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1、对立观点型文章结构 第一段：提出对立观点段第一段：提出对立观点段 第二段：论述对立观点段第二段：论述对立观点段 第三段：个人观点段第三段：个人观点段 第一段：提出对立观点段第一段：提出对立观点段 文章第一句话：提出对立观点文章第一句话：提出对立观点 第一种写法：山寨莎翁名句法 To be or not to be, that is a question. 例：To live in the city or to live in the country, that is a question. To study abroad or not, that is a question. 2009.12S

2、hould Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes?1. 家长送学生参加各种艺术班2. 有人支持，有人反对3. 作为大学生，我的观点 第二种写法：就某事，人们热烈讨论 There has been a heated discussion regarding whether Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes?Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? 第三种写法：某事

3、引发人们关注 Recently, the phenomenon of “ ” has sparked a storm of controversy online and in the press and aroused wide concern among the public. 2010.12My View on University Ranking1、 当今社会，高校排名很流行2、 个人看法不同3、 我自己的观点 文章第二句话：文章第二句话： 提出人们对此看法不同 Does anyone hold the same attitude towards this phenomenon/issu

4、e? Definitely not. Actually, opinions vary from individual to individual. No unanimous agreement has been reached. There is no consensus of opinion toward such phenomenon.第二段：对立观点论述段第二段：对立观点论述段 文章第三句话：文章第三句话：提出正方观点 It is evidently reasonable for some to argue that Those who are in favor of the idea

5、that have their convincing arguments. 某物对某物有好处： A is beneficial / favorable / conducive to B. Those who are in favor of the idea that lottery games are beneficial to our society have their convincing arguments. 文章第四句话：文章第四句话：支持正方观点的理由 Those who are in favor of the idea that lottery games are benefic

6、ial to our society have their convincing arguments. Lottery games could serve as a means of raising money for such people as the poor and the disabled. Those who are in favor of the idea that art classes are beneficial to childrens development in the long run have their convincing arguments. They be

7、lieve that the earlier their children are exposed to arts, the more likely it is to find out the artistic potential hidden in them. 文章第五句话：文章第五句话： 提出反方观点 On the contrary， quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that 某物是有坏处： A is to B A has a negative impact on B In spite of the possible benefit

8、s mentioned, some people stand on the opposite side. 文章第六句话：文章第六句话： 支持反方观点的理由 They believe that people will be indulged in lottery games and cherish an illusion that they can earn money through gambling instead of down-to earth labor. In spite of the possible benefits mentioned, some people stand on

9、 the opposite side. The greatest concern they might have is that children probably will be deprived of their pleasure due to their tight schedule. They believe all work and no play makes jack a dull boy 第三段：个人观点段第三段：个人观点段文章第七句话：文章第七句话：提出自己的个人观点 In conclusion, although its hard to draw / come to / re

10、ach / arrive at an absolute conclusion to this issue, I would not hesitate to assent to the former / latter viewpoint. 文章第八句话：文章第八句话： 支持个人观点的理由 I believe lottery games help increase governments revenue. Childhood is the most colorful time for children. 文章第九句话：文章第九句话：再次重申自己的观点 1 Accordingly, weighing

11、 the pros and cons of this argument, I am more inclined to agree with the former/ latter idea. 2 For the reasons presented/stated above, I strongly commit to the notion that For the reasons presented/stated above, I strongly commit to the notion that we should further develop lottery games and exert

12、 proper supervision over them so that they can benefit us in a better way. For the reasons presented/stated above, I strongly commit to the notion that children are expected to feel the nature and develop their curiosity rather than be crammed by too much knowledge.引语评论型2011.12The Way to Success For

13、 this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitledThe Way to SuccessThe Way to Successby commenting on Abraham Lincolns famous remark, Give me six hours to chop down Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four a tree, and I will spend the first four sha

14、rpening the axesharpening the axe. . You should write at least150words but no more than200words. 第1段：引语引用+简单评论段 第2段：意义阐述段 第3段：总结：结合实际第1段：引语引用+简单评论段 文章第一句话：直接引用引语文章第一句话：直接引用引语 第一种写法： 名人名言 1 “ .”Sb. once said. 2 Sb. once said，“ .” 3 I assume that you are familiar with the words of sb. , who once said,

15、 “ .” 第二种写法： 俗语/ /成语/ /谚语 As a commonly-heard saying/idiom/proverb goes，俗语. I assume that you are familiar with saying, which is commonly-heard , “ .” 文章第二句话：简化引语文章第二句话：简化引语 用自己的语言说明、自由发挥 That is to say / In other words, although four-hour seems to be quite a long time, it can help people chop down

16、the tree more smoothly and less laboriously in the rest two hours. 文章第三句话：过渡文章第三句话：过渡 Simple as the sentence may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy. Simple as the sentence may sound, the connotation subtly conveyed should be taken into consideration with more insight.第2段：意义阐述段文章第四句话：深层含义 Th

17、e saying/proverb/ sbs remark aims at informing us of the significance of 主题. 文章第五句话： 强调主题的重要性 canttoo muchEg: I cant thank you too much. There is no denying that we can not emphasize the importance of 主题 too much. 文章第六句话： 论述主题的重要性 Full preparation enables us to fulfill a task perfectly. 主题 can be co

18、nsidered as a building block for success. Over the years, 主题has enabled people to enabled people to achieve their dreams. With 主题, the goal we set can be reached, and the hard nut can be cracked. Without 主题, hardly can any one reach goals and achieve success in his career. It is主题 that enables you t

19、o overcome challenges or obstacles you may encounter in your personal, professional and spiritual life 文章第句七话：举例论述主题的重要性Quite a few examples can be given to prove the importance of 主题. However, I can think of no better illustration than the following one: To further demonstrate the importance of 主题,

20、 I would like to take sb. as a case in point. 第三段：结合实际第三段：结合实际文章第八句话：铭记主题的重要性文章第八句话：铭记主题的重要性 In view of the importance of 主题, we should always keep firmly/bear in mind that 主题 will exert a profound influence on our life/work. From my perspective, at no time should we ignore the importance of 主题. 文章第

21、九句话：结合实际提建议文章第九句话：结合实际提建议 It is imperative for us to take some measures to advocate 主题 in our society.应用文2004.6A Letter to the Editor of a Newspaper设想你买了一本英文词典，发现有这样那样的质量问题，书店的服务态度又不好，因此给报社编辑写信。信中必须包括以下内容：1、事情的起因2、与书店交涉的经过3、呼吁服务行业必须提高服务质量2005.12A Letter Declining a Job Offer1、对公司提供的职位表示感谢2、解释为何不能接受提

22、供职位的原因3，希望予以谅解，并表达公司良好的祝愿 高分和低分作文分析： Dear Big boss： I do not want work longer. Hope you understand me, understand my difficulties. Money is not high. You know, I am a college students, can have a large money. However, you only gives me small job and little money. I was a monitor always in my college

23、. I don not want work here, really? I hope you will not angry me. Yours sincerely, Li Ming Dear Manager Wang,Dear Manager Wang, I am writing this letter to express my rough I am writing this letter to express my rough decision for quitting job.decision for quitting job. I really hope that you could

24、I really hope that you could understand my deplorable situation as losing understand my deplorable situation as losing orientation in workplace.orientation in workplace. Honestly speaking, my salary appears remarkably Honestly speaking, my salary appears remarkably low compared to other same-level c

25、o-workers. After low compared to other same-level co-workers. After all, I have got a Bachelors degree so that I should all, I have got a Bachelors degree so that I should have earned a little bit more. However, a merely have earned a little bit more. However, a merely trivial position was given to

26、me here. It is a great trivial position was given to me here. It is a great pity that I hardly find any opportunity to get self-pity that I hardly find any opportunity to get self-promotion. Actually, it takes me a great multitude promotion. Actually, it takes me a great multitude of time to make up my mind f