作文写得好的诀窍：娴熟使用无灵主语句

1、作文写得好的诀窍：娴熟使用无灵主语句“无灵主语”(inan imatesubject)指的是没有生命的事物充当主语，包括物品，抽象概念，情感，时间，地点等。很多同学的作文读来甚是乏味，其中一个重要的原因，就在在写作中几乎从头到尾都是以“I”为主语的句子，缺乏变化。下面一个是网课期间一个同学让老师改读后续写，收到的建议中其中一点就是改变主语，虽然当时没有提出使用“无灵主语”句(没有必要用 专业术语，哈哈)，但给出的一系列建议中：The sense of resp on sibility drove me to.The experie nee in the hospital en abled me

2、 to.Seconds count in such an emergencyso my ear headed to thespot like an arrow.这些其实都是无灵主语句，用来增加主语的多样性，让表达更生动。无灵主语句不仅适合读后续写，在概要写作用的运用就更普遍了。比如：Forbidding paper in the office forces information to be 100% digital.Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better.The decli ne of rote l

3、ear ning has bee n quicke ned by tech no logy.2Too much scree n time affects kids' in tellige nee.除了概要写作、读后续写，再来看看无灵主语句在应用文中是怎么使用的？My past/previous experie nee as a volun teer in the local hospitalwill quality me for the job.My proficiency and fluency in spokenEnglishwill allow me tocom muni cat

4、e with foreig n visitors without any difficulty.Your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.Youratte ndan ce/participatio nwill surely add color to ourfestival/activity.下面的例子，每个都是好句子哦，学会运用到你的写作中，肯定能为你的作文增色不少呢赶紧背起来英厝无灵主谄甸-.主语绘情感狀总的抽象名词应扌叢帕：creep, strikeh seizeh dawn, catch, worm intoh grip, enter, r

5、egister,overcome, lake possession of, surround, give way lo. desert, pass, tear 刈1 Fear gripped the village.个 H !上宠;"右总怖之中2、Courage deserted him.他没m3 His presence of mind deserted him.他火.i f 沉着The earthquake struck the village two minutes 钊go,5. Anew dignity cneptinto his stp阳他走起賂 轧 4、训爪觉沛 f 也严

6、"6. Anxiety tore him into pieces.他焦 j£ 万阳肠寸斷.7. By now opLimism had given way to doubt.现在.乐观变成 j' N- bt -B. Afiger choked my words.我*旳说彳：氏订：，9. Astonishment deprived me of my power of speech, fit Si M 討遊 吒出 活 电310. Neil her sorrow nor reqjet fol lowed mj( passionate outburst我这样发作-毗畑励議员

7、水印11 A chill of horror suddenly swept over him.感钊 忖圧而栗12. Despair seized him at the thought of her setting out alone to renew the weary quesi for work想屈恤一6人出左希新建上找匸作的艰辛路途，他応得万念枫尿.13, Anger and bitterness had preyed upon me wntinually for weeks and a deep languor had succeeded this passiorate struggl

8、e.几个星期以我瓦咒又恨.感到非常苦恼这种感怙上的激励6争过去之 后*我感到浑m二主语是具有勒词意味的宕词,谓谓选择如fill. give, make等诃j| .1. The si£|ht of tM desolation fined me with foriorriftess-百到这孤寂的獄霖 雀右中SJ是凄孤2. The sight of his father-in-law made Fanjin aFraid that he was in for anothercuring.曙tit"汁：雷3 Only the tHought of his mcithgr gave

9、him the strength to qo on chin* it 只右也到每呆.他彳彳I力量继埃工榨*4 Tn& discovery of a knife in hiE passession l«nds Lo all a suspension of hist>eing ihe murder5 Aten miimtes' walk brought us to the hotel.我T 卷行分酋就到:'fittl'f.6 Ten years of hard *orkchanged bergreaMy.十年FJ *助労叨f史她丸火地变祥了.7 br

10、oughl him new confidence and alrno&t a feolirg of security. 休息轡 也充満了新的自他 儿仆了-种相当安至的感诡。8 S eep didn't 丫区止 Rairitbrd although tfie $i ence of a dead *v(xid on the iirngte.尽骨丛林卑虎死-股的.：憎那+占愿斯福穗还是平能入卑.丄-.卅讲廿词忙冷slip, lend, elude, escape stump 罟皿打1 Hs name escaped/ evaded/ Failed me at the Ticment.

11、unt. j er m号时找财记起他九云"非会员水印2. The question eiudssstumps me. U晟问# 护科阳i： *.3 T he mistake slips my attention.扌戈越仃汪怠到达 钻 乂4. Hrfi hir4 omped me. ftift有注应到施的舗 必5. The santenca eludes me我理解阳了这牛旬子曲.谓讥动诃如辛ask. admit, allo Fai pass 等谒11. The scenery baffles/denies description.唯CjL扌曲述2- Such色chanc? dwW m

12、e.我注有射到这样i亍机会.3. The matter asks immediate attention, iifl 事需”上即处理匸4. The exigencies of the matter admirted no alternative. 11 匕学 壮二【 别 尤他、决5. Reproacii spared him not, even in hrs grave.即便址住他死常*人们也區在谴渕他.6- Time fails me to finish the topic, ftttt 仃时丽把这-話魁说 jl匚7. The Litle of the book invited spells

13、J ineenes the readers' interest.五”主语申的名词或名词化站构晨示駅因*方式、目掠,IRi許动啊使叶使产 牛变化的诃汇.A：便 X 去(deprive, cost, rob, bereave. disarm, preverd, diminish)：便财加 (add. embolden, brighten, win)； fit dtsable, incapacitate disqualify)：'.enable, empower, qualify)：恆他& (save, exone rale1 Two bowls of wine tx)lst

14、ered up his courage, making him lose his scruplesand start his usuaJ rampaging帛户械伙人局不过.只那连斟两毓喝门壮 壮将平日的凶怒样产拿出来*2. My capacity for hard work saved me from early dismissal.找翌不是能干靦话，9就戡解雇了。3. His embezzlement leads to his imprisonment.4. His addition completed the list.耙他加上以后*名唯就完备T ,5. His adventurous

15、explcils soon won him notoriety.他作战剪敢屋遂战功、很快就声名延扬6. Successive exertion chipped a few Bounds off him.wwvvTJyuiHu COrt)他川一直职力小了好儿除n汀B:怩5 .状.£?-(keep. make, hoid)1. The old and diiap对冊ed house in the deserted hne made a dismal picture.膺r位丁-荒废的小越e(破败陈in -片谨凉”2 Loneliness he Id the immigrants toget

16、her and poverty kept them down.寂便得移民们聚集在-起*使盘困如使他们带况毎况愈F3. The want of his family had kept hi m Iron schooL and he seemed to feel the less.他因赫健益困ini辍学,他槪乎也st觉到这 ffiAr.C:过 *'/、，壮盒变化更划E f lhrowt get bringh lemper. show, send >1 The lconic nature of Washington note to Conway had thrown them all

17、in confusion.华盛顿给除威的短偽言简童体使他们陷入一片慌乱之中2, An early start will get you there at noon,儒早点tfl 发的帝 中午就能到*3 A careful comparison will show there is no resemblance between the two in nature.仔細比g-T就令城现两着在本质上没有4. A few steps across the lawn brought me to a large, splendid hotel沿着草地走卜JUb找誠来到一个豪华的大宾馆前.5 Ten day

18、s would disband his corps and leave him 1400 men.I大以甘*他的军队就；H刖忆解他也就只F 1400人了。A-将时间"赴所作为主语.谓语功诃用(便看見” -(ft!) 9f见1 That chilly aHemoon witnessed him trudging in the snow.2 Thus the gathering dark often finds me hastening home in a hurrying crowd.3 Whether it rains or snows, windy or foggy, it is

19、the longing to 曲 home that quickens rny steps4 Dusk found the child trying in the street5- Dawn found him well along the road.东方破晓的时配*他早己经上路了.6 Beijing witnesses great changes 警ince the preparation of Olympic Games七.表示地点或歳的的名词k The town boasts a曲创血11吕愉禹占快工制咀狒 人人以此口氯2 Beijing first saw theing of ftvt

20、 star red flag in Tian anmen Square新用fTJH忤艷花北乳大安门广场匕升起"3 Shanghai witnessed the birth of the Chinese Communist Party 中国共产党在上海成辽4 Rome witnessed many great historic events.件扑马发生过许墓載k厉史事件备八.主语的名词1, A hush fell upon the assennbly 丸场一 H 寂悴.2, The softness of the earth gave him an idea.睛占松软的泥h牛主惫油然而

21、生一3 A new spirit will dominats the organization with the People's Re public ofChina. BE着中半人艮共和国的毎加.迖亍组駅的常冲面菽将頤熔一新4. The sight and sound cf our Jet planes Hllad me vuith special longing6fiMflcIfl的啞气氏E叽听见開降的飞机曲专我持何枠打t.阳人手法1. Smile crumpled h s face. ：, < 得一腔皱£S2. Pork has priced ibelf out of hisdtsh. fS 期丈贵,仙1M、迅3. This las&o