初中英语人教版八年级下册writing.ppt

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Becausehehastodohishomeworkandtakelessons Heistoostressedoutbecauseoftheexams Birthday March 12th 1994 HewasbornonMarch 12th 1994 Theboy snameisJack Theexamsstresshimout HisbirthdayisonMarch 12th HeisJack HishobbyistowatchLiuQian smagicshows Hisparentsdiedbecauseofacaraccident Heisalwaysbusyonweekendsbecauseoftoomuchhomeworkandlessons properconjunctions 适当的连词 HisbirthdayisonMarch 12th 1994 HewasbornonMarch 12th 1994 HishobbyistowatchLiuQian smagicshows HelikeswatchingLiuQian smagicshows Different goodexpressions birthday hobby DearJack Iknowyouhavemanyproblems Thenyoufeelsleepyinclass Youaretoostressedoutbecauseoftheexams HereIhavesomeadviceforyou First whynotsleepalittleearlier Second you dbetterrelaxyourselfbywatchingmyshow Third youmustbeconfident Ihopeyouwillbebettersoon Yours LiuQian Youhavemuchhomework Youhavetosleeplate Youstudyhard YourEnglishisnotgood Youdon twastetime Youcanfinishyourhomeworkquickly Youhavesomuchhomework Youhavetosleeplate Differentwaystoexpresssentences Youstudyhard YourEnglishisnotgood Youdon twastetime Youcanfinishyourhomeworkquickly Youhavesomuchhomeworkthatyouhavetostayuplate Althoughyoustudyhard youarenotgoodatEnglish Ifyoumakefulluseofeveryminute youwillfinishyourhomeworkquickly stayuplate DearJack Iknowyouhavemanyproblems Youhavesomuchhomeworkthatyouhavetostayuplate Thenyoufeelsleepyinclass Youaretoostressedoutbecauseoftheexams Althoughyoustudyhard youarenotgoodatEnglish HereIhavesomeadviceforyou First whynotsleepalittleearlier Ifyoumakefulluseofeveryminute youwillfinishyourhomeworkquickly Second you dbetterrelaxyourselfbywatchingmyshow Third youmustbeconfident Ihopeyouwillbebettersoon Yours LiuQian Writingstrategy properconjunctions 适当的连词 goodphrases 词组 Howcanwemakethecompositionmorefluent 流畅的 andmorebeautiful wonderfulsentencepatterns 句型 WritingShow 假如你是Jack 你的好友Lisa也是魔术爱好者 前不久她去参加了一个魔术秀节目被淘汰了 她为这次失败所困 无心学习 请你给她写一封信 建议她 1 正确看待该节目 享受参与的过程而不必太在意结果 2 提醒她实现理想的途径有很多 只有努力才能获得成功 3 鼓励她好好学习 也不放弃个人爱好 开心度过每一天 4 要求 1 包含以上所有要点 可适当增加细节 条理清晰 2 语句正确 3 信中不得出现真实姓名 校名和地名 4 不少于80词 Beginning Body正文 Ending Anicecomposition 1 Differentsentencepatternsandsomeproperconjunctions2 Beautifulhandwriting DearLisa I msorrytohearthatyouarefeelingdownbecauseofyourfailureinthismagicshow YoursJack Don tforgettoshowuswonderfulsentences Enjoysomenicepassage Keepsmiling Keepfighting Don tgiveup 1 表示并列或递进 and aswellas both and what smore notonly butalso neither nor2 表示选择 or either or3 表示转折 but however although though anyway4 表示因果 because so for asaresult5 表示条件 if unless6 表示对比 instead not but while ontheonehand ontheotherhand7 表示解释 forexample like suchas inotherwords totellthetruth8 表示顺序 firstly first ofall second ly next later sincethen fromthenon finally intheend9 表示强调 also especially actually infact10 表示结论 allinall inaword inshort Conjunctions DearLisa I msorrytohearthatyouarefeelingdownbecauseofyourfailureinthismagicshow Iknowyou reamagicfan butI dliketosharewithyoumythoughtsonthismattar Yes showsmaychangeone sfuture Theyoffertheopportunitytoshowone stalents andgivepeopleawaytomaketheirdreamscometrue Sincesomepeopleareturelytalented thereisnoneedtotake theresulttooseriously Itmaynotbegoodforusteenagerstobecomefamousovernight Sojustenjoytheprocess Inaddition therearemanywaystosuccess andonlybyworkinghardcanyouachieveyourgoals Asateenager yourshouldsparenoeffortstostudyanddevelopyourinterestsatthesametime which withoutdoubt willenrichyourfuturelife Hopeyou llbehappyeveryday YoursJack Homework Improvetheletteryouwrote B Sharetheletterwithyourfriend findandlearnsomebettersentences WritingShow 假如你是Jack 写信给刘谦 感谢他的建议 并告诉他你的变化以及对考试的信心 考试马上就要到了 你不再紧张 相信努力 一定能通过考试 你的变化包括 1 按时完成作业 睡眠每天8小时 2 每天都充满了活力 好好利用每一分钟3 学习努力 取得好成绩 4 自信 不紧张 5 DearLiuQian Thanksforyourlastletter Youradviceisreallyhelpful Ihavechangedalot Now YoursJack Don tforgettoshowuswonderfulsentences Sample Ihavechangedalot Now Ifinishmyhomeworkontimeandhardlystayuplateatnight BecauseIsleep8hourseveryday Iamenergeticinclass Also Imakefulluseofeveryminute IstudysohardthatIcangetgoodgrades Totellyouthetruth Iamprettyconfidentnowanddon tfeelnervousatall What smore IoftenwatchyourshowswhenIfeeltired Howwonderfulyourshowsare Theexamiscomingsoon ActuallyIamnotworriedatall IbelieveIwilldoagoodjobafterworkinghard Yours Jack DearLiuQian Thanksforyourlastletter Youradviceisreallyhelpful Ihavechangedalot Now Theexamiscomingsoon ActuallyIamnotworriedatall IbelieveIwilldoagoodjobafterworkinghard Yours Jack Don tforgettoshowuswonderfulsentences DearJack Iknowyouhavemanyproblems Youhavemuchhomework Youhavetosleeplate Thenyoufeelsleepyinclass