高考英语二轮复习读后续写深度解读(六)

1、2021届高考英语二轮复习读后续写深度解读（六）2021届高考英语读后续写深度解读（六）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Lost, Injured, and ColdThree days earlier, I was on a guided group horseback journey through the Montana backcountry. After we pitched camp in the morning , I decided to go on a solo trail run。 I picked an 8-milecircle on anot

2、her guy' s map and showed him my intended route so he would know where I was headed。 Then I packed a bag with snacks and water and planned to be back by mid-afternoon。I set off under a clear sky, but after about 1.5 miles , dark clouds rolled in. Burnt , fallen trees from a wildfire were coverin

3、g the trail。 It disappeared under the debris（残骸）and Ilost track of it 。 I began to feel disappointed; everything felt much more remote than I had expected 。 As I considered backtracking, it started to rain, so I hid under a tree to stay dry。Daylight diminished and the temperature dropped。 I was wear

4、ing only running shorts and aT shirt-no match for an August night in Montana at nearly 6, 000 feet. I held my backpack against my chest , put my face in the opening, and sealed the flap around the edge of my cap。Each breath filled the backpack with hot air to warm my body。 Soon I fell asleep.In the

5、morning , sunlight crept （爬行）across the valley and finally warmedmy back。I wondered how long it would take for rescuers to find me off the trail because the trees were mostly burnt, I was in a fairly visible spot。 But as the day progressed, I worried about dehydration （脱水）.I decided to head downhill

6、 in search of a stream. I lifted my leg and placed my foot flat on the ground, then propped （撑起）myself up on my hands and pushed mybottom forward 。 Carefully,I moveddownhill , placing my leg ahead of me and crab-walking after it。 It was slow going , but thismethod kept the pain to a minimum 。续写要求：1

7、.所续写短文的词数应为 150左右；2 .至少使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 ：Around 4 p.m. , I heard the distant thunder of a helicopter. Paragraph 2At sunrise I found the path【思路点拨】1 .文本细解读，确定续写方向本文是记叙文，讲述了一个作者在一次马背之旅中，早上独自一人去小道长跑，不料途中丛林着火；小径在野火之下无法辨认，作者也迷路了。夜晚，作者借着背包和帽

8、子取暖，勉强度过了一夜。第二天，在等，即作,可以推知，作待救援的过程中，作者为了避免脱水，艰难地以仰卧的方式挪动着去找水。续写部分应为故事的结局 者是否获救。根据文章内容可知，作者出门前在一位伙伴的地图上圈了自己打算长跑的路线 者最终是可能获救的。2 .段首句解读，确定续写方向续写第一段首句写道 “下午四点钟的时候，我听到远处传来直升机的轰鸣声”，第二段首句写道“日出时分，我找到了路”，由此可知，第一段内容可以着重描写作者看到直升飞机后兴奋的心情，直升飞机离开后 作者沮丧的心理，及第二个夜晚作者是如何度过的。可设想，作者在又累又饿又渴的情况下昏昏睡去。续写第二段内容应着重描写作者找到路之后，如

9、何获救.可设想，作者找到了路，说明他已经离开了人烟稀少的焦土地，这是他失联的第三天，救援工作会更加紧张，最终的结果是作者得救了。3 .划线词解读，规划续写细节1）分类划线词人物-guy , rescuers时间night环境-trail , stream事物backpack , horseback , water时作disappeared时、情disappointed2）构思具体情节第一段情节：我很兴奋一直升飞机飞近我上空一我挥手呼喊一飞机飞离（disappeared ）,我很失望（disappointed） 一夜晚（night ）来临，我昏昏睡去第二段情节：我发现了路一路上碰见了救援人员（

10、rescuers ） 一喂我水（water）喝一最终获救。【范文欣赏】Paragraph 1:Around 4 p。m , I heard the distant thunder of a helicopter。 Excitement shot through mymind. Someone was looking for me. The helicopter appeared over the canyon, then turned my way 。I waved, but it passed overhead and disappeared 。 I was disappointed 。 A

11、round 8:30 p。m., I stopped on a rock for the night 。 By the time it was completely dark , I was too exhausted to keep awake 。 Before I knew it , I was asleep 。Paragraph 2 :At sunrise I found the path。As I sat considering myoptions , three menon horseback appeared down the trail. My heart beat heavil

12、y 。"I' m over here! ” I shouted。 The rescuers rushed over.As they talked to me and I drank water , I realized just how inactive my mind was。 They told meI should be proud of myself, helped me onto a horse, and guided me to safety through the canyon hat had almost killed me亮点积累1 .词汇disappear

13、 v。消失；disappointed adj。失望的;inactive adj.不活跃的2 .短语drift to sleep昏昏睡去;rush over冲过去； be proud of. 。. 为自豪3 .提分句式They told me I should be proud of myself, helped me onto a horse, and escorted me to safety through the canyon that had almost killed me.分析本句是个复合句，me后省略了 told的宾语从句中的引导词that,canyon 后that引导定语从句,

14、修饰先行词 canyon。译文他们告诉我，我应该为自己感到骄傲，并帮我骑上马，护送我穿过差点要了我命的峡谷，到达安全地带。读后续写深度解读：自主练习阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事I served as a Newport Beach ocean lifeguard for five seasons with pleasure and honor in Orange County, California 。 Whenever I could, I got shifts working here, which was known for its massive curr

15、ents 。 If you wanted to save lives, that ' s where you worked.Late in a shift , I was working Tower 15。Two blocks to my right was another guard named Mike, working Tower 17 。 I' d known Mike for several years. He phoned me , “I got a couple kids 。 I'm going to give them a warning 。 Keep

16、an eye on us. " Anytime you get out of your tower , you' re supposed to let somebody else know , in case a situation develops 。He hung up the phone and grasped his buoy （浮标） when a surf came and the kids were getting sucked out. Mike saw it before it ' s happening, and he's running

17、toward the ocean。 I scanned but only to see two small noses floating above the water。 I dropped my binos（望远镜）and called ,“Double rescue 17 he' s out. I ' m going." Mike was already pushing through the surf line。The mother of the two then realized what was happening。 She screamed when Mi

18、ke reached thekids 。 Mike told me later that he got to the boy first, and when he turned to the girl , he hadto reach down into the water and caught her by the hair to pull her back up。 Mike swam sidewaysout of the current into the clear water。 When I reached the mother, Mike was in waist deep water

19、. The kids were too exhausted to walk , so Mike was carrying them, one under each arm。I turned to the mother and said ,“Hey, it ' s OK. They ' re safe ." I s aw her terror start todisappear 。 However, when she glanced back and got her first good look at Mike, a crazy thinghappened. I sa

20、w a new kind of panic wash over her as though there ' s some new, equally dangerous threat on her kids ' lives. She rushe d up to Mike, caught her kids and turned up the beach. Not even a thank-you.续写要求：1。所续写短文，数应为 150左右；2。至少使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3。续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好4。续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语P

21、aragraph 1:Mike had a rough upbringing , which can be figured out just by looking at him.Paragraph 2:To the mother, judging from the appearance, Mike wasn't a hero but a really threatening guy.【范文欣赏】Paragraph 1:Mike had a rough upbringing, which can be figured out just by looking at him.He has a numberof really frightening tattoos（纹身）, and his shaved head showed the scar he got from a brokenbeer bottle 。 Maybe he wasn't the friendliest lifeguard on the beach and lacked