高考英语基础写作---新闻报道.ppt

1.learnabout了解2.betosetfor将前往3.placesofinterest名胜古迹4.anexchangevisit回访5.gathertogether集中6.getcloseto靠近,相关短语,7.releasepressure释放压力8.growuphappily快乐地成长9.accordingto根据10.appreciatepoetry欣赏诗歌11.exchangethoughts交流想法,12.reciteonesworks背诵作品13.attheinvitationof在的邀请下14.beimpressedby被给予深刻印象15.encouragesb.todosth.鼓励某人做某事16.thebest-knowntouristspot最著名的旅游景,1.Duringtheirone-weekstayinFoshan,thestudentsexperiencedthecampuslifeofChinesestudents.在佛山为期一周的逗留中,这些学生们体验了中国学生的校园生活。2.TheBritishstudentswereimpressedbythekindnessofChinesestudents.英国的学生们对中国学生的友好印象深刻。,相关句式,3.AttheinvitationofaBritishschool,38studentsinHuawenMiddleSchoolaretosetforBritainforanexchangevisitnextMarch.在一个英国学校的邀请下,华文中学的38名学生明年三月将启程去英国进行交流访问。,4.Itwasalsosaidthatpoetrycouldhelpthemreleasepressure.据说诗歌还有助于缓解压力。5.Itslikelythatthatfamoussportsstarwillalsorunwiththetorch.很可能那位著名的体育明星也要参加火炬接力。,1.新闻通讯的第一句往往为全文的中心句(topicsentence),因此这个句子中常包含四大元素what(事件),when(时间),where(地点)和who(人物),而在下文则要补充事件的过程和细节,往往包括why(目的或原因)和how(具体过程)等。,2.注意新闻类型题材的一些常用语,如Itisreportedthat.,Asisreported.,Accordingtothereport.等。3.新闻通讯报道在于平实客观的语言,考生不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。,(2008年佛山一模)上周,一批英国学生到达佛山华文中学进行访问交流。假设你是该校通讯员,请根据以下内容给当地一家报社写一篇英文报道。写作内容,例题导写认真审题。新闻报道也是记叙文的一种,但是与日记类型的经历感受又不完全一样。日记类型的文章考生不但把自己的所见所闻描绘出来,还要注意情感的表达,而新闻报道类型的文章需要客观的报道,因此语言方面可以相对平实一点。,句2：(1)感受校园生活：_句3：(2)参观著名景点：_(3)体验当地文化：_,词汇整理翻译或完成下列短语。,learn/knowaboutthelocalculture,句4：(4)洁净的市容,友善的学生,美味的食品：_句5：(5)回访：_,thecleancity,friendlystudentsanddeliciousfood/thecleannessofthecity,kindnessofthestudentsandnicenessoffood(注意并列词组的词性一致),anexchangevisit,难句翻译请用高级结构或优美的句式翻译下列句子。句4：洁净的市容、友善的学生、美味的食品给学生留下了深刻的印象。,TheBritishstudentsweredeeplyimpressedbythecleancity,friendlystudentsanddeliciousfood./WhatexpressedtheBritishstudentsdeeplywasthecleancity,friendlystudentsanddeliciousfood./Thecleancity,friendlystudentsanddeliciousfoodleftadeepimpressionontheBritishstudents.,句5：华文中学38名学生应邀明年三月访问英国。,Inreturn,38studentsinHuawenMiddleSchoolareinvitedtovisitBritainnextMarch./AttheinvitationofaBritishschool,38studentsinHuawenMiddleSchoolaretosetforBritainforanexchangevisitnextMarch.,连句成篇,参考范文HuawenMiddleSchoolinFoshanCityreceivedagroupofstudentsfromBritainlastweek.Duringtheirone-weekstayinFoshan,thestudentsexperiencedthecampuslifeofChinesestudents.,TheyalsovisitedsomeplacesofinterestinFoshanandlearnedaboutthelocalculture.TheBritishstudentswereimpressedbythekindnessofChinesestudents,cleannessofthecityandnicenessoffood.AttheinvitationofaBritishschool,38studentsinHuawenMiddleSchoolaretosetforBritainforanexchangevisitnextMarch.,假设为了让青少年更了解诗歌,上个周末广州市教育局在你校举办了一场诗歌大赛。假设你是学校报社的通讯员,为这个活动写一篇报道。,写作内容,写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。,Inordertohelpteenagerslearnmoreandappreciatepoetry,apoetrycontestwasheldintheNo.1HighSchoollastSunday,December11th,2011.200seniorstudentsfromdifferenthighschoolsalloverthecitygatheredtogether,recitingtheirworksandexchangingthoughts.,Manycompetitorssaidthattheyweregettingclosetopoemsthroughthiscompetition.Itwasalsosaidthatpoetrycouldhelpthemreleasepressureandgrowuphappily.Theheadmasterencouragedustothinklikeapoet,thatis,besensitiveandsinceretowardstheworld.,精华点评,活动报道的第一句是开门见山地介绍活动的情况：活动的时间、地点、目的和内容都包含在里面。第二句包含了参与人数与比赛详情,范文用了伴随状语recitingtheirworksandexchangingthoughts连接了这两个内容。第三句和第四句都是陈述比赛者的感受,因此范文为了显示句子多样性,用了两个不同的句型:Manycompetitorssaidthat.(陈述句,主动语态)和Itwasalsosaidthat.(形式主语,被动语态)。,假设你是英文早报的兼职小记者,伦敦组委会公布了奥运火炬传递的路线,你将为这一事件进行报道,以下是报道的内容。,写作内容,参考词汇：伦敦奥组委员theLondonOrganizingCommitteeoftheOlympicGames火炬传递TorchRelay温德米尔LakeWindermere,Asisreported,theLondonOrganizingCommitteeoftheOlympicGamesreleasedtherouteoftheLondon2010OlympicTorchRelayonNovember7.TheOlympicTorchwillvisitsomeofBritainsbest-knowntouristspots,covering1,000villages,townsandcitiesacrossthecountryandreachingmorethan95%ofBritains62millionpopulation.,The70-daytorchrelaywillbecarriedinasteamboatacrossLakeWindermere,onarowboatontheThames,andonhorsebackelsewhere.AccordingtotheCommittee,mostofthe8,000torchbearerswillbeordinarymembersofthepublic,butitslikelythatfamoussportsstarslikeDavidBeckhamwillalsorunwiththetorch.,精华点评,新闻报道的关键在于客观，通俗易懂。考生写作的时候不用考虑花哨的词汇,但是要注意新闻文体的常用语，如本文用到的Asisreported.,Accordingto.等。本文的另一个写作难点就是写作内容较多,考生要运用各种技巧进行信息点合并融合,如范文通过现在分词作伴