第3周作文 劝学

,第三周书面表达Nevergiveuplearning.,Study,Work,书面表达假设你是英语报纸Teens的编辑Collins，读者李华写信告诉你他对高中学校生活的压力和父母整天的唠叨感到很厌烦，打算辍学外出打工，到社会闯荡一下。请你用英语写一份信劝说他放弃这个念头并给出自己的建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文章的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。,Para1.（承接开头）简单评价对（某个观点）表示反对1.Idontthinkitagoodideatodosth2.Ithinkitisunwise（不明智）/unreasonable（不合理）/dangerous/harmfultodosth,Para2.（针对李华的状况）劝说和建议(1)针对学习压力（某事）是很常见的1.ItsnormalforsbtodoItscommonthat+从句Asisoftenthecase,solution：1.easeyourstresswiththehelpofvariousactivities借助各种活动环节压力2.relaxyourselfbydoingsth3.Itsagoodideatoreduce/releaseyourpressurebydoingsth,“父母这么做是有原因”：1.Asanoldsayinggoes,Lovewell,whipwell.俗话说“爱之深，责之切”。2.Thereasonwhytheydosthisthat.3.Theydosthforyourowngoodsolution：municatewithyourparentstoearntheunderstandingfromyourparants和家长沟通，获得父母理解2.youshouldtalkwithyourparentsinsteadofcomplainingthem.你应该和家长交谈，而不是抱怨他们,（3）针对辍学工作“值得注意的是”的表达1.Youshouldlearnthat+从句2.Youshouldbeawarethat+从句3.Itisnoticedthat+从句4.Whatshoulddrawyourattentionisthat+从句评价：1.Youaretooyoungtodosth2.Itsapitythatyoudropoutfromtheschoolatayoungage.小小年纪就辍学是很可惜的。3.Soonerorlateryouwillberegretfulfordroppingoutsoearly.迟早你会为提早辍学感到后悔。4.Onlyifyouareequippedwithrichknowledgecanyoubecapableoffindinganidealjobinthefuture.只有先读好书，将来才能找到好的工作。,回信人称I,you,weYourssincerely,希望（某人）做某事hopetodo,hopethatsb.doessth.expect/wishsb.todo,thatbeconcerned/worriedabout,worryaboutforlackofknowledgestress,feelstressed,Detailsdecideeverything!,观点明确，（连接）逻辑自然,Ithinkitsnotagoodideaforyoutogiveupyourstudyandmakealivingawayfromhome.ItisaverycommonphenomenonthateverystudentistiredofstudyingandfeelsstressedatthemiddleschoollifeAsweknow,knowledgecanchangeoneslife,asasayinggoes,“AllroadsleadtoRome,”theonlythingtodonowistostudywell,whichcouldprepareyouforasatisfactoryjobinthefuture.Therefore,youshouldletyourselfcalmdowntothinkagain.(xiaoping,4),Nowadays,moreandmorestudentsprefermakingalivingawayfromhometostudyingatschool.Ithinkitsbadforstudents.Herecomemysuggestionsonit.Asahighschoolstudent,youshouldrealizeyourowndutytodayistolearnmoreandmoreknowledgeandstudyharderandharder.Inaddition,.Whatsmore,asfarasImconcerned,thereisnodoubtthatlearningtoconsideryourparentsisalsobeneficialtoyou,inwhichyoucanknowyourparentsloveyousomuch.Lastbutnotleast,itsusefultotellyourparentsyourfeelingsandideaandaskthemforsomehelp.(yuye,4),1.承接开头，表同情心,Icanunderstandthepressureofthehighschoolstudywhichmakesustiredsothatweareeagertosleepeveryday.Butthisiswhatwemustdoandeveryonehastoexperienceinordertobeadmittedtoagooduniversity.Itseasiertogetagoodjobifyougraduatefromagooduniversity.(yuesi,5),1.承接开头，表明观点,Itisnotagoodideaanditsdangerousforyoutomakealivingawayfromhome.Asahighschoolstudent,itsnormalthatmanystudentshavemuchstressandfeelveryboredWhatsmore,Therefore,nowthemostimportantthingistostudyhardandtograduatefromagooduniversityinthefuture.(daiwei,5),IknowyouarestressedbecauseofstudyButIpersuadeyounottogiveupstudy.(wufeng,4)Youshouldunderstandthatyourparentsnagtoomucheverydaybecausetheyloveyou.(zixuan,4),2.劝学&建议,Ithinkyouaretooyoungtomakealivingbyyourself.(jianan,4)Ithinkyoushouldknowinthisworldtherearemanyexampleslikeyoubutfewpeoplecanmakealivingawayfromhomesuccessfully.Droppingoutofschooldoesmoreharmthangood.(jinxuan,4)Ithinkitsunnecessarytomakealivingawayfromhome.Havingpressureatschoolisacommonphenomenon.(ziqian,4),Withtimepassingby,moreandmorepeoplebegintoattachgreatimportancetoeducationalbackground.(tonghui,4)Makingalivingawayfromhomeforsuchayounggirllikeyoumeansmuchmorepressureanddifficulty.Justasafamoussayinggoes,lookbeforeyouleap.(jiahong,4),Parentsnaggingisforyourowngood,sotrytounderstandyourparents.(xiaoqi,4)Maybeitsaharddecision,butonlyifyoustudyhard,willyoureffortspayoffoneday.Inordertodecreaseyourpressure,youcantrytolistentothemusicorhaveachatwithyourparents.(zexuan,4),3.结束语,希望我的建议对你有帮助。我相信你能做到。Hopemysuggestionswillbeofsomehelptoyou.Ibelieveyoucanmakeit!(jinger,4),DearLiHua，ThisisCollinsfromTeens.Imsorrytohearfromyouthatyouplantodropoutandfindajobawayfromyourparents.However,Ithinkitunwiseforyoutomakesuchadecision.Therefore,Iwouldliketosharemyopinionswithyou.Firstofall,itisnormalforyoutofacemuchstress.Insteadofusingitasanexcusetodropout,Ithinkyoushouldlearntodealwithitand,ifpossible,turnitintoyourmotivation.Besides,asanoldsayinggoes,lovewell,whipwell.Thereasonwhytheykeeptalkingtoyouisthattheycareaboutyousomuch.Thus,itisstronglyrecommendedthatyoushouldcommunicatewithyourparentstoearntheunderstandingfromyourparents.Asforworking,youshouldbeawarethatonlyifyouareequippedwithrichknowledgewillyoubecapableoffindinganidealjobinthefuture.Inaword,itwouldbeapityifyoudropoutfromtheschoolatayoungage.Ihopemyideawillbeusefultoyou.Yoursincerely,Collins,2.点明身份&目的,Itscommonthatmanyuniversitystudentscantfindajobaftertheyfinishschool.Butasteenagers,thefirstthingweshoulddoisstudy.(xiangqun,5)Asastudent,themostimportantthingistolearnbutnotmakealivingawayfromhome.(jiafang,5)Inmyopinion,finishingyourcourseisthemostimportantdutyatpresent.(yilan,5),3.劝学&建议,Butifyouleaveschool,whatcanyoudo?Youaretooyoungtodoanything.(liting,5)Youaretooyoungtomakealivingawayfromhome.Notonlydoyounothaveenoughexperience,butalsoyoudonthaveenoughknowledgetofacethedifficulty.(yanhong,5)SoYoushouldgetbacktoschooltocontinueyourstudy.Otherwise,youwillfindlifeisverydifficult.(haocheng,5),Sometimes,somestudentsmaybestressedoutbystudy.Butwecantakesomemeasurestorelaxourselvesinsteadofbeingupset.(ziqi,5)Astothepressure,youcanfindsomewayswhicharesuitableforyou,suchaslisteningtothemusic,runningandaskingyourfriendsforhelp.Astotheproblembetweenyouandyourparents,Ihopemysuggestionscanmakeadifference,andhelpyougetridofth