高中英语写作公开课

,welcome,WritingByZhangHui,Whatmakesagoodessay?,.Discussion,感知典型范例,感知典型范例,词汇层面1,adj.聪明的、脑筋好的cleverwisesmartbrightintelligent,感知典型范例,词汇层面2,adj.令人惊奇的surprisingamazingastonishing,exactlyusedandadvancedwords准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇,(notuntil)He_comehere_yesterdayafternoon.2.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.3.Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.,感知典型范例,句型层面1,advancedsentencepatterns使用高级句型,nogrammaticalmistakes没有语法错误,Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.,他昨天下午来的。,didntuntil,感知典型范例,段落层面,Ithink,foruschildren,weshouldoftengohomeandstaytogetherwithourparentsthoughwearebusy.Oursocietyshouldorganizeallkindsofactivitiesfortheseniorstohelpthemlivehappily.Wecanbuildaharmonioussocietyonlywhenallofuscarefortheaged.,AsfarasIamconcerned,foruschildren,weshouldoftengohomeandstaytogetherwithourparentshoweverbusyweare.Whatsmore,oursocietyshouldorganizeallkindsofactivitiesfortheseniorstohelpthemliveahappylife.Onlywhenallofuscarefortheagedcanwebuildaharmonioussociety,properlinkwords使用恰当的连接词varioussentencepatterns用较丰富的句式,感知典型范例,篇章层面1,卷面不整洁;涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得8分,感知典型范例,篇章层面2,字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。,poor,篇章层面3,excellent,neatandclean卷面整洁wellorganized结构合理thecontentiscomplet内容要完整,Conclusion:Whatmakesagoodessay?,1.neatandclean卷面整洁pletecontent内容完整3.wellorganized结构合理4.exactlyusedandadvancedwords准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇5.properlinkingwords使用恰当的连接词6.varioussentencepatterns用较丰富的句式,假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜航班号：CA985到达：8月6日上午11:30,.Pre-writing(2013全国卷),注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和介绍语已为你写好。DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?_Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua,.Pre-writing(teamwork),Task1:Decidethepersonandtense,Task2:Decidethestructure,Task3:Writedownthekeywordsandsentencepatterns,Task1:person(人称)tense（时态）,Thefirstperson,Thepresentandthefuturetense,Person:,Tense:,DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?_Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua,Task2:Decidethestructure,假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画。同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜航班号：CA985到达：8月6日上午11:30,Task2:Decidethestructure,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，,带去他想要的那幅中国画。,同时询问他,是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜航班号：CA985到达：8月6日上午11:30,假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜航班号：CA985到达：8月6日上午11:30,Task3:writedownthekeywords,开会，,带去,中国画。,接机。,航班号,到达,戴眼镜,a.tohaveameeting/conferenceb.bringsb.sth.c.Chinesepaintingd.domeafavore.pickhimupf.flightnumberg.arriveath.wearglasses,Task3:thekeywords,Task3:Sentencepatterns,ImwritingtotellyouthatIdlikeyoutoWouldyouplease?Iwonderifyoucan?,必要的连接词表示递进：besides,aswell,inaddition表示比较：justlike,inthesameway,onthecontrary表示因果：sothat,since,inorderto/that表示强调：aboveall,withoutanydoubt表示总结：inaword,inshort,inconclusion,.while-writing(15mins)Pleasewritedowntheletterin15minutes.Youcanusethefollowingstructure.,DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?Imwritingtotellyouthat_,and_.Also,Idlikeyoutodomeafavor.Wouldyouplease_?Thankyouinadvance!_isCA985,and_11:30am.August6.Myuncleis_.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua,.post-writing,Reviseyourcompositionsinpairs.Then,makeevaluationsforhimorher.,Presentation,DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?ImwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingtoyourcityforaconference,andIveaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingyouveaskedforbefore.Also,Idlikeyoutodomeafavor.WouldyoupleasemeetmyuncleattheairportandtakehimtohishotelsincethisisthefirstvisittotheU.S.?Thankyouinadvance!HisflightnumberisCA985,anditwillarriveat11:30am.August6.Myuncleistallandheis