专题4.7.1读后续写题型解读和技巧点拨(解析版)_1

1、4.7.1读后续写新题型跟踪练习A阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake_ in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry

2、that she said to Tom , "I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp " awdalked away.With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, f

3、ar beyond, a snow-capped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost."Tom " she cried. !" HelpNo reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall,

4、 Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling（ 滴落）somewhere at a distanc

5、e. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,_ she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way

6、carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they

7、 came back again.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 :But the helicopter didn ' t come back again, and the day became darker.Paragraph 2 :Jane woke up at the daybreak.写作指导步骤1概括已知信息：标明核心词、核心句，梳理语篇内容的推进方向。故事主线：驱车野营生嫌隙，迷失山林心焚急；

8、挨饿恐惧度长夜，两架飞机失机会。已知线索：吵架一一出走一一迷路一一失联一一自救一一思念一一寻路一一直升机一一飞离步骤2按人物、环境、情节动词等分类划线词。KindsUnderlined key words and phrasesCharacterJane, TomActionwalked, climbedPlacelake, streamConcrete Thingshelicopter, yellow blouseAbstractTo her great joy, at a distance步骤3紧扣语境构思情节，分析：1 .据第一段开头 “ darke何知，。2 .据第二段开头 “woke

9、 up可知，。3 .第二段情节可能： 。可续写线索：失望？坚信？曲折？直升机？Tom?自救？获救？话题激活词汇：环境：forest, stream, rock, berry, valley, steep, cave, lake, waterfall（人口、环境与自然 ）困难： hunger, starve, thirsty, injure , broken, blood , panic, shelter, survive（survival）, suffer, cold , severe（天气与自然灾害）活动： walk, climb , fall , crawl, taste, attempt

10、, struggle to one ' s, femake one' way to, pick up（人体与动作）情绪：to one ' s great joy, break down救援：rescue team, doctor, search for, spot（天气与自然灾害 ）意志品质：calm, courage, will（性格与行为特征）评价： amazing, make it步骤4初稿（分析原文写作风格，特殊语法结构有时间状语从句、结果状语从句、条件状语从句、宾语从句、现在分词作状语、直接引语、虚拟语气、倒装、疑问句、感叹句和介词短语等）。步骤5核查字数、下

11、划线标明原文给出的5个以上关键词语、连接词、标点、语法错误等。One possible version :Paragraph 1 :But the helicopter didn ' t come back again, and the day becamJdnrkwras so tired, hungry, and extremely frightened. She thought to herself , “If only I had not quarreled with Tom. Where is Tom? He must have made the emergency call

12、. What indeed is enough courage. If I continue my spirits tomorrow, I will be likely to guide the helicopter . " Lying beside thestream,she fell asleep very soon. Suddenly, she heard the shouts of tigers, which made her scared to death. After she held her breath for a few minutes, everything wa

13、s quiet again. In the terrible darkness, she slept again. Paragraph 2 :Jane woke up at the daybreak. She caught sight of a fisherman at_a_distance, with whose help she climbed to an open area.To her great joy, a helicopter flew overhead just at that moment. The fisherman helped flag her yellow blous

14、e wildly. This did catch the rescuers' attention! Jane was rescued.Seeing Tom, she told him how much she missed him. Never would they be away from each other. Tom gave her the warmest and longest hug she had ever received. People around smiled with satisfaction.B阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。On

15、a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled（ 骑行）along alone, he thoug

16、ht fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him.“旭adoghat' he thoiibjht. But whenhe looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnwotfaquogkay catcun a up with him.Mac' s heaijtjmp

17、ed. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac' s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. Buta minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac' s bike, tearing ope

18、n hisHe fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（ 追赶）.Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars_but was careful not to slow down.He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he' d be easily caugh

19、t up and thwolf ' s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn' t thinkof it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog

20、 running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请

21、用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 :The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2 :A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.【One possible version :Paragraph 1 :The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to give help. But with the bare hands, th

22、ey didn' t dare to fig/ho WiHhotwever, they still approached to the wolfbravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, shouting loudly at Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf. That reached deadlock. Paragraph 2 :

23、A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Mac friend s also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the

24、 knives, even the guns towards the wolf. Just at that time, the wolf might feel the threats from the people, starting to withdraw. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.C阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。From the first day he entered my classroom, Willard P. Frank existed in his

25、 own world, shutting out his classmates and me. My attempts at building a friendly relationship with him were met with complete indifference. I could see that his classmates fared no better. Willard was strictly a loner who seemed to have no desire or need to break his silence.Shortly after the Than

26、ksgiving holiday, we received word of the annual Christmas collection of money for the less fortunate people in our school district.“Christmas is a season of giving, " I told my students. " There are a few students in the school who might not have a happy holiday season. By contributing to

27、 our Christmas collection, you will help buy food, clothing and toys for these need y people. We will start the collection tomorrow.”When I called for the contributions the next day, I discovered that almost everyone had forgotten except for Willard P. Frank. The boy dug deep into his pants pockets

28、as he walked slowly to my desk. Carefully, he dropped two quarters into the small container.I don ' t need milk for luncK hmumbled. For a moment, just a moment, he smiled. Then he turned and walked back to his desk.That night, after school, I took our few contributions to the school principal. I

29、 couldn the incident that had taken place.“I may be wrong, but I believe Willard might be getting ready to become a part of the world around him , " I told the principal."Yes. " he nodded. " And we might do well to haveihima bit of his world with us. I just received a list of the

30、 poor families in our school who most need help through the Christmas collection. Here, take a look at it. ”As I gazed down to read, I discovered Willard P. Frank and his family were the top names on the list. Seeing this, I decided to do something for him .注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关

31、键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 :On that Sunday, I paid a visit to Willard' s family.Paragraph 2:The next day, I had a special class for Willard.【One possible version :Paragraph 1 :On that Sunday, I paid a visit to Willard. On ensefamgilyis house, I was surprise

32、d to find abarely empty room with only a broken bed and a dirty second hand sofa. Willard told me that his mother died a few years ago and that his father was missed, leaving him to live with a sick grandma. When asked why he had given the two quarters, Willard mumbled, “ There are people poorer tha

33、n me, so I just want to do some help by contributing my milk money. " Hearing his words, I couldn' t help bursting into tears. Ithought I should help him break his silence. Paragraph 2 :The next day, I had a special class for Willard. I shared his story with the whole class and said "

34、Now, on behalf of the people in need, I should say thank you Willard, you are great ! ” . After a silence, all the students clapped, saying “ Wiard, you are great! Willard, you are great ! ” and Theywalked slowly to him and hugged him tightly. A friend relationship was built and Willard silen ceswas

35、 broken by a smile on his face.D阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。It was 8 a . m. Kathy, a 25- year-old nurse, had just finished a 12- hour night shifts at a hospital. Shewas tired, but glad to be sailing along highway to where she lived. Although the local government had posted a snow alert（预警）,the cal

36、m grey sky convinced Kathy the drive would be safe. figured I "I ' d be in bed in an hour, " she says.Snow began when she was halfway home. Listening to the radio, Kathy learned the highway was closed because a tractor had slid off the road. She texted some friends and her mom, and tri

37、ed not to sleep as she waited.After a couple of hours, however, conditions worsened. Strong winds began rocking Kathycouldn ' t saeything outside, and snow was drifting up her doors. It was, she says, “ a total whiteout and rows of cars and trucks. ”Late in the afternoon a police officer came an

38、d asked if she was in any difficulty. She said she wasfine. She asked the police officer if there was any way to get past the trucks. " No, ma ' ,am he answered.“You' re not going anywhere. ”Once as it got dark, Kathy began to worry. She texted his brother Cris, telling him to drive sno

39、wmobiling buddy（ 雪地汽车 ）to get to the highway and find her.As Cris rode slowly alongside the rows of cars and trucks, people would roll down their windows and ask for help. "I was the first person they ' d seen in six hours. explainedehewas picking up his sister.He told them, “ Nobody '

40、s coming and I can ' t take you. ”Near 10 p . m. Cris reached Kathy. He directed Kathy to pull her car onto the shoulder and asked her to get into his snowmobiling buddy.As they headed for home, the fun started. About five kilometres into the journey, Cris made a mistake.What he thought was a sh

41、allow ditch（ 浅沟）turned out to be a deep trough（水槽）.Instead of coming out the other side, they just kept going down. They were trapped. And feathery snow was over their heads.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 :At that moment, t

42、hey had to take action and get out.Paragraph 2 :When Kathy arrived at her home, her mother was waiting for her.【One possible version Paragraph 1 :At that moment, they had to take action and get out. They shouted at the top of their voice, but no one could hear them. They began to worry and were conv

43、inced they had to stay in their snowmobiling buddy for the night. Suddenly, a good idea occurred to Kathy. She took off one of her clothes and burned it. Seeing the fire, people ran over and managed to pull her car out with all their efforts, making Cris ashamed for his refusal to others.Paragraph 2

44、 :When Kathy arrived at her home, her mother was waiting for her. She asked Kathy what had happened. Kathy explained, “ made a terrible mistake. But for others help, I couldn ' have been home for the night. " When asked what she would do when someone haodifficulty, Kathy answered immediatel

45、y that she would do anything to help others because todaytur nedexperieonbe a great lesson for her.E阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。To be honest, sometimes, I hate it when I start thinking about money because it brings me down anddrives me sad. When I was younger, I always wondered why money was so im

46、portant. There wasn' t anything I needed. It ' s good to be a kid, since he or she doesnresponHvbiloiesoiButaas）uteveryone get older, of course that changes. I work almost every day, but it' s still not enough. That'discouraging it ' s never enough.Right now I have to sacrifice（

47、牺牲）the money I make. I put my school on hold so that I can pay formy girlfriend ' s school fee and everything else. I' m very supportive in everything I do, and she is also versupportive. We warm each other up. Hoping she really gets everything right, because we only have each other. I find

48、that hope is my inspiration and that everything will work out however hard it gets. Even though I find that life is hard, it never stops me from helping others, especially those who are less fortunate. While I might be going through hard times myself, there are those out there who could be going thr

49、ough even harder times.Last night, on my way home I stopped by to buy some burgers in a fast food restaurant. A homelessman approached me and asked,“Do you have any bottles lying around? ” I knew he would recycle themchange? ” I smiled and said, “ Sorry, I canfor a few cents, but I didn' t have

50、anySorayd I don ' t. " And again, he adkedyou spare somet. ” Hepwatevere smiled back and said , “ OKthankt have anything, he wasnstolod spirits. Just from the way he spoke, Iyou. " Even though he didn could tell he was fine.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开

51、头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 :I went in and ate my meal, but in my head I wondered if the homeless man was hungry.Paragraph 2:No matter how hard life is, there are always ways to handle it.【One possible version :Paragraph 1:I went in and ate my meal, but in my head I wondered if the

52、 homeless man was hungry. After I finished my meal I decided to order another one for him. I didn' t know if he wasughltaround, but Imy helping would warm him up. They handed me the hot chocolate first and as I waited for my burger, I noticed the homeless man standing beside me. I asked, “ Are y

53、ou hungry? This hot chocolate is for you and there ' s a burger coming up for you too.politelyle repTednK you. That ' s very kind of you. ”Paragraph 2:No matter how hard life is, there are always ways to handle it. And itmonesf not always throughthrough love. If you love someone, you will he

54、lp him and give him what he needs. The love you give today might be forgotten tomorrow. But it doesn' t matter. Love everybody because that' s the greatest 1can give and it is the start of your life trip.F阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。It was a warm and sunny morning at the Central Park Zoo.

55、Abigail and her classmates were abuzz with excitement as their school bus entered the zoo park lot. Today, Abigail' s class was going on a fi(to the zoo to learn more about the animals and their natural habitats.“Beforeyou leave the bus, please make sure you have your buddy! ” Mrs. Brown announc

56、ed. To make sure no one got lost in the zoo, each student had a buddy (companion/friend). Abigail' s buddynamed Derrick. Derrick loves animals and was also excited to go to the zoo. But sometimes, Derrick does not follow the rules and gets in trouble. Abigail hoped that today, Derrick would foll

57、ow the rules so they would not get in trouble.While the rest of the students got off the bus, Abigail and Derrick quickly ran off to explore. They found the exhibits for many different kinds of animals and learned a lot about their natural habitats. They saw the elephants playing and they saw giraff

58、es eating. They saw the polar bears sleeping and the monkeys leaping. Abigail asked Derrick :“Derrick, what is your favorite animal ?"11 think I like chimpanzees best. They have a 10t of energy, just like me! What animal do you like, Abigail ?"11 love polar bears! I think their lifestyle i

59、n the Arctic is very interesting.”A few hours later, Abigail and Derrick started to feel hungry. They made their way back to the zoo entrance to eat lunch at the Rainforest Cafe. The Rainforest Cafe is both Abigail and Derrick 'favorite restaurant because there is an aquarium inside. The restaurant is also famous for its chocolate cake, which Abigail ordered for dessert after they had finished their lunch.As Abigail was finishing her cake, Derri