浙江新高考作文公开课概要写作新闻文体

1、Summary Writing,for news reports,英语组,郑志鹏,Structure,of a news report,女孩睡前戴耳机听歌，第二天却再也没能醒过来,Gabrielle Samuels与男友通完电话后，躺在床上用,耳机听音乐，但第二天，家人发现Gabrielle,Event in,Samuels一直迟迟没有起床,detail,_,推开她的房间门，就闻到一股焦味，家人们看到,Gabrielle Samuels奄奄一息的躺在床上。她全身都,是血迹和烧焦的痕迹，不知道经历了什么,Reason,_ of the,等警方赶到，Gabrielle Samuels已经死亡。调,

2、event,查结果显示，她当晚听音乐时手机同时在充电，充电,器接头短路，强大电流瞬间从耳机灌入女孩头部,Event in,general,你有经常戴耳机听歌的习惯吗？19岁女孩,Retell the event in general,Structure,Retell the event in detail,Conclude the reason/influence,of the event,Retell the event in general,Structure,Retell the event in detail,Conclude the reason/influence,of the e

3、vent,According to the structure above,please find out what each paragraph,is about,Structure,Para. 1,The influence of the story,Para. 2,Para. 3,The result of the story,General description,The process of the,story in detail,Para. 4,Structure,Para. 1,General description,The process of the,story in det

4、ail,Para. 2,Para. 3,The result of the story,The influence of the story,Para. 4,Structure,of the summary writing,Sentence,1,Sentence 2,General description,The process of the,story in detail,Sentence 3,Sentence 4,The result of the story,The influence of the story,How to use one,Sentence,to tell a stor

5、y,What should we write in the,Sentence,consist of,What does,a,story,讲故事,从前,有座山,讲故事,从前,有座山,山上,有座庙,庙里,有,个,和尚,他每天都下山,挑水喝,讲故事,从前,有座山,山上,有座庙,庙里,有,个,和尚,他每天都下山,挑水喝,What do these words tell you in the,story,What do these words tell you in the,story,从前,山上,庙里,when,where,where,和尚,挑水喝,who,what,Elements,of,story

6、,Which two are the most,important,w,hen,w,here,w,ho,w,hat,w,hy,h,ow,w,hen,w,here,Whats the use of,these elements to,our writing,w,ho,w,hat,w,hy,h,ow,Whats the use of these elements to our,writing,从前,有座山,山上,有座庙,庙里,有,个,和尚,他每天都下山,挑水喝,Whats the use of these elements to our,writing,从前,山上,庙里,和尚,挑水喝,They h

7、elp us tell the story,in short,Pick proper elements to write a,sentence for each paragraph,w,hen,w,here,w,hy,w,ho,h,ow,w,hat,Pick proper elements to write a,sentence for each paragraph,Para. 1,Para. 2,Para. 3,Para. 4,Pick proper elements to write a,sentence for each paragraph,Para. 1,Recently, a wil

8、d fish restaurant in,Harbin faced being shut down,and a large fine,Para. 2,Para. 3,Para. 4,Pick proper elements to write a,sentence for each paragraph,Para. 2,A,customer,named,Chen,Yan,exposed,his,being,overcharged,and,the,violent,treatment,of,the,restaurant,to,the,public,Para. 1,Para. 3,Para. 4,Pic

9、k proper elements to write a,sentence for each paragraph,Para. 3,The,restaurant,as,well,as,some,relevant,government,departments,received,their,punishment,Para. 1,Para. 2,Para. 4,Pick proper elements to write a,sentence for each paragraph,Similar,cases,happened,Para. 4,elsewhere,and,the,government,wi

10、ll,punish,these,actions,Para. 1,Para. 2,Para. 3,Recently, a wild fish restaurant in Harbin faced being,shut down and a large fine,A,customer,named,Chen,Yan,exposed,his,being,overcharged,and,the,violent,treatment,of,the,restaurant,Can we simply put sentences,to,the,public,together into a whole passag

11、e,The,restaurant,as,well,as,some,relevant,government,departments,received,their,punishment,Similar,cases,happened,elsewhere,government,will,punish,these,actions,and,the,Polish,your,writing,Polish,your,writing,1. Use connective words,2. Use special sentences,1. Connective Words,关联词,关联词精华,段落间逻辑,句子间逻辑,

12、关联词精华,起,段落间逻辑,承,转,first,besides, meanwhile,whereas, while,合,句子间逻辑,in summary,关联词精华,对比,句子间逻辑,让步,因果,therefore, thereby doing,in contrast,while, despite,目的,举例,so as to,for instance,段落间逻辑,Recently, a wild fish restaurant in Harbin faced being,shut down and a large fine,A,customer,named,Chen,Yan,exposed,

13、his,being,overcharged,and,the,violent,treatment,of,the,restaurant,to,the,public,Therefore,_,the,restaurant,as,well,as,some,relevant,government,departments,received,their,punishment,Besides,similar,cases,happened,elsewhere,and,_,the,government,will,punish,these,actions,2. Special sentences,2. Special

14、 sentences,1) 倒装句,Never will/can/should sb do sth,2,非限制性定语从句,主句, which,2. Special sentences,1,倒装句,Never will/can/should sb do sth,解释：某人绝不会,能,应做某事,举一反三：怎么用该句型写,某人一定要做某事,Never will/can/should sb,stop/ignore,doing sth,2. Special sentences,1) 倒装句,Never will/can/should sb do sth,Never will/can/should sb

15、stop/ignore,doing sth,总结,适合作为文章的,_,句,A,总起,B,总结,C,过渡,实战练习：将第四段主旨句改成倒装句,Besides,similar,cases,happened,elsewhere,and,_,the,government,will,punish,these,actions,Besides,similar,cases,happened,elsewhere,and,never,will,the,government,stop,punishing,these,_,actions,2. Special sentences,2,非限制性定语从句,主句, whic

16、h,e.g,Harry Potter,is an interesting book,which we all know,which指,2. Special sentences,2) 非限制性定语从句,主句, which,e.g,Harry Potter,is an interesting book,which we all know,前一个句子里的事件与第二,句有逻辑关联，就可以用该,句型合成长句,2. Special sentences,2,非限制性定语从句,主句, which,因果,He got awarded. He felt proud,which made him proud,改写,

17、_,目的,He hugged her. He wanted to show love,which was to show his love,改写,_,实战练习：将第二、三段主旨句合成长句,A,customer,named,Chen,Yan,exposed,his,being,overcharged,and,the,violent,treatment,of,the,restaurant,to,the,public,Therefore,_,the,restaurant,as,well,as,some,relevant,government,departments,received,their,pu

18、nishment,提示：两段之间是什么逻,辑关系,A,customer,named,Chen,Yan,exposed,his,being,overcharged,and,the,violent,treatment,of,the,restaurant,to,the,public,Therefore,_,the,restaurant,as,well,as,some,relevant,government,departments,received,their,punishment,A,customer,named,Chen,Yan,exposed,his,being,overcharged,and,the,violent,treatment,of,the,restaurant,to,the,public,which,led,to,punishment,on,the,restaurant,and,some,relevant,government,departments,实战练习：将第二、三段主旨句合成长句,Final version of t