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原因及解决方案Para.1 Introduction Para.2 ReasonPara.3 SolutionPara.4 ConclusionThe rate of crime committed by teenagers is increasing throughout the world. Discuss the possible reasons and give suggestions on how to solve the problem. (2010年12月18日考题)开头段（Introduction）S1: In this age of change, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts.（背景）S2: Yet at the same time, many problems have arisen, a serious one of which is the increasing rate of youth crime.（话题）S3: In this essay, I will analyse possible causes of this phenomenon and then propose some solutions.（原因+解决方案）主体段1（Reason）S1: It is obvious that the causes of the increase in juvenile delinquency are diverse.（主题句）S2: In the first place, pornographic or violent forms of media exert negative influence on youngsters who cannot tell right from wrong. 原因1S3: As a result, it is possible for them to be led astray easily. 论据1S4: What is more, most young criminals are poorly-educated, so they are not aware of the consequences of their behavior. 原因2S5: Thirdly, the environment in which the children are raised plays a key role. 原因3S6: By that I mean most youth offenders come from families with domestic violence or parental neglect, so their emotional needs cannot be satisfied.论据3主体段2（Solution）S1: The solutions to this issue should also be varied.（主题句）S2: To begin with, the government should attach more importance to the problem and enact relevant legislation to crack down on media pornography and violence. 解决方案1S3: Furthermore, compulsory education should be implemented for it can help to raise a healthier, happier and more well-behaved young generation. 解决方案2S4: Last but not least, families should ensure that their children grow up in an environment full of affection and free from violence. 解决方案3结尾段（Conclusion）S1: To conclude, three factors contribute to the surge of youth crime. 衔接手段+概括原因S2: I am convinced that only when the government, society