用教材提供的素材写好游记作文讲义-高三英语写作复习

用教材提供的素材写好游记作文

人教版必修一二三本书中都谈到place,只是在不同书中角度不同。如：必修一unit2travelingaround中TravelPeru,必修二unit4HistoryandTradition中What’sinaName?及BeautifulIrelandanditsTradition,必修三unit3DiverseCultures中TravelJournal和WelcometoChinatown。给我们提供了丰富多样的写作素材，值得我们好好整理归纳，以便吸收运用。开头整体印象1.Pisaisa

fineold

city.2.TheChinatowninSanFranciscoisthe

biggest

inAmerica,andalsotheoldest.3.TheChinatownisavery

populartouristdraw

thatreceives

morevisitorseachyear

than

eventheGoldenGateBridge.赏析：这句话通过跟金门大桥比较旅客数量方面的多少来突出唐人街的受欢迎程度。启示：用比较句4.ThecapitalcityLondonisagreatplacetostart,asitisanancientportcitythathasahistorydatingbacktoRomantimes.赏析：历史悠久体现在可以追溯到罗马时代。启示：掌握“某地+is+adj+placetodosth"句型,用as引导的原因状语从句来丰富内容。5.IftheTajMahalisacelebrationofheart,thentheImperialTombsoftheMingandQingDynastiesareamonumenttothemindandspirit.

赏析：通过比较泰姬陵来突出明清皇陵的特点。启示：用"ifAis...,thenBis...",来进行比较.积累优美的短语：

acelebrationofheart(一曲心灵的赞歌)，amonumenttothemindandspirit(一座精神丰碑)地理位置belocated/situatedinsit/standin(坐落于...)1.GuangzhouislocatedinGuangdongprovince.历史悠久1.Thecountryboastsalonghistoryofproducinggreatwritersandpoets.赏析：这个国家历史悠久，文人骚客辈出。启示："Aboastalonghistoryof..."用boast/enjoy代替has.2.TheUnitedKingdomhasalongandinterestinghistorytoexplore,

whichcanhelpyouunderstandmuchmoreaboutthecountryanditstraditions.启示：用非限制定语从句来丰富探索某地历史的意义。3.PorsmouthSquareenjoysalongandfamoushistory,withtheauthorRoberthavingspentmuchtimewritingthere.历史背景知识...isaplacewhere....1.Fishman'sWharfisaplace

where

Italianfishmenfirstcamehereandsetupthefishingindustry.2.AngelIslandwasafamousimmigrationstation

where

manyChineseimmigrantsappliedtoliveintheUSA.3.Historically,Chinsesimmigrantssettledintheareaduringtherailroadconstructionandgoldrushperiod.启示：这里用了一个高级副词historically(历史上)，住在某地除了用"livein"还可以用"settlein"。景点：1.Thechurchesarebuiltwithtasteandwell-decorated.教堂建造雅观，装饰精美。

启示：积累好词：builtwithtaste,well-decorated.2.VisitorstoMaorihistoricbuildings,suchastribalmeetinghalls,canseebeautifullycarvedwoodenarchitecture.赏析：游客去参观毛利人历史建筑，如部落会议大厅，就可以看到雕刻精美的木制建筑。这里把"游客去参观毛利人历史建筑"用一个静态的"介词to"就表达出来，非常简洁。启示：语言要简洁，用副词beautifully修饰形容词carvedwooden。3.Therearecountlesshistoricsitestoexplore,andlotsofmuseumswithancientrelicsfromallovertheUK.启示：博物馆里面有来自全英国的古代文物，很多小朋友可能会这样翻译"...museumswhichhasancientrelicsfromallovertheUK",而教材用"介词with"就简单描写了museum里面展览东西，更加简洁。3.Thepeacefullandscapeofthethe"EmeraldIsle"anditsmanygreencountiesisatruefeastfortheeyes,withitsrollinggreenhillsdottedwithsheepandcattle.赏析：这里的形容词用的很好，如peaceful，特别是greencounties，给人一种这个县城到处都是绿树成荫的感觉。如果下一次遇上whitevillage，也可能是描写村庄白雪皑皑的美景哦。它的后面用了with表示伴随，进一步补充了绿意在于连绵不绝的青山上，点缀着星星点点的牛羊。启示："sthisatruefeastfortheeyes(...赏心悦目)",很绝的表达方法。sheisafeastofoureyes.意为：她长得很养眼。要灵活运用形容词，with介词短语。4.TheTajMahal,whichwasbuiltbetween1631and1648,is

amasterpieceofarchitecture.启示：which定从来丰富内容。5.WhatmakestheMingandQingTombsuniqueevenamongamzingbuildingssuchastheTajMahalandAngkorWat(吴哥窟)isthattheybringtogetherarchitetureandphilosophy.启示：

evenamongamzingbuildings，对比。suchas例举来丰富内容。bringtogetherAandB：把A跟B融合在一起。theybringtogetherarchitetureandphilosophy意为明清皇陵兼具艺术性与哲理性。6.ThemuseumdidareallygoodjobofshowinghowAmericawasbuiltbyimmigrantsfromdifferentcountriesandcultures.启示：用sthdidagoodjobofdoingsth来表达出museum的功能。7.Otherfamoussites,includingTinHowTempleandtheBankofCantonenablesvisitorstospendhourssexploringtheinterestingsights,smellsandsoundsofChina.赏析：这里写

TinHowTempleandtheBankofCanton属于略写，一笔带过。只是说这两个地方可以供人们探索有趣的景点，寻找令人垂涎的中国美食，聆听动听的中国音符。其中sights,smellsandsoundsofChina，具有韵律的美。启示：写景要详略得当。including=suchas,enablesbtodosth=allowsbtodosth.8.Visitorswhowalkamongthebuildingscanfeelboththeweightofhistoryandawonderfulsenseofpeace.启示：积累好词：feelboththeweightofhistoryandawonderfulsenseofpeace(感受深厚的历史底蕴，体会美好又平和的心境。)9.Thesedays,thesquareisagreatplacetoseetraditionalChinesecultureinreallife,suchasgamesofChinesechess,andpeoplepractisingtaichi.启示：用"评价+具体展开"，来描写一个地方。Aisagreatplacetodosth:A是做某事的好去处。10.ThereareChineseteastores,wherevisitorscantasteandbuyvarietiesofChinesetea.启示：用where引导的定从来丰富内容。人情1.Thenumberofpeoplethereisrathersmall,whichgivestheplaceanairofwonderfulquietness。赏析：一方水土养育一方人，一方人也是这一方水土的不可缺少的一部分，也影响着这个地方，打上了人文的烙印。这个地方人少，所以给人一种美好又宁静的感觉。启示：

anairof：一种...的氛围、感觉2.AmostinterstingpersonyoumightmeetinItalyistheimprovisatore,whohavetheabilitytomakeuppoemsonanysubjectyousuggest.赏析：在意呆利，你最有可能遇见的是即兴诗人，他们能够就你提出的任何话题创作出一首诗歌。在旅游城市，我们常会遇到某些有特色的人，比如，去广西听山歌，就会看到穿着有民族特色衣服的人们。这句话值得我们去模仿。3.ThemajorityofresidentsinChinatownarestillethnicChinese,manyofwhomdonotspeakEnglishfluently.ThisallowsvisitorstoexperiencearealtasteofChina.赏析：从这句话我们可以看出，练好口语环境很重要，唐人街的华侨抱团在一起自然就失去了练好英语的动力，所以还是要走出自己的舒适区才能变得更加美好。当然，这也有利有弊。文章从游客角度出发，谈了这一现象的好处，即游客能体验到纯正中国味。启示：积累好词：experiencearealtasteofsth.体验到纯正的....4.Ifyouintroduceyourselftoafriendlyface,youaremorethanlikelytoexperiencelocalcultureandcustomsfirsthand.赏析：afriendlyface这里运用了提喻，以部分代替整体，意为友善的人们。又如：theyareshortofhands，这里用hands来代替了labor。这个句子告诉我们，在旅游时，若我们主动跟友善的当地人攀谈，更有可能直接了解当地文化风俗。艺术1.Anotherwell-knownpartofMaoricultureisthetraditionalKapadance,whichisperformedforcelebrationsandspecialguests.启示：用了which非限制性定从，补充说明了Kapadance的功能，即：庆祝，欢迎客人.beperformedfor:为..而表演。2.Iwalkedaroundlookingatthestreetartforafewhours.Itwasquitemodernandlively.启示:quite代替了俗气的very,modernandlively，这形容词值得积累。美食1.Afterwards,IatesomedeliciousMexican-Chinesenoodlesfromafoodtruck.启示：描写美食，很多小朋友只会用delicious，tasty,现在记得要用Mexican-Chinese，这种多国特色的形容词哦。2.IselectedaCantoneserestaurantthatserveditsfoodonbeautifulchinaplates.启示：某饭店有...美食要用"serve"。这句很好，答应我，背下来。3.ThereisChinesefoodtosuiteveryone'staste,withtraditionaldishesfromalloverChina.启示：这里又是写美食的好句，用了suiteveryone'staste(符合每个人的胃口)，traditionaldishesfromalloverChina(中国各地传统菜肴)，体现了唐人街里面中国美食的博大精深，应有尽有。体现了一个词：diversity/variety旅游后感想/评价可以用上形容词，如：impressive,unique,fancy,delicate,enjoyable,