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1、圣诞欢歌读后续写讲评课Act out the sceneWhat will happen then?一、续写思路梳理: 1. 体裁_2. 人称_3. 时态_4. 主要大意(5W1H)When:_Where:_Who:_What:_Why:_How:_Revision 一、续写思路梳理: 1. 体裁_2. 人称_3. 时态_4. 主要大意(5W1H)When:Where:Who:What:Why:How:记叙文第三人称一般过去时On Christmas EveIn the officeScrooge and FredFred invited Scrooge to have dinner with

2、 himFred loves his uncle and wanted to celebrate Christmas with himAt first Scrooge refused Fred but he regretted doing so after he learnt his lessons from the 3 spirits who took him to his past, present and future Christmas. So he wanted to change himself.二、续写的逻辑线索: The Change of Scrooge.bad-temper

3、edcold mean regretful determined How will Scrooge change?What will happen between Scrooge and Fred? ScoresContent54321Are there any changes in scrooge?Are the changes reasonable?Did the ending impress you? ScoresLanguage54321Underlined wordsExcellent words or expressionsEvaluation Standard bad-tempe

4、redcoldmeangood temperedwarmkindgenerousGroup Sharing 1. Select your favorite ending according to the standard.2. Share the reasons why you choose it.3. What are the strengths and what can be improved?The reasons why we like this ending are as follows:1.2.3. For example:范文一:It was Fred, who brought

5、a gift to Scrooge. “Merry Christmas, my dear uncle”, said Fred and handed the present to Scrooge. Scrooge opened it and found that it was his childhood photo. It reminded Scrooge of his happy times spent with his family. He was so surprised and moved that he burst into tears. Fred gave Scrooge a hug

6、 and tried again to invite him to have dinner with him tonight. This time, Scrooge accepted the invitation happily. “Christmas is the time when people can open their hearts freely to each other, merry Christmas.” said Scrooge gratefully. That night, they had a wonderful dinner, a wonderful party. No

7、thing could be merrier. From then on, Scrooge became as kind and helpful as a friend to every one. He no longer had any conversations with spirits, but kept Christmas cheerfully and lived a happy life.范文二: Scrooge opened the door but found nobody. On the ground, there was an envelope. He picked it u

8、p and unfolded it. It was a letter written by Fred. My dear uncle, Please allow me to thank you for bringing me the happy memories when I was a young boy. I still remember how well you treated me before my mum died. I love you because youre my uncle. I wish you a merry Christmas and happy New Year.

9、So, may I have the honor to invite you to have dinner with me tonight? I have prepared a wonderful family party for you. I am looking forward to your arrival. Yours Fred Scrooge was deeply moved and made up his mind to be kind and helpful to the ones he loves. That night, he went to Freds house to celebrate Christmas together. What a wonderful dinner they had!1. What have we lea

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