高三英语复习《漫画作文》课件.ppt

Writingbasedonacartoon，byCuiJie， therehavesomecateshistingofcatchrats.ascanbeseenthepicureabove fourcatsarebusyenjoysfishes.threcatsarefoffishwhilethefourthonel stepilead-in.(wrongstructures )、(improper description ) (misinunderstandsningthepicureshows )、(dependonthemselves )，are，eating，enjoying 1.wrongstructures，2.improper description3. misinunderstandstanngwhatthepictureshows，tasks: 1.todealwithproblemsinwritingbasedonarton2. tolearnthebasicstructureofcartoonwriting，stepiianexamplehowcanwewriteacompositionsbb Writing:现在医疗费用在增加，有人因为无法支付高额的医疗费用而必须忍受疾病的痛苦。 人们强烈呼吁政府必须建立有效的医疗保障体制。 请根据下面的图画，以“HealthCare”为主题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中表现的内容，重点阐述这个现象的结果和你的意见。 A.Makeanoutlineofthewriting，1 .漫画内容，Writing:现在医疗费用增加，无法支付高额医疗费用，有人不得不忍受疾病的痛苦。 人们强烈呼吁政府必须建立有效的医疗保障体制。 请根据下面的图画，以“HealthCare”为主题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中表现的内容，重点阐述这个现象的结果和你的意见。2 .现象结果3 .你的意见是，1.Description:1.anoldmanwasinhospitallforhishearttack .3.thebillwith $ 50，000 shocked him . 4.Henearlyfellontothefloor .5.thehighfeewasanotherheartattacktohim .2.Threeweekslater、hepaidhismedicalfeebeforehelefthospital . Themedicalfeesareveryhigh .3.Youropinion(Measures )，2.Phenomenon:Themedicalfeesareveryhigh .Consequences，people : socce people cantafordtheheavymedicalfeesandhavetobearthepainofillness .it wontbebeneficitionthebuilindothebuilingharrmonioussociets 3.your opinion (measures ) government :thegovernmentshouldsetpeffectivedicalsystem .theyshouhldptttttthepenethepatitsinthefirst hospital:wecanseeanoldmanwasinhospitalorhishearttack.threweekslater， hewaskeddtoayismeditalfeehehelefthospital.whnhesawthebill hegotshockedandnearlyfellontothefloor.thehighefeewasanotherheartattattal edicalfeesarehigh.manypeopleleandebttogetmedicalfees.sompeoplecantafordheheavymedicalfees.theyhavetobatepthepathenfillneses.ii rmonoussociety.ithinkthemedicalexpensesshouldberedud.thegonotmentmentsullibuildpanefectivemedicalsystem.thehospitallshoulduthe b.formadaftbyjoiningthesentences， wecanseeanoldmanwasinhospitallforhishearttack.threweekslater hewasaskedtayhismedicalfeebeforehelefthospital.whehnhesawthebill， hegotshockedandnearlyfellontothefloor.thehhighfefehanothehfehefehanothehehefehanhanhehathehehehehanhathe c.polishupyourlanguage _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ hewasaskedtayhismedicalfeebeforehelefthospital.whehnhesawthebill， hewasshockeddanddddddardlystanhisownfeet.thehighefeewasanotherheartacktohim . my version :Asisvividlyshowninthepicture，Themoment socckedwashethathecould，thehighefeewasbeyondwhatouldafford whichwasnodoubletanotherheatrtattacktohim .wasinformedofpaying，hardle Nowadays，themedicalfeesaresohighethatmanypepleareinbttogetmedicalfees.theyhavhetothepaingnoffilesssinthatsomeofthemantafordher which obviously，wontbebeneficialtoourmonoussociety.fromwherereinstand，Iarguethat，firstly， themedicalexpensehouldbereduced.meanwhile itshightimethatanefectivemedicalsystemshouldbebuiltup.in addition thehospiitalshouldput ntsinthefirstplace.loninthiswaycanweliveahappyandcomfortablelife .three paragraphs :1 ) describebethepicture2) interpretitsmean reasons3) giveyouropinionaboutthephenomenon，Summarize:Design Para1Describethepicture， thepictureistralkingabout/showsin the picture wecanseethatasisvividlyshown/portrayed/describe bed/illustrated/conveyed/revealedid Sentencepatterns: para2interpretthepicture themictureshows/indications/implies/describebesthatsintitdesterviblidisikindofcommophenomeonthatth mirrorsa common (social ) phenomenon that，reasons : severalrepossbleberrsonsconstrabutt/areresponsibilityforit.in the first place Then/Inaddition、consequences : itsconsequencescanbesogretthat .Part3Giveyouropinions、 1.fromwhereistand itistimethatstomeeffortivemeasuresshouldbetakentosolvertheproblems.2.asfarasiamconceptnd，/Personally，/in my opid /Frommypointofview，/Onmypart，/ona个人节点3.thrughtheaboveanalysis、I believe4.jugingfromwhathavebeenargudabove、itis、therefore、necessrythantsomeefective 根据以下图画，涂得太窄，看不懂，用中文打句号，语言少，不美，语言少，重涂多，重涂多，漂亮，写得容易，网络时代的孩子们沉迷于网上交流而忽视与父母的沟通写一百五十字左右的短文。StepIIIPractice、Suggestedversion:asisvividlyportrayedinthepictre、 occupiedinchattingtontheinternet aboyrefusestotalkwithhismother.themotherehardconnonthingbuttandbehindtheboy， depressed . itistshexactreflectonoflackofcommunicationbetweenparentsandchildren.severrrreasonscontributetoot.first theintentproveswithaplack ithdifferentpeople inwhiccchaserwareditedtothevitualworldandkeepourdistancesfrompeoplearoundus.besides， pressurrefromstudstudediskitementontheinternet.also parents，busywiththeirwork，sparelittletimestostaywitheircildren，resultinging Suggestedversion:asfarasimconcerned， ermesofchildren westhouldcutbackonthetimewhe