状语从句在写作中的应用精品干货PPT课件

.,1,Ifthedreamisbigenough,thefactsdontcount.,如果梦想远大，就一定可以克服艰难险阻。,WelcometoJudithsclass,.,2,DearJohn，ItsapitythatIhavetosaysorrytoyou!Itwasnot_IreadyourletterthatIknewyoulovedmesomuchandwantedtomarryme,forwehaventseeneachother_weparted._weareallbusy,Ijusthavetodropafewlinestoyou.ThefactthatyourenotgoodatEnglishdisappointsme,althoughyouloveme.Totellyouthetruth,IcantstandanyonewhocannotspeakEnglishwell.So_happens,Imgladtohavemetyou,andinfact,_timegoesby,youllgraduallyforgetme.BestwishesAlice,until,since,Nowthat,whatever,as,adearJohnletter,AdverbialClause,（绝交信）,1.ItisnotuntilIreadyourletterthatIknowyoulovemesomuchandwanttomarryme.2.wehaventseeneachothersinceweparted.3.Nowthatweareallbusy,Ijusthavetodropafewlinestoyou.4.Whateverhappens,Imgladtohavemetyou.5.Astimegoesby,youllgraduallyforgetme.,.,3,Iwillnevermarryyou.,高考:NeverwillImarryyou.四级:YouarethelastmanIamwillingtomarry.六级:UndernocircumstanceswillImarryyou.GRE:Ifyouwerethelastmanintheworld,Iwoulddefinitelyremainsingle.,vivid,simple,.,4,写作技能提升：句子润色HowtobeautifytheAdverbialClauseinWriting,Whilewriting,trytousedifferentformsofverbsandclauses(从句)tomakeyouressaysimple,clear,vividandfullofvarieties.,简明清楚生动多变,.,5,2012广东高考基础写作你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。【写作内容】请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物姓名：AllanStewart国籍：澳大利亚出生日期：1915年3月7日世界纪录：2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。第一个学位：1936年获得第二个学位：医学博士第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕士学位。第四个学位：2012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。,Becausehewasgoodatarranginghisstudytime,hegotpraisefromhisteacher,.,6,学会使用复合句,参考词汇：错别字:wrongly-writtencharacters,要求：1.用状语从句表达表格的原因2.语句间要有连贯性,现象：Therearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudentscompositions.,.,7,2.Theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeverydaythattheyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,1.每天有很多作业做2.没有记住生字。,Theyhavemuchhomeworktodoeveryday.,3.Withsomuchhomeworktodo,theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,1.Becausetheyhavesomuchhomeworktodo,theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,第三步：合并句子,Theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,第一步：拆分成几个简单句,第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句,.,8,HighlightsofAdverbialClausewhilewriting,1.状语从句与分词之间的灵活转换2.高考状语从句中的倒装3.高考状语从句中的省略4.状语从句与其他从句之间的转换5.Someproverbs:,.,9,WhenIthinkofthetriptoShanghai,ImimpressedmostwithMr.Rui.HeismyoralEnglishteacher.（2012广东高考读写任务:老师影响学生的话题),1.状语从句与分词之间的灵活转换请试试改写下面的句子吧！,(改后)ThinkingofthetriptoShanghai,ImimpressedmostwithMr.Rui,myoralEnglishteacher.,.,10,1.AfterIrealizedtheimportanceoflearning,Istudiedevenharder.,Realizingtheimportanceoflearning,Istudiedevenharder.,.,11,2.状语从句与倒装inversion,1）.Iwasaddictedtoonlinegames.AndIwasevenabsentfromschool.Iwas_addictedtoonlinegames_Iwasevenabsentfromschool.,so,that,SoaddictedtoonlinegameswasIthatIwasevenabsentfromschool.,2）.Sheisachild.Sheknowsalot,Althoughsheisachild,sheknowsalot.,Childassheis,sheknowsalot.,当so+adj./adv.+that句型中的so+adj./adv.放在句首时，主句谓语用部分倒装。,当as（尽管）引导让步状语，该从句的表语、状语或动词原形等习惯上要放到从句最前面。,.,12,2009年广东卷英语作文你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况：时间：上周末对象：眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于50(2)人数：世界第一专家解读：(1)原因：很复杂(2)治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视(3)建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动(4)特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容：1采访的时间、对象和主题；2中小学生近视的发生率及人数；3专家解读。,原因很复杂，以致于没有哪一种药物能治愈近视。,Healsopointedthatthecausesforshort-sightednessaresocomplicatedthatnomedicinecancureshort-sightedness.,Healsopointedthatsocomplicatedarethecausesforshort-sightednessthatnomedicinecancureshort-sightedness.,.,13,1.Dontspeakuntilyouarespokento.2.Hewasaswimmerwhenhewasachild.3.Shestoodatthegateasifshewaswaitingforsomeone.4.IllbuyaTVsetifitisnecessary.5.Thoughitiscold,heworeashirt.,（）,（）,（）,（）,（）,3.点击高考状语从句中的省略Ellipsis,.,14,:什么时候可以省略?怎么省略?在含有状语从句的复合句中若从句的主句是it或与主句的主语相同，且在谓语中含有be时，常省略从句的主语和be。,1._(在北京的时候),IpaidavisittotheSummerPalace.2._(除非修理),themachineisofnouse.3._(如果有必要的话),youcanhelpustodosomething.4.Agirlstoodatthegateoftheschoolasif_(跟老师讲话).,When/WhileinBeijing,Unlessrepaired,talkingwithateacher,Ifnecessary,.,15,4.状语从句与其他从句之间的转换,1).Iwontbelievewhathesays.（nomatterwhat状语从句）2).Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(themorethemore),Nomatterwhathesays,Iwontbelieve.,Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.,.,16,1.有志者事竟成。Wheretheresawill,theresaway.2.读万卷书不如行万里路Amillionmilesisbetterthanamillionbooks3.入乡随俗.WheninRomedoastheRomansdo.4.万事开头难Allthingsaredifficultbeforetheyareeasy.,5.只要不灰心，就一定能成功.Aslongasyoudontloseheart,youllsucceed.,5.Usefulproverbs:,.,17,Trytomakeyoursentence,simple,clear,vivid,Afterclasstrytosearchforsuchbeautifulandvividsentencesinyourbooks,OK?,.,18,写作中运用状语从句时的常见错误1.Ididntgiveup.Becausemymotheroftentoldme,wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”2.Sheworkedsohardthatcouldcatchupwithothers.3.Onlywekeepoptimisticcanwesucceed.4.Whenhehesitating,amancameuptohim.,.,19,写作中状语从句的几个常见错误:1.Ididntgiveup.Becausemymotheroftentoldme,wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”2.Sheworkedsohardthatcouldcatchupwithothers.3.Onlywekeepoptimisticcanwesucceed.4.Whenhehesitating,amancameuptohim.,because,she,when,was,1.只有从句，没有主句,2.从句中缺少主语,3.缺少从句的连接词,4.从句中的谓语不完整,.,20,summary：1.先阅读写作内容，将从句剥离出来，弄懂句子意思.2.写作中用状语从句优化句子3.避免使用状语从句时出现的错误.4.研读范文中从句的使用5.适当使用含状从的名言警句6.Practicemakesperfect!,.,21,以下是网上走红的“低碳哥”的基本情况,时间：2011年人物介绍：“低碳哥(Low-carbonBrother)”，用行动宣讲环保概念的年轻人主要做法有：1.捡起废纸，用空白一面写字。2.不开灯看电视，还把电视亮度调到最低（minimum）。3.上班骑自行车，不开车等。,【写作内容】根据以上“低碳哥”的基本情况，写一篇介绍，内容包括：1.“低碳哥”的简要介绍及走红的时间；2.他的主要做法及你的看法。【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。,.,22,Homework,Tocompletetheexercisesontheprintedmaterial.Tocompletethecomposition.,.,23,2012年高考基础写作评分说明：基础写作主要考查考生语言结构的应用能力；能够用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。本试题要求考生根据所提供的信息，使用5个句子表达写作内容所提供的全部内容。命题思想是希望考生在表达这些内容时能够：正确使用动词不定式、分词短语、介词短语等来整合信息。正确使用复合句，比如：定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句等。,.,24,Possibleversion：AyoungmancalledLow-CarbonBrotherbecameahitontheInternetin2011，whosuggestslivingalow-carbonlifewithactions.Healwayspicksupsomewastepaperonthestreet，usingtheblanksidetowritesomethingandgoestoworkbybikeinsteadofdriving.Besides,whileheiswatchingTV,healwaysturnsdownthebrightnesstotheminimumandturnsoffthelight.Somepeoplethinkwhatheisdoingisjustashowbecausenoonecanlivesuchasimplelifewithsomanymoderninventionsaroundus，butasfarasIamconcerned,Istronglysupporthisideaandhisbehavior.Althoughwhatheisdoinghasnohugeeffectonglobalwarming,heatleastcanenjoyahealthylife.,.,25,08年基础写作,背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。1896：第一次成为奥运项目1904：中断1928：中断1932：重回奥运会1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。,Aftershootingwascanceledin1904and1928,itreturnedtotheOlympicsin1932.,Althoughshootingdevelopssteadilynow,itonlyincludes3eventsin1896,while17recently.,.,26,07“谁是你的偶像”调查报告,根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：1调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；2男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异；3“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异；4男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同；5你的偶像及理由。,你的偶像及理由。,Basicwriting,because,.,27,5你的偶像及理由。,Asformyself,LiuWei,anarmlessPianist,ismyidolbecausehenevergivesuphisdreamsandalwaysinsistsonwhatheenjoys.,LiuWeiisoneofthemenfort