2023版高考英语一轮总复习第3部分写作分类指导专题2读后续写Type1惊险类课件

1、Type 1惊险类 专题二读后续写惊险类的读后续写尤其要注意环境和动作的描写：1The night settled in.夜幕降临。2The storm is at its height.暴风刮的正猛。3Warm sunshine poured over the little bush.温暖的阳光洒在小树上。4It seems to be clearing up.天气看起来要放晴。5There is a nip in the air.天气冷飕飕的。 6The day was bright, with a fresh breeze blowing.天气晴朗，吹来阵阵清风。 7Its overca

2、st for rain.天阴暗起来，要下雨了。 8Every now and then fleecy clouds floated across the sky.天空中不时飘过飞絮般的云。 9The lotus flowers are now in full boom.The rose gives out a sweet smell!现在荷花盛开。玫瑰吐露芬芳！ (2021全国新高考卷)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they

3、 thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day. How pleased and proud mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what t

4、o do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.

5、 Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into t

6、he sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned

7、off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The pi

8、ece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared._ _The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up._【文章段落分析】本文是一篇记叙文。文章段落可分成两部分：第1段：母亲节来临之前，双胞胎计划给母亲一个惊喜，做一顿早餐给母亲。第23段：由一开始的

9、顺顺利利，到后来的各种问题，烤焦了一片吐司，锅里的粥溢出来了，被烫到了手，双胞胎把厨房弄得一团糟。【关键词】任何一个完整的句子都少不了名词和动词，形容词好或副词可以表达感情色在和整篇文章的情感基调，所以可以将关键词进行分类：名词：the surprise，French toast and chicken porridge, the second stove burner，the frying pan，a mess，a cry of pain, smell of burning动词：broke two eggs，added形容词或副词：pleased and proud，Thankfully，p

10、anicked, calm【写作分析】1考生在写作时，可以把自己置身在文中，作为旁观者，或者把自己换成文章作者去体验和行动想象双胞胎为了给妈妈做早餐，父亲做了什么，妈妈看到后的反应如何。2厘清上下文逻辑后，把文中的关键词代入续写部分，在心中描绘出一个故事发展的梗概。3利用好续写部分的首句。通常，首句有两种作用：承上启下整段中心句。4最后，保证词数、语法和标点正确。因为在读后续写的评分原则里，词数不足也会扣分，标点和拼写等也会对分数有影响。【原创范文赏析】As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeare

11、d. 父亲的反应Spotting the mess, Dad frowned. 孩子的反应Before he could question the kids, Jenna threw herself at him, tears pudding in her eyes， “Dad, we failed to prepare the gift for Mom！” 父亲帮忙Half surprised, half concerned, a sense of responsibility of caring about the kids drove the father to wipe away he

12、r tears， “Lets do it together.”All of a sudden, the twins faces lit up with their head nodding firmly. 解决问题The next moment witnessed their efforts to make the breakfast and they eventually made it. “Take these to Moms room.” Dad directed. 衔接下文Expectantly， the pair stepped out of the kitchen. (99 wor

13、ds)The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 孩子的祝福The moment Mom opened her eyes, the twins yelled, “Happy Mothers Day！” 妈妈注意到了早餐In the meanwhile, a plate of French toast placed on the table beside the bed caught Moms attention. “Mom, have a try.” Jeff suggested. 妈妈的反应Mom tr

14、ied to conceal her emotion, but the glittering tears failed her. Gathering them into her arms, she choked, “Thank you, my darling！” 爸爸的再现Just at that moment, the father came in with two bowls of porridge, “Now we can share the breakfast together！” 整个氛围融洽The twins were overjoyed, delight spreading th

15、rough the house. (88 words)【官方范文】As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their depressed faces， he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for mother. The twins cheered up and did as tol

16、d. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and father had made some egg sandwiches and cooked some oat porridge. Then he sneaked back to bed. Meanwhile, the twins prepared the breakfast tray, added a card they had made and walked out of the kitchen. (82 words)The twins carried the breakfast upstair

17、s and woke their mother up. They hugged her and yelled “Happy Mothers Day, darling Mummy！” Mother hugged the twins. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook father who was pretending to sleep. He feigned astonishment when he saw the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and sai

18、d it was the best she had ever tasted. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her fathers eye and they winked at each other secretly. (76 words)Test 1阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me

19、on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul, my dads friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know h

20、is sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farmhouse listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm，” he said.After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tin

21、a feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草)I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me.I wasnt going

22、 to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Dont be late for supper，” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you dont get lost！” “OK！” my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm

23、 house were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colours of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Sudden

24、ly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse._ _【答案】Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Seeing this, I was surprised.Meanwhile, my horse got frightened, jumped up, and ran around wildly.I held the rope tightly in case I might fall off.My dad was chasing after me, keeping m

25、e in sight.Some time later, my horse stopped, panting, and I woke up from panic.Looking around, I saw my father right behind me.We had no idea where we were and it got dark._【答案】We had no idea where we were and it got dark.We couldnt get back along the original track.We immediately thought of the po

26、lice.My father telephoned the police station, but it couldnt get through.It was so far away that there was no signal.Just then, Uncle Paul came riding with a group of people.He laughed with joy when he saw us safe.He said he had installed a satellite positioning system under my horses belly.Through

27、it, he knew that we had got lost and where we were.Test 2阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Twenty years ago, Chase Poust was only 7. On Sunday morning just before the Memorial Day, he, his dad Steven, and his 4-year-old sister, Abigail, were out for a family boating trip on Floridas St. Johns Riv

28、er, which was trackless and almost nobody knew about it. And theres no rescue center nearby. Chase and Abigail were swimming at the back of the anchored boat while Steven was on deck fishing.It was a perfect outingit was so peaceful and quiet and the colours of the deep blue sky, the light green riv

29、er water and the mild late May sunshine mixed to create a magic scene. Everything was sound until a strong current emerged and loosened Abigails grasp and she let go of the boat. Instantly realizing his sister would be swept away, Chase let go of the boat as well to try and reach her. At the same ti

30、me, Chase screamed at his father desperately.Without thinking twice, Steven jumped into the water and swam towards the two kids with all his efforts. But after realizing he couldnt keep up with both kids, he was faced with a heartbroken decision. He told them he loved them very much because he wasnt

31、 sure whats going to happen. Steven tried his best to stick with both of his children. He wore himself out. But his little daughter was washed away from him. Directing Chase to swim to shore for help Steven stayed behind, keeping as close as he could to Abigail as the life-vest that was keeping her

32、above the waves floated further and further from his reach.It was a tough go for the 7-year-old, but rather than attempting to swim all out, Chase wisely paced himself. Stopping to float or dog paddle when he was tired, hed rest and then set off again. The current was going the opposite way of going

33、 to the boat and the shore, so it was very hard to swim that way for Chase.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。An hour later, Chase swam to the shore, anyhow._【答案】An hour later, Chase swam to the shore, anyhow. Exhausted and tired, he managed to find a man who was willing to help him. The man took h

34、im to the nearest rescue center where Chase told the story clearly. The rescue workers took action and headed for the location without hesitation. At the same time, Chase was taken well care of, left in the rescue center.Luckily, Steven and Abigail were found and rescued._【答案】Luckily, Steven and Abi

35、gail were found and rescued. Steven could hardly believe that they were still alive. When he saw them coming from afar, he was excited to burst into tears. Steven and Abigail were also taken to the center, where they hugged each other, crying. Steven said, “I am grateful to the men and proud of my s

36、on. Young as Chase is, he is a brave man.”This frightening experience left a deep impression on them, which made them realize that they should cherish the moment which they spent.Test 3阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Tawny Nelson is a single mother of four sweet little girls aged 9,5,2, and one

37、 year old.Its not easy to take care of the girls all on her own.Recently, she shared a story with Frank Somerville, a news anchor for KTVU News in California.He was so moved by her story that he shared it on his Facebook page.Tawnys story opened with her visiting the grocery store.It was a rainy and

38、 miserable day and by the time she got all the girls loaded in the truck and ready to head home，it was dark and pouring down.When she tried to start her truck, it wouldnt start.With no one to call, Tawny turned to ask strangers for help to charge her truck.Hours passed and so did at least twenty peo

39、ple.They all ignored her.Tired and hungry, her daughters began to act out.Tawny was filled with tears when someone knocked on her passenger window.Somerville writes, “I swear I got chills when I read what happened next.” And you will do the same when you read Tawnys story：I am the single mother of four absolutely beautiful little girls.They are 9,5,2, and one year old.And things have been particularly rough since my ex left.Our truck had a flat tire and I had to inflate it co