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1、 建议信是就某事向收信人提出写信人的建议和忠告。建议信有可能是写给个人、组织或机构，信的内容要包括写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等依次陈述建议，具体为： 第一段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。 第二段：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建

2、议。 第三段：对提出的建议进行总结。要注意有礼貌，使读者容易接受。句首常用语：I am writing to express my views concerningYou have asked for my advice aboutand I will try to make some suggestions.表达“建议”常用语：I think the most suitablefor you isI would like to suggest thatYoud better/Its better toAs far as I am concerned/In my opinionFor one

3、thing, for anotherIf I were you, I wouldIt seems to me that you could句尾常用语：I think it would be more beneficial if you couldI believe you will take my advice into account.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this re

4、gard.I will be ready for further discussing this matter into details. （陕西高考）假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。 Im the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing v

5、ery well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?写作要点：1.表明自己的看法；2.陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）；3.提出至少两条建议。要求：1.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）；2.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；3.书写需清晰、工整。Hi， Tiger Mom， What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is tha

6、t it is not quite right for you to do so. Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school

7、have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically. So I suggest that you

8、 take your friendsadvice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do. 行文逻辑：直接提出观点从两方面解释原因给出建议。较好地使用了连接词，如：Furthermore， More importantly等。词汇短语：运用了较高难度的词汇和短语。如：evaluating，university a

9、dmission， development in wisdom， never be ignored， turned out not to be, by no means等。句式句法：运用了多样化的句式结构。如：主语从句What puzzles you is actually a puzzle；表语从句My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so./The reason is often that the pressure from their；宾语从句So I suggest that you take your friendsa

10、dvice；状语从句Although high grades are an important factor/as they were expected.以及there be句型There are many examples around us.等。 阅读下面这封中学生来信（摘自 China Daily 21 Century）。Dear Editor， I am a new student at Haining Hongda Senior High School. My home is far from Haining, so I must live at school. This is th

11、e first time for me to get away from my parents. I feel very sad. When I left home, I couldnt help tearing myself away from them. I do not want to be alone at school, and I am a shy girl. I have been crying in bed at night these days. I want to stay at home forever. I miss my parents very much. Coul

12、d you tell me what to do? Your early reply is expected. Regards, Amy 请根据以上内容，写一封回信（信的开头和结尾已为你写好。词数100左右）。回信应包括如下要点：1鼓励Amy坚定求学信心，志存高远，四海为家；2就Amy的目前状况，提两到三个建议。Dear Amy， Thank you for your letter. I am so glad to have a talk about your present situation with you. Wish you happy every day. Faithfully yo

13、urs， 【参考范文】【参考范文】Dear Amy， Thank you for your letter. I am so glad to have a talk about your present situation with you. People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment. You cannot live with your parents forever. I

14、think you should realize that present separation will help your academic development and your improvement of personal ability. You need to make friends on your school campus, sharing ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring