四川省第四届新高考改革英语学科论坛（2018年10月13日棠湖中学）--基于问题解决的高三作文专题课ppt课件

1、; At the end of this class, you will be able to: 1. identify problems related to supporting details, cohesion & coherence衔接与衔衔接与衔接接, words and sentence variety in a passage; 2. know how to improve a passage by adding details, making it more cohesive and coherent and varying the language; 3. impr

2、ove a passage with some problems.;Structure Content Language Three parts Topic sentences Key points Supporting details Correct, cohesive and coherent(衔接衔接连贯连贯), varied; does not have enough supporting details for each key point; is not cohesive or coherent (衔接衔接衔接衔接) does not have varied language (d

3、ull and repetitive反复的反复的); How to add supporting details？ Work in groups, compare the sentences and summarize the ways to add supporting details.; To make the sentences longer and more specific, we can: 1. use specific words 2. give examples 3. explain reasons 4. give facts as evidence ; (1) I hate

4、the bad weather today. (2) My father is a warm-hearted man. (3) Square dancing is becoming more and more popular in China.; How to make your passage cohesive and coherent？ Work in groups, compare the sentences and summarize the ways to make the passage more cohesive and coherent.; To make the langua

5、ge more cohesive and coherent, we: 1. can use transitions衔接词、短语衔接词、短语 2. must pay attention to the logical relationship 3. should make sure the topic is consistent ; Online courses have some advantages. They are convenient, because you can learn something that cannot be gained in classroom. They hav

6、e disadvantages, too. Many things have disadvantages, so we should take them seriously.; How to vary the language？ Work in groups, compare the sentences and summarize the ways to vary the language in a passage.; To avoid dull and repetitive language, we can use: 1. pronouns 2. synonyms 3. different

7、sentence patterns ; Doing sports is a useful way to reduce stress. Doing sports helps you forget the trouble and makes you refreshed. Talking with your friends is also a useful way to reduce stress.;1.Read the passage, find out the possible problems and decide what kind of problems they are.2. lacks

8、 supporting details3. is not cohesive or coherent4. the language is repetitive and dull5.2. Improve the passage6.3. Discuss in groups and collect your ideas.;1.Share what you have improved.2.2. Explain the reasons why your improve it in this way.; 假定他是李华，他校学生会刚刚举行了假定他是李华，他校学生会刚刚举行了“跳跳蚤市场蚤市场flea market活动。他的外国笔友活动。他的外国笔友Jenny对此很感兴趣，于是写邮件向他了解根对此很感兴趣，于是写邮件向他了解根本情况。请他给她写一封回信，简要引见这本情况。请他给她写一封回信，简要引见这次活动。要点如下：次活动。要点如下： 1. 活动的目的和内容；活