大学英语四级格式及范文.ppt

制作人 王加毅 28 周凡 21 班级 医检1105 大学英语四级 一 大学英语四级写作十种常考类型 1 致辞2 求职信 求学信3 邀请信4 个人简历5 告示6 就业7 考试8 读后感9 难忘的人10 论述文框架 1 致辞 1 进行自我介绍 2 详细介绍大会内容 3 结束语 1Goodmorning ladiesandgentlemen welcometoBeijing Tobeginwith Iwouldliketomakeabriefintroductiontomyself 2Thefollowingismyintroductiontotheconference First itismygreathonortobeherewithallofyouanddeclareopentheConferenceofInternationalTradeCooperation Second 3Iwishallofyouenjoyyourselvesduringthisconferenceandhopetheaboveinformationwillhelpyou Ifyouhaveanyquestionforme pleasefeelfreetoaskatanytime Thankyouforyourattention 2 求职信 求学信 1 申请职位 2 简要介绍自己的情况 3 期待回信 DearSirorMadam IamseniorfromtheDepartmentofBusinessAdministrationofBeijingUniversity Iamwritingtheletterinpurposeofapplyingforadmissionintoyouresteemedinstitution yourrecentlyadvertisedpositionforastaffmemberIamsurethatIamqualifiedforit First enclosedwiththisletterismyresume whichfurtherdetailsmypreviousacademicqualificationsandworkexperience Second WordsfailmewhenItrytoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetothehelpyourenderedme Yourpromptandfavorableattentiontomyinquirywouldbehighlyappreciated Yourssincerely LiMing 3 邀请信 1 邀请参加晚会 2 说明举办晚会的原因 3 将安排哪些活动 DearWangyi IamgreatlyhonoredtoformallyinviteyoutoparticipateinMr OldFish sweddingceremonywithMs FujiworatobeheldatBeijingGrandHotelfrom8to10p m onApril1 2007 Asyouareaclosefriendofus wewouldverymuchlikeyoutoattendthecelebrationandshareourjoy Theoccasionwillstartatseveno clockintheevening withtheshowingoftheirweddingceremony Thiswillbefollowedbyadinnerparty Ataroundten wewillholdasmallmusicalsoiree atwhichabandwillperformsomeworksbyBachandStrauss IfyoudonothaveanypriorappointmentonApril1 welookforwardtothepleasureofyourcompany Yourssincerely LiMing 4 个人简历 1 说明姓名 地址 联系方式 求职目标 2 教育背景 工作经历 资历 3 所获奖励 特长 以及个人资料 LiMingP O Box237 BeijingUniversity5 YiheyuanRoad HaidianDistrict Beijing100871Tel 62768888Email liming CareerObjective Apositionwithmanagement EducationalBackground Sept2003toBeijingUniversity WorkExperience July2006toBankofChina Qualifications Universitygraduationcertificateand Honors Awards TwiceawardedscholarshipbyBeijingSpecialSkills FamiliaritywithMicrosoftWord Excel Experience PresidentofStudentUnion2003 present PersonalData DateofBirth Sep 17 1984Gender FemaleMaritalStatus Unmarried 5 告示 1 比赛目的 时间 地点 2 参赛者的要求 3 裁判和奖励的细节 ChineseSpeakingContestDecember22 2007Toimprovestudents abilitytospeakChineseandenrichafter classactivities theStudents UnionofDepartmentofChineseLanguageandLiteratureisorganizingaschool wideChinesespeakingcontesttobeheldonSaturdaynextweek 29December attheStudents Auditorium ThosewhoareinterestedintakingpartinitmaysignupwiththemonitoroftheirclassesbeforeTuesdaynextweek Fiveprofessorswillbeinvitedtobejudges Thefirstsixwinnerswillbegivenawards Everybodyiswelcometobepresentatthecontest TheStudents UnionDepartmentofChineseLanguageandLiterature 6 就业 1 大学生难找工作 2 原因很多 3 解决的办法 Jobhuntinghasalwaysbeenaheadacheforcollegestudents Thoughmanygraduatesareemployedrightaftergraduation somearenot Mostseriousofall somestillhavenoideawheretogoworkingevenalongtimeaftergraduation Thereasonsforthisphenomenonarevarious Ontheonehand afewyearsagocollegesanduniversitiesenrolledsomanystudentsinpopularmajors Ireckonthisproblemcanbesolvedifbothcollegesandstudentstakemeasures First theyshouldresearchthemarketanddevelopspecialskillstosuititsneed Second 7 考试 1 大学都用考试来衡量学生的成绩 2 考生可能带来的副作用 3 我对考试的看法 Inmostcollegesanduniversitiestheexaminationisusedasachiefmeansofdecidingwhetherastudentsucceedsorfailsinmasteringaparticularsubject Althoughitdoesthejobquiteefficiently itssideeffectsarealsoenormous Tobeginwith examinationslowerthestandardsofteaching Sinceteachersareoftenjudgedbyexaminationresults theyarereducedtotrainingtheirstudentsinexamtechniques Nosubjectscanbetaughtsuccessfullymerelythroughbeingapproachedwithintenttotakeexaminations Infact fewofusadmitthatexaminationscancontributeanythingreallyimportanttothestudents academicdevelopment Ifthatisthecase whycannotwemakeachangeanddevisesomethingmoreefficientandreliablethanexaminations 8 读后感 1 我最喜爱的小说 2 该小说的内容 3 我为什么喜爱 MyfavoritenovelisAroundtheWorldinEightyDayswhichiswrittenbyJulesVerne TheauthorwasborninFranceanddevotedhimselftoliteratureandwroteseveralscientificromances whichgainedhimthename FatherofModernScienceFiction ThisisabookofsciencefictionwhichtellsusanexcitingstoryaboutanEnglishgentleman Mr PhileasFogg whomakesabetwithhisclubmatesandmanagestotravelaroundtheworldineightydays Itgivesusavividdescriptionofthemanydifficultiesandincidentswhichhappenonhisjourney Fromthisstory wecanseetheauthor sdeeploveforthesea travelandadventure whichplayedavitalroleinhislife Wearealsoastonishedandconvincedbyhisfertileimaginationandscientificandgeographicalknowledge 9 难忘的人 1 我生活中最难忘的人是 2 为什么他 或她 令我难以忘怀 3 结论 InmylifeIhavemetagreatmanypeoplewhoarereallyworthrecalling ButperhapsthemostunforgettablepersonIeverknowismyEnglishteacher Whatfrequentlybringsbackmemoriesofmyschoolteacherishisspecialqualities Firstandforemost hegaveusthegreatestgiftateachercanoffer anawakeningofapassionforlearning HenotonlyledustoanappreciationofthebeautyandperfectionofEnglishlanguageandliterature butalsoarousedourgreatinterestinexploringsomethingdeeperinthisfield Furthermore Iwasattractedbyhislivelywit Irememberthatwestudentsalwaysanticipatedhisclasswithgreateagernessbecausehislecturewerehumorouslydelivered neverfailingtoprovokechucklesorloudlaughs AlthoughitisnearlytwoyearssinceIattendedhislastclass heisthetalkofouroldclassmates andIknowpartofhimhasalreadystayedinmyheart 10 论述文框架 Owingtothespeedyeconomicdevelopment thenumberofpeoplewho hasconsiderablyincreased declined Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat playsacrucialroleinmodernsociety Dueattentionhastobepaidtotheissueof Accordingly itisimperativeforustotakedrasticmeasures Tobeginwith weshouldappealtotheauthoritiestomakestrictlawsto 二 写作技巧 作文结构 1行文结构文章开头很重要 关系到全篇文章 一定要认真考虑好如何写好第一句 一般紧扣主题 开门见山 直接入题 开头写得好的学生一般不会用墨太多 一般会用一个到两个句子将立意表达清楚 如 Nowadays anincreasingnumberofpeoplearegettingusedtoonlineshoppingandonlineshoppingisreallyenjoyingaboom 再如 Nowadaystheinformationtechnologydevelopsrapidlyandshoppingonlinehasbeenafashionfortheyoungsters 文章的主体部分要精心组织 不仅要层次清楚 而且主次分明 写主体段应注意以下几点要求 2 要有中心句 topicsentence 以 Onlineshopping 为例 按照提纲要求 第二部分要写网上购物的好处和问题 那么中心句之一应该是写网上购物的好处 列举好处的时候不能想到什么说什么 要说得精练典型 逻辑缜密 写得较好的学生首先会从其文章中找到中心句 如 Thereisnodoubtthatonlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages 然后根据内容需要和字数的规定 确定要点的详与略后 选择正确的 典型的 具有说服力的事实 例子 数据和论据等说明解释并扩充主题 另外 主体段的句与句之间也要逐步展开 通顺连贯 符合一定的逻辑关系 而在列举问题的时候 要用however ontheotherhand等连接词使过渡自然 条理清晰 如 However thedisadvantagesalsoarise 没有掌握中心句这一技巧的学生一般不会拿到11分 总分为15分 以上的高分 3 注重连接词的使用 正确的连接词的使用可以使文章显得更加有条理 使用好承上启下的连接词或句子 如first besides what smore等连接词来支持中心句 对以往大学英语四级作文的分析可以看出 语言水平相当的两篇作文 正确使用了连接词的作文得分明显高于未使用连接词或连接词使用不当的作文 阅读人阅卷时往往希望试卷在形式上一目了然 连接词正是文章的逻辑在形式上的体现 它可以在很大程度上弥补叙述或论证时的逻辑缺陷 指引读者跟着作者的思路走 4 句子表达 应该多使用自己较有把握的句型 要在准的基础上求 变化 不过很多同学通篇都用简单句 几乎没有复合句 定语从句等长句 即使是一个错误都没有 作文整体分数也不会很高 应该学会使用正确的定语从句 同位语从句进一步说明中心句 如 Insteadofgoingshoppingoutdoors youcanjustcomfortablysitinfrontofyourcomputerandscanwebpages whichcertainlysavesyourtimeandenergy 偶尔也可以用一个倒装句 给阅卷老师以新鲜感 另外 在上下句紧接时 其中完全相同的成分可以省略 这样文章显得简明 紧凑 5 词汇使用 在用词上不能停留在高中阶段所学的简单词汇 但这并不意味着必须使用偏词 而是鼓励学生用合适的 恰当的在四级大纲范围的一些词汇 很多学生在词汇的使用上习惯于中式英语表达 如take和bring的误用 如 一个好名字会带来好运 很多学生用 Agoodnamecantakegoodlucktoyou 还有一些学生自己造词 如benefit既可用作名词也可用作动词 有的同学不清楚这一点 自己造出了benefition这样的词来充当benefit的名词形式 教师应在平常的教授中强调好词汇的正确使用 6 结语 文字连贯 语言流畅是写好作文的基本要求 而内容充实 意思完整是文章连贯流畅的基础 达到这一目标要求学生有较强的语感和语言功底 需要一个长期积累和大量实践的过程 通过对以上写作方法与技巧的探讨 我们不仅了解到其重要性 更应付诸实践 作为教师 我们应该加强学生输出性练习的强度 不能一味只做输入性题目的训练 只有这样 才能切实提高学生大学英语四级作文的写作能力和水平 三 佳句赏析 开头 1 Asfaras isconcerned2 Itgoeswithoutsayingthat 3 Itcanbesaidwithcertaintythat 4 Astheproverbsays5 Ithastobenoticedthat 6 It sgenerallyrecognizedthat 7 It slikelythat8 It shardlythat 9 It shardlytoomuchtosaythat 10 Whatcallsforspecialattentionisthat 需要特别注意的是11 There snodenyingthefactthat 毫无疑问 无可否认12 Nothingismoreimportantthanthefactthat 13 what sfarmoreimportantisthat 结尾 Iwillconcludebysaying Therefore wehavethereasontobelievethat Allthingsconsidered 总而言之Itmaybesafelysaidthat Therefore inmyopinion it smoreadvisable Itcanbeconcludedfromthediscussionthat 从中我们可以得出这样的结论Frommypointofview itwouldbebetterif 在我看来 也许更好 谚语 Abadbeginningmakesabadending 不善始者不善终 Abadthingneverdies 遗臭万年 Abadworkmanalwaysblameshistools 不会撑船怪河弯 Abirdinthehandisworththantwointhebush 一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林 Aboasterandaliararecousins german 吹牛与说谎本是同宗 Abullyisalwaysacoward 色厉内荏 Aburdenofone schoiceisnotfelt 爱挑的担子不嫌重 Acandlelightsothersandconsumesitself 蜡烛照亮别人 却毁灭了自己 Acathas9lives 猫有九条命 历年四级范文 2003 12真题Directions Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowritealetterinreplytoafriend sinquiryaboutapplyingforadmissiontoyourcollegeoruniversity Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese 1 建议报考的专业及理由2 报考该专业的基本条件3 应当如何备考 ALetterinReplytoaFriend December27th 2003Dear Whenitcomestowhichmajoryoushouldchoose IproposethatyouapplyforthemajorofEnglish Tobeginwith Englishisthemostpopularlanguageintheworld whichiswidelyusedinallfieldssuchasteaching translation andforeigntradeandsoon What smore itgoeswithoutsayingthatEnglishmajorsaremorelikelytofindagoodjobinthetighterandtighterjobmarket InordertostudyatEnglishDepartment youhavetomeetthefollowingrequirements Inthefirstplace youhavetospendalotoftimeonit justastheoldsayinggoes Practicemakesperfect Inthesecondplace thebasicskillsofreading listeningandspeakingarenecessary becausetheyarethefoundationsforyourfuturestudy Lastbutnottheleastimportant youneedanintenseinterestinlearningEnglishsince interestisthebestteacher Asfarasthepreparationworkisconcerned youshouldfirstofallreviewalltherequiredvocabulary Inaddition you dbetterspendsometimeonreadingandwriting Onlythroughthesemeasurescanyouhopetoenrollinouruniversity Yours 2004 6真题PartVWriting 30minutes Directions Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionentitledABriefIntroductiontoaTouristAttraction Youshouldwriteatleast120wordstothefollowingguidelines Yourrole atourguideYouraudience agroupofforeigntouristsYourintroductionshouldinclude 1 somewelcomingwords2 theschedulefortheday3 adescriptionoftheplacethetouristswillbevisiting e g ascenicspotorahistoricalsite etc Youshouldmaketheintroductionandthearrangementsforthedaycleartoeverybody ABriefIntroductiontoaTouristAttraction Goodmorning ladiesandgentlemen welcometoBeijing Tobeginwith Iwouldliketointroducemyself IamthetouristguidefromChinaTravelServiceandit sgreathonortostayherewithallofyouforawholeday Justastheoldsayinggoes Itisalwaysapleasuretogreetafriendfromafar Iwishallofyoutoenjoyyourselvesduringthistrip Thefollowingisascheduleoftheday ThefirstspotwearegoingtovisitistheGreatWall thegrandestfortificationinancientChina ThenextsighttolookaroundistheMingTombs whichisoneofthebest preservedtombsfor13emperorsinMingDynastymorethanthreehundredyearsago Intheafternoon wewillgofortheSummerPalace theroyalparkforChineseancientemperors CurrentlyweareonthewaytotheGreatWall DatingbacktothesevencenturyB C theGreatWallisconstructedbyrespectivestatesforfortifyingagainstinvasionofneighboringstates Bythereasonsoflonghistoryanditslength itbecomesone