2.22第二次课程lesson2-议核心段

1、核心段的扩展一篇议论文的任务是为了完成如下任务的其中一部分：1. 好处2. 坏处3. 原因4. 影响2022/9/7在一篇议论文的结构被安排好之后，你需要做的就是把核心段落的细节处理好。这也是很多同学一直纠结的地方。问题1：写了一句话之后，接下来完全不知道该怎么继续下去。索性换个方向再写，导致两三句话之间没有任何逻辑联系；问题2：写了一句话之后，接下来的一句对前一句完全是简单的换词重复，并没有起到更进一步解释的作用。问题3：各种我难以启齿的问题。总之就是前言不搭后语！2022/9/7三种议论文主体段1. 最基本的好坏分析；2. 题目问题范围很小，只能顺着一个小方向去论证；3. report里的

2、原因分析；最基本的好坏分析1. 给出总方向(好还是坏)2. 第一个好(坏)处3. 解释4.第二个好(坏)处5. 解释联系外星人的好处On the one hand, from the perspective of some optimists, there may be great benefits to connecting alien life forms. 1). It is likely that our neighbours in space would lend us their far more advanced technologies to solve a series of

3、 problems on the Earth. For example, environmental pollution could be eradicated and life-threatening diseases could be cured if we are technologically improved by our alien friends. 2). Whats more, with their help and assistance, human beings may be able to make a significant step forward to live b

4、eyond the Earth. This means that we would no longer be afraid of facing any catastrophe that might destroy our home planet. 支持校服的理由People in favour of students wearing school uniforms believe that it has a number of benefits. 1). First, requiring students to wear uniforms helps reduce peer pressure.

5、 When everyone in the class is dressed in the same way, they are not likely to talk about the price and taste of clothes. As a result, no one would feel a sense of superiority or being prejudiced. 2). In addition, the rule of wearing school uniforms keeps the campus safe. This is because those who a

6、re not members of the school can be easily recognized and kept outside. There are consequently less possibilities of some incidents, such as theft or gang bullying on campus. 在家工作的好处Advocates of working at home believe that individuals benefit a lot from it. 1). It is time-saving for employees to wo

7、rk at home. Instead of spending hours getting to and from work, people just take a few steps to their working table. With the saved time, they could do a better job or have a better rest. 2). In addition, working at home allows people to work in their own way. For example, there is no need for them

8、to wear suits which are not a comfortable choice for the majority of people.在家工作的坏处However, I am of the opinion that this unconventional way of working causes more problems. 1). Firstly, people who work in their living room may suffer from poor health. They are more likely to be attacked by obesity

9、or hypertension, as they spend the whole day without any outdoor activities. 2). Secondly, there may be extremely low working efficiency. This is because people are easily distracted and disturbed by many things, such as snacks, gadgets and visitors. 3). Finally, it damages the ability of face-to-fa

10、ce communication if people do all their work at home. When they have got used to sending e-mails or having a camera meeting, it is difficult for them to communicate with other in real life.没有外语天分的孩子就不要被强制学习外语了On the one hand, advocates of the given opinion believe that untalented students will under

11、go some negative emotions if they are required to learn a foreign language. 1). One of these impacts is that they may feel unconfident. This is because they often frown upon what can be easily completed by students who have more talent in language study. 2). In addition, forcing students weak in lan

12、guage study to be bilingual may have an adverse effect on their enthusiasm for study. The low self-assessment caused by their poor performance in foreign language classes reduces their interest in other subjects. 家里孩子多的好处分析On the one hand, some people believe that having more than one child in a fam

13、ily has a number of benefits. 1). One is that parents can have more free time of their own. This is because children take care of each other or play with each other. For example, when the elder brother reads bed stories to the younger ones, their parents are free to do what they want. 2). In additio

14、n, children grow up in such a family are less likely to be selfish and have more experience of sharing. They are more aware of the importance of being considerate and responsible for their own decisions. 题目问题范围很小，只能顺着一个小方向去论证1. 引出这个具体的论证方向；2. 第一个对应的知识/事实；3. 带来的影响/结果；4. 第二个对应的知识/事实；5.带来的影响/结果；幸福的定义Ho

15、wever, admitting the importance of money is not the same as assuming that it is the only factor contributing to being happy. As a matter of fact, the definition of happiness varies greatly from person to person. Children are happy to have new toys, but their greater happiness comes from being paid a

16、ttention to and panied by parents or friends. Similarly, while many young people consider a successful career with a decent salary as their ultimate pursuit, there are still many others feeling satisfied by making contribution to the community and society they live in. In addition, people in their s

17、ixties or seventies would hope that they are in a healthy physical condition rather than as rich as a millionaire. 媒体带来的文化信息On the one hand, I admit that getting acquainted with culture of different places across the world has e incredibly easy and convenient with the help of media. There are thousa

18、nds of books and magazines, such as Lonely Planet, vividly picturing how people live their daily lives in a city thousands of miles away from the reader. Information about their food tradition, festival celebration and .can be accessed at almost no cost of time and money. In a similar way, watching

19、movies brings viewers close to a lifestyle totally different from their own. Indian movies, for example, let people know how important singing and dancing is to the Indians. 使用手机/电子设备影响人们的面对面交流On the one hand, it is undeniable that having a mobile phone or a tablet around negatively affects peoples

20、face-to-face communication skills. 1). For those who are constantly texting with abbreviated forms of words such as LOL or OMG, it will be rather difficult to accurately express themselves when having a real face-to-face conversation as they are not able to pick out the appropriate words. 2). Also,

21、sending emails, in many ways, is robbing people of the ability to think and respond quickly enough. This is because they are allowed far more time to think twice before writing down a sentence, which is impossible for people having discussion or quarrelling with others. 文化商业化带来的坏处However, I would ar

22、gue that the inheritance of cultural traditions should totally rely on the market because the process of commercialization does damage to local ways of life. For example, in order to help tourists understand cultural performances and shows more easily, performers would have to simplify and even alte

23、r the way of doing them. As a result, no longer could the original forms of dancing and celebrating be seen by the local younger generation. In addition, local restaurants would cater for tastes of tourists by changing ingredients and cooking methods. This means that .影响工作选择的因素Nevertheless, I believ

24、e that other considerations are just as important as what we earn in our jobs. 1). Firstly, personal relationships and the atmosphere in a workplace are extremely important when choosing a job. Having a good manager or friendly colleagues, for example, can make a huge difference to workers levels of

25、 happiness and general quality of life. 2). Secondly, many peoples feelings of job satisfaction come from their professional achievements, the skills they learn, and the position they reach, rather than the money they earn. 3). Finally, some people choose a career because they want to help others an

26、d contribute something positive to society.现代的人们变得比以前依赖对方On the one hand, there are two reasons why some people say we are more dependent on each other now. 1). Firstly, the cost of living has increased so dramatically that life is more complex and difficult. Young adults， for example，have to rely o

27、n their parents for financial help when renting a flat or buying a house. Housing prices are higher than ever, and if relying on themselves it would be impossible for many young people to pay a deposit and a mortgage. 2). Secondly, people want a better quality of life for their families. This means

28、that both parents usually need to work full-time, and they depend on support from grandparents and babysitters for child care. 现代的人们变得比以前更独立However, I would agree with those who believe that people are more independent these days. 1). In most countries, families are ing smaller and more dispersed. T

29、his means that people cannot count on relatives as much as they used to. 2). We also have more freedom to travel and live far away from our home towns. For example, many students choose to study abroad instead of going to their local university, and this experience makes them more independent as the

30、y learn to live alone. 3). Another factor in this growing independence is technology, which allows us to work alone and from any part of the world. 如何改善道路安全On the other hand, I believe that safe driving can be promoted in several different ways that do not punish drivers. 1). Firstly, it is vitally

31、important to educate people properly before they start to drive, and this could be done in schools or even as part of an extended or more difficult driving test. 2). Secondly, more attention could be paid to safe road design. For example, signs can be used to warn people, speed bumps and road bends

32、can be added to calm traffic, and speed cameras can help to deter people from driving too quickly. 3). Finally, governments or local councils could reduce road accidents by investing in better public transport, which would mean that fewer people would need to travel by car.用来引出核心段落第一句的参考句型1). On the

33、 one hand, it is undeniable that .(少用) 2). On the one hand, some people (恰当的人称) believe that.3). On the one hand, from the perspective of .人/名词, .4). On the one hand, some people blame .for.(坏)5). On the one hand, some people link .to .(中)6). Advocates of the given opinion (may) believe that .7). Ho

34、wever, I would argue that 8). It seems to me that .9). On the one hand, those people who/in support of/against 谓语动词.(少用) 10). On the one hand, the argument in favour of/against .may be that . 11). There are two reasons why . 12). .for two reasons. report里的原因分析1. 题目话题的相关事实；2. 这个事实带来的影响/内容；3. 最终导致的结果(回应题目)；孩子在学校表现糟糕的原因In many countries, the birth rate is decreasing so that families are ing smaller with fewer children.(必须是基于事实的句子) These children are often spoilt. They are al