湖南高考作文题-精讲版课件

1、2007年湖南高考英语作文 假设你叫王平，李华是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。 要点：1.简要描述李华在你心目中的印象 2.用一到两个相关事例进行具体描述 3.对李华表示美好的祝愿 试题分析： 2007年湖南高考英语作文与2006年相比，第一：题型变化不大,主要内容给出，但是还必须考生发挥具体事例第二：内容变化不大，去年是写老师Mr. Moore，今年写的是同窗好友李华，去年把描述老师的内容融入诗歌中间，需要同学们去提取，今年用汉字来描述要点。第三考试形式依然是 强调的应用文留言，留言其实跟书信，便条差不多。 写作技巧Dear Li hua, 第一段:简要描述李华在

2、你心目中的印象。即文章中心. 时态:一般现在时. 第二段:举出你能够想的出来的，最简单的事例去证明第一段. 时态:一般过去 时. 第三段:总结并给出你的祝福. 时态:一般现在 时. Yours sincerely Wang ping 写作技巧Dear Li hua, Of all my classmates, you ,the most considerate and warmhearted girl, are always ready to give your hand to everyone who needs to help.第一段写第一个要点。即文章中心. 第二段举出你能够想的出来的，

3、最简单的事例.时态:一般过去 时 All in all, you are the fantastic girl who deserves all the beautiful prospects, such as studying in Beijing University. Finally wish you success and realize your dream! 第三段总结并给出你的祝福. Yours sincerely Wang ping 第二段的范文I clearly remember that last year our classmates Xiaomei suffered f

4、rom acute appendix at night. It is you who took her to the hospital in midnight as quickly as possible. In order not to disturb others you even didnt call up other classmates to accompany you. Until the next morning other classmates in our dormitory got to know the fact. And we knew that you didnt s

5、leep all the night to attend to Xiaomei. Moreover in our daily life, you always comfort the one who are in depression because of bad score or classmates relationship. So we would like to call you the sweet sister. Main mistakes1.He is the sense of humour. He has the strong sense of humour.2.You are

6、a very friendly people. You are a very friendly person/man/girl/boy.3.Look back on past,we are very excited. When we look back on/Looking back on the past (three years),we are very excited.4.He is very hard work study. He works hard /studies hard very much.5.teached/maked/seeed/meeted/hurted taught/

7、made/saw/met/hurt6.He will be graducation He will graducate/leave school.Main mistakes7.We study with each other everyday. We study with each other every day. e.g. in everyday life.8.In order to your future. In order to build up/cerate your beautiful future.9.Wish/hopeHope to do /hope that-clause.e.g.I hope that you will have a beautiful future.Wish to do /wish sb to do /wish that-clausee.g.I wish that you would have a beautiful future=I wish you to have a