2019-2020学年新教材高中英语Unit3FamilymattersPeriodⅣWriting教学案外研版必修第一册

1、PeriodWriting|读后续写回忆亲人本单元的写作主要是读后续写，写作主题是回忆亲人。在写作此类型文章时要注意以下几点：1原文中的人称和时态。既然是读后续写，就要和原文的人称和时态保持一致。2原文中的人物信息。主题是回忆亲人，对原文出现的人物特点要精准掌握。3原文中的故事发展。在续写故事时，故事的发展脉络和逻辑要清晰合理。1Howeverdecisiveshemaybeattheoffice,shewillsecondguessherselfconstantlyasamother.任凭她在办公室多么果断，作为母亲，她仍经常后悔当时的决定。2Iwantmysistertoknowthate

2、verydecisionwillnolongerberoutine.我想让我妹妹知道，她将再也不能按照常规做出决定。3Mymommymadeitjustforme.我妈妈专门为我做的。4Atthefrontofthefirstcarlookingoutthewindowatthetrackthatlayaheadwereamanandhisson.在头节车厢的最前面，坐着一个男人和他的儿子，他们正透过窗户观赏着一直往前延伸的铁道。5Hekeepsbegginghisparentstolethimseehissister.他一直乞求父母，让他进去看看小妹妹。6Theotherwomanthatm

3、ywifewantedmetovisitwasmymother.我妻子想让我去拜访的另一个女人，就是我的妈妈。7DadnevertriedtohugorkissmewhenIwasachild.在我很小的时候，爸爸从来不抱我，也从来不亲吻我。8Whatmakesagoodmotheranyway?是什么能成就一个好母亲？阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。(Iwastouchedthroughexperiences,memories,books,stories,animals,angels,andmostofallotherpeople.Peoplehavemovedm

4、eandmolded对影响重大)mewithmomentsofloveandexamplesofkindness.OnetimeonthedaybeforeChristmasmanyyearsagowhenIwasaminimumwage(mill(工厂)worker,Ifoundmyselfwithverylittlemoneyandverylittletimetobuymysmallchildrenafewsimpletoys.IknewthattheywouldhavetobecheaponesandIhopedmychildrenwouldlikethem.Ihatednothavin

5、genoughtogivethemmore.Ihatedbeingpoor.AndIhatedfeelingbadatChristmasratherthanhappy.Ipulledintoastoreparkinglotandcountedmymoneyagain.ItwasntmuchbutmaybeIcouldgetsomethingsmallwithit.AsIwasgettingoutofthecarInoticedtheSalvationArmy(救世军)bellringerattheentrance.IfeltbadagainbecauseIdidntfeelIcouldspar

6、eanythingtogivehim.Istartedwalkingtowardstheentrancewhentwocarspulledintoemptyparkingspotsinfrontofme.Thefirstwasashiny,newCadillacandIfeltatwingeofjealousywhenIsawit.“Hownice，”Ithought,“woulditbetohaveenoughmoneytobuyacarlikethat.”Thesecondcar,though,wasanancientsedan(轿车)morebeatupandrustythantheon

7、eIwasdriving.Amanhopped冲)outoftheCadillacandhurriedintothestorerightpastthebellringerwithoutasecondglance.Outoftheoldsedancameayoungmotherwiththreesmallchildrenintow(紧随着).Herclotheslookedaswornoutashercar,yetshestoppedinfrontofthebellringer,smiled,openedherpurse,anddroppedabillinhisredkettle(钱罐)注意：1

8、所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：.IstoodthereforaminuteinastonishmentParagraph2：Inthatsecondastreamofwarmthtouchedme,myjealousyandhatred(憎恨)leftme,andalltheloveandjoyfilledme.精彩范文Paragraph1：.Istoodthereforaminuteinastonishment“Maybe，”Ithou

9、ghttomyself,“itsbettertoberichontheinsideinsteadoftheoutside.”Thatrichmanshouldhavedonesomethingtohelpthepoor,buthedidnt.Sometimesitwasreallywrongtojudgeapersonbyhisorherappearance.Ireallyhadrespectforthepoormotherfromthebottomofmyheart.Shesetagoodexampleforherchildrentofollow.Paragraph2：Inthatsecon

10、dastreamofwarmthtouchedme,myjealousyandhatred(憎恨)leftme,andalltheloveandjoyfilledme.Isearchedforabilloutofmyownpurse,droppeditintheredkettle,andwishedthebellringeramerryChristmas.Ifoundafewfunthingstogivemykidsanddrovehomewithmyheartsinging.IknewitwasgoingtobeawonderfulChristmas.Icouldhardlywaittose

11、emychildrenenjoyingthepresentsboughtforthem,includingaspecialgiftloveforthoseinneed.总评文章整体写作流畅自然，心理和精神层面的描写细腻生动，体现了变化和转折，充满正能量。亮点呈现(1)“Thatrichmanshouldhavedonesomething.”中shouldhavedone表示“应该做某事而实际上没有做”，准确体现出作者对富人行为的批评态度。(2)“fromthebottomofmyheart”，“setagoodexample”词组的运用准确得当。(3)“withmyheartsinging”，

12、“seemychildrenenjoying”结构的运用简洁生动，令文章句式显得高级。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。MyDadsBestFlowertheIremembermyfirsthomewasasmallapartmentonsecondfloorwithalovelyandspaciousbalcony.Whenmymumwasbusyinthekitchen,sheletmestayonthebalconywatchingthekidsplayinginthestreet.OnthatbalconyIplayedsometimeswithmyelder

13、sister,Maria.Shewassevenyearsoldandwhenmymumwasabsent,shewaslikeamothertome.Thebalconywasagreathobbyplaceformyfather.Afterhisworkheusedtogrowcarnations(康乃馨)inflowerboxes.Hiscarnationswerered,pinkandwhite,andeveryoneappreciatedthemfortheirbeauty.Hetookcareofthemwithsomuchloveanddevotion.Hedealtcarefu

14、llywithhisflowerslikeamothertakingcareofherbaby.ManytimesIsatonthefloorofthebalconyforhoursobservinghimandhislovelyflowerswithpatience.Hewasalwaysdoingsomethingonthatbalcony.Hewaswateringthemeveryday,cleaningthebalconyfloor,changingthepottingsoilandwhenthestemswerethick,strongandhighenough,hestarted

15、hisimprovementoperationattentivelylikeadoctor.Mydadtookatinyknifeandwithhislefthandheheldthestemofthecarnationandmeasuredtheheight.Thenhemadeasmallmarkonthestemwithhisfinger.Afterwardshemadeasharpcutwiththeknife,justenoughtofitinagrainofbarley(插穗的芽).Thenhebandagedthestemwithasmallbandage.Hisjobwasth

16、entowatertheplantsandtotakecareofthem.“Nooneshouldtouchthem，”hesaidtoMum.Everyday,whenhecamehomefromworkhewentstraighttothebalcony.Mumusedtotellus,“DonottouchDaddysflowers.”Forusitwasafascinatingexperiencetowatchhowthesmallstemsweregrowingandmakingflowers.Whenthecarnationshadgrownbigenough,mydadenjo

17、yedwatchingthemeveryday.Wethekidsdidtoo.注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：Oneday,myeldersister,wholovedDadverymuch,hadagreatidea.Paragraph2：Whenmydadarrived,hewentasusual,straighttothebalconyandsawhisflowerslyingonthefloorlikedeadanimal

18、s.写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。“我”小的时候，父亲十分爱花，在家里的阳台上种植了康乃馨，他精心照顾这些花，担心他的花受到伤害，特别叮嘱母亲不要让人碰触他的花。精彩范文Paragraph1：Paragraph2：课外拓展阅读中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。TraditionalChineseWeddingTraditionalChineseweddingcustomshavebeenaroundforthousandsofyears.Theymayvaryfromplacetoplaceandtimetotime,buthavebe

19、enholding1importantpositioninthelivesofChinesepeople,2(cause)farreaching(影响深远的)effectsonthewaytheChineseleadtheirlives.AtraditionalChinesemarriageusuallyconsists3somenecessaryprocedures,suchasmatchmaking,engagement,meetingthebride,andthreebows.Inaddition,atypicalChineseweddingnowadays4(go)likethis:whenanewcoupleisengaged,5followsisachoiceofthedateoftheirmarriage.MostpeoplewouldfavorapublicholidayorspecialChines