高三英语基础写作_人物描写

1、课型课型:写作课写作课教学目标教学目标:通过这节的讲授通过这节的讲授,让学生掌握如何让学生掌握如何用英语介绍人物用英语介绍人物.重点重点:讲授描写人物的常用句型和步骤讲授描写人物的常用句型和步骤.难点难点:灵活运用所学词汇及句型写一篇短文灵活运用所学词汇及句型写一篇短文.教学方法教学方法: 顺序法，归纳演绎法顺序法，归纳演绎法授课教师：授课教师：授课班级授课班级:Basic Writing-Character introduction (人物介绍）人物介绍）- 常用句子结构常用句子结构请根据以下信息，介绍中国诺贝尔文学奖得主中国请根据以下信息，介绍中国诺贝尔文学奖得主中国当代著名作家莫言。要求

2、只用当代著名作家莫言。要求只用5个句子表达。个句子表达。姓名：莫言姓名：莫言祖籍：中国山东高密市祖籍：中国山东高密市出生日期：出生日期：1955年年2月月17日日个人情况简介：个人情况简介：1980年代中以乡土作品崛起，充满着年代中以乡土作品崛起，充满着“怀乡怀乡”以及以及“怨乡怨乡”的复杂情感，被归类为的复杂情感，被归类为“寻根文学寻根文学”作家；作家；2011年年8月月 莫言凭长篇小说莫言凭长篇小说蛙蛙获第八届茅盾文学；获第八届茅盾文学；2012年年10月月11日日 莫言因其莫言因其“用魔幻现实主义将民间故事用魔幻现实主义将民间故事历史和现代融为一体历史和现代融为一体”获得诺贝尔文学奖。获

3、得诺贝尔文学奖。homesickness怀乡怀乡 hatred township 怨乡怨乡 Born in Gaomi, Shandong province on February17th, 1955, Mo Yan is the famous Chinese contemporary writer. He first raised his fame withthe local works which were full of “homesickness”and “hatred township” complex emotions in the1980s. Therefore, he was

4、classified as “root-searching literature” writer. In August, 2011, his novelfrog won the 8th Mao Dun literature prize. Besides this, Mo Yan received the Nobel Prize for literature“through a mixture of fantasy and reality, historicaland social perspectives” on October 11th, 2012, which made him famou

5、s all over the world.birthplacebirthdaytitleworksawardevaluation人物简介的一般步骤人物简介的一般步骤 the right order(1)概概况况age, sex, birth-place, background(2)外外貌貌性格性格appearance ,character(3)教教育育education (4)生生平平big events in his or her life ( in the order of time )(5)评评价价evaluation【Useful words and expressions】1.年龄、

6、出生年龄、出生1）二十岁的时候）二十岁的时候_2）于）于1987年年5月生在北京月生在北京 _at the age of 20be born in Beijing in May 1987【Useful words and expressions】2. 外貌、外貌、性格性格特征：特征：1）漂亮）漂亮_2）1.80米高米高_3）勤奋的勤奋的_beautiful/pretty/handsome/good-looking1.80 meters tall/ in heightdiligent/ hardworking3. 教育：教育：1）努力学习）努力学习_2）获得硕士学位）获得硕士学位_3）毕业）毕业

7、_work hard at his studiesreceive/gain a masters degreegraduate from4. 经历：经历：1）致力于致力于_2）有有天赋天赋_devote oneself tohave a gift/ talent for5. 评价：评价：做出了做出了贡献贡献_ 对对的评价很高的评价很高_make great contributions tospeak/think highly of Lets do a fast reading: Just guess the person described in the following sentences.

8、u 1.Born on the 13th of December, 1989 in America, she was brought up as the first child and only daughter of Audrea and Scott Swift.u 2. Showing interest in music, she began writing songs and singing them at karaoke contests, festivals and fairs around her hometown at the age of ten. u 3.When her s

9、econd album (唱片唱片) “Fearless” was released in 2008,she got the worlds attention.u 4.She becomes very popular with the young, which allowed her to recieve many honors including the 52nd Grammy Award in 2010. u5.Her unique country music style and refreshing image is unparalleled (无法匹敌的无法匹敌的) by others

10、 and she continues to make breakthroughs as she takes a chance on trying new things.Taylor Swiftu 1.Born on the 13th of December, 1989 in America, she was brought up as the first child and only daughter of Audrea and Scott Swift.u 2. Showing interest in music, she began writing songs and singing the

11、m at karaoke contests, festivals and fairs around her hometown at the age of ten. u 3.When her second album (唱片唱片) “Fearless” was released in 2008,she got the worlds attention.u 4.She becomes very popular with the young, which allowed her to recieve many honors including the 52nd Grammy Award in 201

12、0. u5.Her unique country music style and refreshing image is unparalleled (无法匹敌的无法匹敌的) by others and she continues to make breakthroughs as she takes a chance on trying new things.birth/backgroundtalentbig eventsawardscommentsHow to describe a person lets analyze the sentences in the passage. Born o

13、n the 13th of December, 1989 in America, Taylor Swift, a famous singer, was brought up as the first child and only daughter of Audrea and Scott Swift. 分词结构分词结构 同位语同位语身份与身份与概况概况尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺 Showing interest in music, she began writing songs and singing them at karaoke

14、contests, festivals and fairs around her hometown at the age of ten. When Taylors second album(唱片） was released（发行） in 2008, she got the worlds attention. She becomes very popular with the young, which allowed her to recieve many honors including the 52nd Grammy Award in 2010.经历经历分词结构分词结构状语从句状语从句定语从

15、句定语从句注意尽量用非谓语动词注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼使文章精炼尽量用复合句尽量用复合句,如定语从句等，润色文章如定语从句等，润色文章 Her unique country music style and refreshing image are unparalleled（无法匹敌的） by others and she continues to make breakthroughs （突破）as she takes a chance（冒险）on trying new things.评价评价evaluation注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组A

16、.A.巧用巧用同位语结构同位语结构, , 使文章简洁，通顺使文章简洁，通顺Tom, the monitor of our class, always helps other classmates to solve their problems in study.1)钟南山钟南山1941年出生在广州，他是年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之中国最伟大的医生之一一。Zhong Nanshan, , was born in Guangzhou in 1941.* 语法，句法高分语法，句法高分tipsone of the greatest doctors in China2）为人自信乐观的男孩为人自信

17、乐观的男孩刘翔刘翔, 出生在出生在1983年的上海年的上海.Liu Xiang, _ , was born in Shanghai in 1983.3) 莫言，当代著名作家，在莫言，当代著名作家，在2012年年10月月11日获得诺日获得诺贝尔文学奖。贝尔文学奖。Mo Yan, _, won the Nobel Prize for Literature on October 11th, 2012.a confident and optimistic boya famous contemporary writer 思考：什么时候可用同位语？思考：什么时候可用同位语？职位头衔职位头衔年龄性别年龄性别

18、B.B.巧用巧用分词分词结构结构，使文章精炼，使文章精炼eg.对音乐有浓厚的兴趣，泰勒在十岁就开始在卡拉对音乐有浓厚的兴趣，泰勒在十岁就开始在卡拉OK比赛和节比赛和节日活动演唱自编的歌曲。日活动演唱自编的歌曲。 Taylor showed great interest in music. She began writing songs and singing them at karaoke contests, festivals and fairs around her hometown at the age of ten. 1）获得获得中山大学中山大学硕士学位后硕士学位后，她出国深造，她出国

19、深造。_ from Zhongshan University, she went abroad to further her study. 2）姚明姚明1980年出生于上海年出生于上海，是世界著名篮球运动员。，是世界著名篮球运动员。Yao Ming, _, is a world famous basketball player. (定语定语)Having received a masters degreeborn in Shanghai in 1980Showing great interest in music, Taylor began writing songs and singing

20、them at the age of ten. 思考：什么时候用分词结构？思考：什么时候用分词结构？介绍出生时间地点介绍出生时间地点教育教育C 巧用巧用with结构结构，作定语，作定语/状语状语 with + n.1)英语英语老师是个漂亮女人，老师是个漂亮女人，长着两只大眼睛，留长发长着两只大眼睛，留长发.My English teacher is a beautiful woman _ . 2)他深度近视，他深度近视，鼻梁上架着一副厚眼镜鼻梁上架着一副厚眼镜。He is a near-sighted guy _3)他是一个又高又瘦的人，有着浓密的眉毛，看起来非常帅气。他是一个又高又瘦的人，有

21、着浓密的眉毛，看起来非常帅气。_. with +O +Oc (非谓语非谓语/介短介短)1）他看到一个）他看到一个抱着婴儿的抱着婴儿的女人站在那里。女人站在那里。He saw a woman _ standing there.2）他）他双手反绑双手反绑，被带了进来。，被带了进来。He was brought in, _.with two big eyes and long hairwith a baby in her armswith his hands tied behindwith a pair of thick glasses on his noseHe is a tall and thi

22、n guy with thick eyebrow, looking very handsome思考：什么时候用思考：什么时候用with结构结构描写外貌描写外貌D D 恰当使用恰当使用定语从句、状语从句定语从句、状语从句等复合句，润等复合句，润色文章色文章1 1）叶诗文获得两枚奥运金牌，这使她闻名于世界。）叶诗文获得两枚奥运金牌，这使她闻名于世界。Ye Shiwen won two gold medals in London Olympic Games , _.2) 鲁迅的小说被译成多种语言，其中一些被制成电影。鲁迅的小说被译成多种语言，其中一些被制成电影。Lu Xuns novels have been translated into many language,_.3）他不但对科学极有兴趣，还对音乐也有天赋。）他不但对科学极有兴趣，还对音乐也有天赋。_which made her world-famoussome of which have been made into filmsNot only is he interested in science, but also has a gift for music.思考：什么时候用复合句等结构？思考：什么时候用复合句等结构？生平事迹生平事迹根据下列内容，根据下列内容， 用英语写一篇介绍世界著名用英语写一篇介绍世