北师大版英语高二选修6 学案Unit 16写作指导.doc

如何描写一次难忘的经历【写作任务】一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“一次难忘的经历”。请结合自身经历，用英语写一篇短文向该报社投稿。注意：词数100左右。_【写作指导】一、审题定调本写作任务要求结合自身经历描写一次难忘的经历，属于记叙文的范畴。写作时应注意以下几点： 1.把握记叙文的“六要素（时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果）”； 2.人称以第一人称为主，时态以过去时态为主，但要注意不论是人称还是时态，都要从实际出发，灵活选用； 3.语言要求详略得当、具体生动。二、谋篇布局本写作任务可分为三部分：第一部分：引入话题（一次难忘的经历）；第二部分：具体描述事情的发生、发展以及结果；第三部分：表达自己的感受或对事件的评论。三、组织语言第一部分：引入话题。普通表达高级表达ill never forget .i will remember . forever.one of my most unforgettable experiences was . will live in my mind forever.第二部分：具体描述事情的发生、发展以及结果。普通表达高级表达graduation finally came. my classmates and i decided to .with graduation approaching, my classmates and i shared the same idea of .we spent a whole week collecting material. during the week, we .material collecting took us a whole week, in the course of which we .though we had several debates, the video was perfect when it was finished.however, the video turned out perfect after many changes.第三部分：表达自己的感受或对事件的评论。普通表达高级表达i was very happy about the success.ive learned a lot from this activity.the success surely gave me a great sense of achievement.this activity was really meaningful and i benefited a lot from it.【范文展示】普通范文 ill never forget the experience of making a video with my classmates before graduation. graduation finally came. my classmates and i decided to make a video to record our experiences at school. we spent a whole week collecting material. during the week, we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of our school life. then we started the hard editing part. though we had several debates, the video was perfect when it was finished. several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. it was the first time for us to make a video. i was very happy about the success.高级范文 one of my most unforgettable experiences was making a video with my classmates before graduation. with graduation approaching, my classmates and i shared the same idea of making a video to record our experiences at school. material collecting took us a whole week, in the course of which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of our school life. the editing part after that was tough. however, the video turned out perfect after many changes. several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. it was the first time for us to make a video. the success surely gave me a great sense of achievement.【亮点赏析】1.两篇范文的结构都很清晰，衔接紧凑，故事完整。2.高级范文中使用了很多看似简单但表达很恰当的词汇，如：approach, share the same idea, in the course of, tough, turn out, a great sense of achievement等。3.高级范文中使用了更多复杂的语法结构，如：动词-ing形式作表语，“with +名词+动词-ing形式”结构，定语从句等，所有这些都给文章增色不少。【实战演练】假设你是李华，上周末你们班到某农村小学开展了志愿者服务活动，你深有感触。请你用英语写一篇短文，描述此次活动过程并说明你的感受，然后发表在你校英语网站上。注意：词数100左右。_答案ill never forget my first volunteer work last weekend.our class went to a primary school in a village to help the students there. since they needed easy access to reading materials, on arrival, we gave away some books to them. then we talked about school life together. i was quite shy at first, but later, i found we had a lot in common and talked with them for almost an hour. finally, we played games together. it was exciting for all of