may be tricked by strange net friends.3We shouldnt use WeChat for too long高分模板The opinion of using WeChatLast week, we had a discussion about using WeChat. Here are the results. Some students think WeChat is a very useful tool. It can provide a platform to communicate with their friends. Besides, they can make more friends and learn more knowledge by WeChat.However, some students think WeChat will affect their study if they spend too much time using it. And they may be tricked by strange net friends. Last but not least,_it will also affect their eyesight to use WeChat for a long time.In my opinion, we shouldnt use WeChat for too long and we shouldnt use it when we are studying. In addition, we shouldnt add strangers casually or meet net friends without our parents permission.名师点评用动词不定式表目的，communicate with为常用典型短语，体现了微信的功能。 make more friends和learn more knowledge诠释了微信的作用。last but not least(最后但同样重要的)和in addition(另外)在文中起到了递进的作用，使文章有层次感。计算机在我们的工作、生活中的作用越来越大， 但你知道计算机的起源与发展吗？请就计算机的发明时间(1946年)、大小、用途等方面，谈一谈它的发展变化以及你对未来计算机的畅想。要求：1.语意连贯，语句通顺；2词数不少于80(短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)。Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily life. Do you know the history and the changes of computers？_详解详析【素材积累】1. 和交流2. 通过微信3. 在我看来4. 另外5. last but not least 6. make more friends【小试身手】One possible version：Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily life. Do you know the history and the changes of computers? The computer was invented in 1946. At that time, the machine was huge and it was as large as a big house. It weighed about 30 tons.The computer is a very useful tool in our life, in our study as well as in our work. For example, we can use computers to send messages to foreign friends by email. The computer can open our eyes and let us know more. It is one of the most helpful inventions in the world. It has many functions. We can listen to music or play games on computers. It makes us relaxed.Its hard to imagine