短文改错专题训练(2011年9--11月卷选辑).doc

短文改错专题训练 (2011年9-11月卷选辑)短文改错（1） （杭外高三10月卷）Modern American civilization is chiefly rooted in the Old World, that is, the European culture which is deep based upon the ancient Greek and Roman civilization. From the fall of the Roman Empire to the Renaissance in Europe, the Old World was in its Middle Ages (or Dark Ages) because the too important role played by religion and the neglect of science. Therefore, through the Renaissance, people became enlightening and once again interested in the study of physical sciences such as geography. The Renaissance was a movement was called the “revive of learning”. As the result, some brave people started their expedition by sailing west across the Atlantic with a belief in their mind the earth is round. 改错 (1)：Modern American civilization is chiefly rooted in the Old World, that is, the European culture which is deep based upon the ancient Greek and Roman civilization. From the fall of the Roman deeply civilizationsEmpire to the Renaissance in Europe, the Old World was in its Middle Ages (or Dark Ages) becausethe too important role played by religion and the neglect of science. Therefore, through of Howeverthe Renaissance, people became enlightening and once again interested in the study of physical enlightened sciences such as geography. The Renaissance was a movement was called the “revive of learning”. 去掉 revivalAs the result, some brave people started their expedition by sailing west across the Atlantic with a abelief in their mind the earth is round. that was 短文改错（2）： (学军期中) The world is not only hungry, but also thirst. This may sounds strange, since nearly seventy percent of the earths surface is covered with water. But about ninety percent of this is sea water.Man and most of the animals can only drink and use the remained ten percent of water -fresh water. The need for water is increased day by day. Only when steps are taken to deal with thisproblem immediate can we avoid a severe worldwide water shortage later on. One of the first steps are to develop ways to reuse them. Experiments have already carried out in this field. The used water has been pumped to a water purifying plant that it can be separated from waste matters and treated with chemicals so that it can be reused again.短文改错2: 1.thirst-thirsty 2.sounds-sound 3.remained-remaining 4.increased-increasing 5.immediate-immediately 6.are-is 7.them-it 8.already carried 中间加入been 9.that-where 10.again去掉短文改错（3） (新昌中学期中)One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasnt breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old mans breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way. Within five minutes, the old man began to move little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.key改错3 whilewhen ushim so-but has-had checked-check call in去掉in use-using little前加a thatwhat really-real短文改错(4) （衢州一中）It is important for everybody to obey traffic rules. This afternoon on my way to home from work, I saw an accident happening. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl and tries to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was badly injured and couldnt move. The young man didnt know how to do. I immediately ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached. They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while he was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.Key to 4: to（去掉）; happeninghappen; whilewhen; tries-tried; and but; herhis; howwhat; reachedarrived; hospital to hospital; policeman-policemen 短文改错 (5) ( 萧山九中 )Dear Sir/Madam,I learned from the newspaper that your company needs a English secretary. Im really interested in this position and hoped I can work for you.Im 18 years old and will be graduated from Xinxing Foreign Language School this July. Im an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. Im good at English, specially spoken English. I often use the computer and I type very fast. On my spare time, I read a lot of. Poems is my favorite. I enjoy music very much either. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. However, Im easy to get along and I like to make friends.Im looking forward to your reply. Li HuaKey (5) : Dear Sir/Madam,I learned from the newspaper that your company needs a English secretary. Im anreally interested in this position and hoped I can work for you. hopeIm 18 years old and will be graduated from Xinxing Foreign Language School graduatingthis July. Im an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. Im good at English, specially spoken English. I often use the computer and I type very especiallyfast. On my spare time, I read a lot of. Poems is my favorite. I enjoy music very In 去掉 aremuch either. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. tooHowever, Im easy to get along and I like to make friends.Besides withIm looking forward to your reply. Li Hua 短文改错(6) ( 西北工大附中)Dear Mr. Donforth,Im writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. Ive heard that you have gone to Greece. In our Greece unit, we have been learning about its rich culture but long history. Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have learned a lot from the text book, but I believe my personal experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for us? It will be surely excited and rewarding. I hoped that you can think about my request and visit us as soon as possible.Yours Sincerely, Li HuaKey (6):短文改错 6：you 后加 to gone been but and 去掉 so here there my your knowledges knowledge for with excited exciting hoped hope 短文改错 (7): (台州四校联考)Dear Lucy,Thanks for your letter. I might get used to the life inAmericagradually. Food here remain the same all day and the school here ismore relaxed because I take 2 AP courses and have to catch up withhalf years course. All the books are in English and I have to writemany articles, which might seem difficult. More worse, I find out myspeaking English got worse. I have been out of my school only once,but I guess there are a lot of different. There are some funny clubs,and I participate basketball club in this semester. Its amazing. By theway, thank you and all my classmates inChinafor making souvenirs tome. Sending it to me when you finish and I will be very happy.Hope you willreply to me soon. Yours, Li HuaKey (7) Dear Lucy,Thanks for your letter. I might get used to the life inAmericagradually. Food here remain the same all day andremainsthe school here ismore relaxed because I take 2 AP courses and have to catch up with relaxing though half / years course. All the books are in English and I have to writemany articles, which amight seem difficult. More worse, I find out myspeaking English got worse. I have been out Much spokenof my school only once,but I guess there are a lot of different. There are some funny differencesclubs,and I participate / basketball club in this semester. Its amazing. inBy theway, thank you and all my classmates inChinafor making souvenirs tome. forSending it to me when you finish and I will be very happy.SendHope you willreply to me soon.Yours, Li Hua 短文改错 (8): (桐乡一中)One day a little boy went to a garden followed his parentsThey planted flowers and watered them as soon as possibleA few days after, they came there againTo their joy, the flowers they planted were growing so goodThe father picked a flower and gave it to his wife to show her love, who was seen by his sonThe following day the boy picked all the flowers to send it to his parentsOnly at this moment the father realize what a bad effect he had for his sonSo I think parents can be bad and good examples for their children, and they should set up good examplesKey: 81 followed following 2 after later 3 good well 4 her his 5 who which 6 it them 7 moment后加did 8 for on 9 and or 10 set后去掉up 短文改错 (9): (萧中10月考)Dear George, Its been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C., where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day. Therefore, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It was really a nice experience. If youd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. Key: 9Dear George,Its been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. Thank you very much sincefor showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After we said us with goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C., where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day. stay daysTherefore, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It However flewwas really a nice experience. If youd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than a morehappy to be your guide. Mike 短文改错 (10): (东阳中学)As a student, I hate the exam system we are now used. This system may be a good way to test a students memory, and it can tell you nothing about a students ability. It does not good to students or teachers. As soon as a child begins the school, he enters a world of exams that will decide his future. In fact a good exam system should train a student to think himself, but it now does something like that. So students are encouraged to remember what is taught. The students who comes out first in the exam often may not be the best in their studies. It must be some better way to test a student true ability besides knowledge. And that is where we should do right now.Key 10: V. 1. using 2. but 3. no 4. the去掉 5.加 by/for 6. nothing 7. come 8. There 9. students 10. what 短文改错 (11): (学军2月考)Here are two types of cars that may some day take place of todays big cars. If all the people drive such cars in the future, there will be less pollutions in the air. There will also have more space for parking cars in the cities, but the streets will not be so crowded. Three such cars can fit the space now need by one car of the usually size. The little cars will spend much too less to own and drive. Driving will be safe, too, because these little cars can go only 65 kilometers per hour. But it will not be of any use for long trips. ks5uKey 11: 1. take place of-take the place of 2. pollutions-pollution 3. have-be 4. but-and 5. need-needed 6. usually-usual 7. spend-cost 8. much too-much 9. safe-safer 10. it-they 短文改错12. (宁波北仑中学) Ask your friend that he can use a glass of water as a musical instrumentOf course, hecantThen