(新高考)高考英语二轮复习课时精炼考向47 应用文写作之通知和演讲或致辞(解析版)

考向47应用文写作之通知和演讲或致辞通知题型解读谋篇思路通知分为书面通知和口头通知。英语书面通知比较正式而口头通知所使用的语言有明显的口语特征，通俗易懂。2018年高考全国卷Ⅱ考查通知第一步：明确是口头通知还是书面通知，采用相应的格式第二步：具体说明通知的内容，主要包括时间、地点、人物、事由、注意事项等要点第三步：通知的结束语【背诵满分靓句】1．MayIhaveyourattention,please?Ihaveanannouncementtomake.请大家注意，我要宣布一则通知。2．Attention,please!Ihavesomethingimportanttotellyou.请注意，我有重要的事要宣布。3．Thosewhoareinterestedinthecontestarewelcome.欢迎所有对竞赛感兴趣的人参加。4．Thosewhowanttotakepart/joinintheactivitypleasesignupattheStudentUnion.想参加活动的人请在学生会报名。5．Therearevarietiesofout­of­classactivitiesinourschool,whichwecantakepartinafterclass.在我们学校有各种各样的课外活动，我们课后可以参加。6．Youmustn't/Don'tmissthechance/opportunity.毋错过机会。7．Makesurethatyoucomeontimeanddon'tbelate.务必准时到达，不要迟到。8．Lookforwardtoyourparticipation.期待你的参与。【佳作示例】(2018·全国卷Ⅲ)Notice①AllthestudentsarewelcometowatchanEnglishshortfilm(欢迎所有学生观看英文短片)GrowingTogether,whichisrelatedtothehistoryofourschool.②Ifyouarecuriousaboutthehistoryofourschoolorconcernedaboutitsfuture,don'tmisstheopportunity(如果你对我校的历史好奇或关心我校的未来，不要错过这个机会)!Asscheduled,thefilmwillbeshownintheschoolhallfrom2：00to3：00thisFridayafternoon.Weencourageanykindoffeedbackonthefilmfromourviewers.Hopefully,youcansendyouradviceoropinionstousbytheschoolQQorWeChat.③Lookforwardtoyourparticipation(期待你的参与)．StudentUnion演讲/致辞题型解读三段式谋篇思路演讲稿、致辞等，是人们在生活和学习中常用的文体。发言稿常用于向听众说明一些道理，希望对方接受自己的见解。致辞是接待或欢送客人时，为表示欢迎、感谢或祝愿而进行的发言文章首段：明确发言或致辞主题主体段落：(发言稿)分析问题展开论述；(致辞)说明活动安排或回顾以往活动文章尾段：(发言稿)提出解决问题的办法或期待；(致辞)表示欢迎/感谢或祝愿【背诵满分靓句】1．Mynameis...TodayIamverygladtohavetheopportunitytomakethispresentation.Ishallbespeakingabout...我是……今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是……2．Goodmorning,everyone!Itismygreathonourtosharewithyoumyopinionson...大家上午好！很荣幸能和你们分享一下关于……我的看法。3．Ladiesandgentlemen/Boysandgirls,I'm...I'mgreatlyhonouredtospeakhereonbehalfofmyschool.I'mgoingtotalkabout...女士们、先生们/同学们，我是……很荣幸代表我校在此演讲。我要谈论的是……4．Whatreallymatters/countsiswhetheryoucanconcentrateonyourlessons.真正要紧的是你是否能全神贯注于你的功课。5．Aboveall/Mostimportantofall,youshouldbelieveinyourself.最重要的是，你要相信自己。6．Itplayedanincreasinglyimportantrole/partinourlife.它在我们的生活中起着越来越重要的作用。7．That'sall.Thankyouforyourattention/listening.我的演讲到此结束，谢谢大家。8．IhopeIhavemademyselfunderstood.我希望我已经非常清楚地表达了我的意思。【佳作示例】Hello,everyone.①It'sagreathonorformetogivemyspeechonRespectingtheElderly(我很荣幸做关于尊敬老人的演讲)．WhatIwanttostressfirstlyisthattheelderlydeserveourrespectduetotheireffortsinbringingtheirchildrenupandtheircontributionstosociety.Ifwedon'trespectthem,howcanwecountonyoungerpeopletorespectuswhenwegrowold?Consequently,weshouldtryourbesttocareforthem,②helpingthemlivetheirlivestothefullest(帮助他们过得更充实)．RespectingtheelderlyisatraditionalChinesevirtue.Let'skeepanddevelopthatvirtuetogether.Thankyouforlistening.【检测训练】1．假设你是学生会主席李华，你校拟组织美国交换生到孔子庙参观，委托你通知相关事宜,请你写一则书面通知，要点包括:1.集合时间和地点;2.活动内容:参观孔子庙、古建筑、观看木偶戏；3.预先准备:简要了解孔子文化。注意:1.可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息；3.词数:100左右。参考词汇:1.孔子庙theConfuciusTemple2.木偶戏puppetshow_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】NoticeTohelpyoufurtherunderstand.Chinese-culture,ourschoolwillorganizeatriptotheConfuciusTemple.I’dliketosharewithyousomedetailsaboutit.Asscheduled,wewillmeetat7:30a.m.onThursdayattheschoolgate,firstvisittheConfuciusTemple,whereyoucanlearnmuchaboutConfuciusandhaveadeeperunderstandingofthetraditionalChineseculture.Then,wewillvisitsomeancientarchitecture.Afterthat,wearegoingtoenjoysomepuppetshows.Youwillbegreatlyimpressedwithit.Finally,wecantastesomespecialsnacks,whicharetrulydelicious.Bytheway,knowingbrieflyabouttheConfuciuscultureinadvancewouldbequitehelpful.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasedon’thesitatetocontactme!Lookingforwardtoseeingyou.TheStudentUnion【写作分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生写一则书面通知，通知交换生参观孔子庙的相关事宜。【写作步骤】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时结构：总分要求：1.通知的目的2.参观孔子庙的相关事宜1）集合时间和地点2）活动内容:参观孔子庙、古建筑、观看木偶戏3）预先准备:简要了解孔子文化第二步：列提纲（重点词组）tellsb.sth./informsb.ofsth./plantodosth./learnabout/setoff/payavisitto/datebackto/setup/inorderto/haveabetterunderstandingof/beimpressedwith/inadvance第三步：连词成句1.Inordertohelpyoufurtherunderstand.Chinese-culture,ourschoolwillorganizeatriptotheConfuciusTemple,whichdatesbacktothousandsofyearsago.2.Iwanttosharewithyousomedetailsaboutit.3.Asplanned,wewillmeetat7:30a.m.onThursdayattheschoolgate.4.Firstly,wewillpayavisittotheConfuciusTemple,whereyoucanlearnmuchaboutConfuciusandhaveadeeperunderstandingofthetraditionalChineseculture.5.Wewillvisitsomeancientarchitecture,whichwillleaveadeepimpressiononyou.6.Wearegoingtoenjoysomepuppetshows.7.Youwillbegreatlyimpressedwithit.8.Wecantastesomespecialsnacks,whicharetrulydelicious.9.Bytheway,knowingsomethingabouttheConfuciuscultureinadvancewouldbequitehelpful.10.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasecontactme!第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…状语从句连词：because/if/though/although…定语从句连词：which/that/when/where…第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）2．元旦即将来临，学生会(TheStudents’Union)将举办一场英语晚会(anEnglishEveningparty)，现请你以学生会的名义发一份英语书面通知，欢迎全校师生参加，通知包含以下要点：晚会主题：迎新春，享受英语时间：12月31日星期五晚上8：00-10：00节目内容：1.英语短剧(Englishshort-playperformances)演唱英语歌曲，讲英语故事2.邀请外国学生为我们演唱中国歌曲其他：1.全体学生要求准时出席；2.晚会上不要乱扔垃圾（扔垃圾：litter）；3.欢迎大家光临晚会，玩得开心。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】NOTICEInordertocelebratethecomingnewyear,anEnglishEveningpartywithathemeof“WelcomenewyearandEnjoyyourEnglish”isgoingtobeheldbyourStudents’Unionfrom8pmto10pmonFriday,31st.Decemberonourschoolplayground.Therewillbemanyactivitiesfromthestudents,suchasEnglishshort-playperformances,EnglishstorytellingandEnglishsongs.What’smore,someforeignstudentswillbeinvitedtosingChinesesongsforusattheparty.Allstudentsareexpectedtoattenditontimeandrequirednottolitter.Atlast,youarewelcometoourEnglishpartyandwearesureyouwillenjoyyourself.TheStudents’Union【写作步骤】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一则通知；元旦即将来临，学生会(TheStudents’Union)将举办一场英语晚会(anEnglishEveningparty)，现请你以学生会的名义发一份英语书面通知，欢迎全校师生参加。人称应为第三人称，时态应为一般将来时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：theme（主题），WelcomenewyearandEnjoyyourEnglish（迎新春，享受英语），from8pmto10pmonFriday,31st.December（12月31日星期五晚上8：00-10：00），EnglishstorytellingandEnglishsongs（演唱英语歌曲，讲英语故事），ontime（准时）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【写作亮点】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如inorderto，withathemeof，suchas，what’smore，atlast等等；本文中的被动语态运用地非常自然和流畅，如Inordertocelebratethecomingnewyear,anEnglishEveningpartyabout/withathemeof“WelcomenewyearandEnjoyyourEnglish”isgoingtobeheldbyourStudents’Unionfrom8pmto10pmonFriday,31st.Decemberonourschoolplayground.；What’smore,someforeignstudentswillbeinvitedtosingChinesesongsforusattheparty.；Allstudentsareexpectedtoattenditontimeandrequirednottolitter.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。3．你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家参加即将举行的书法讲座，内容包括:1.讲座目的；2.讲座内容；3.讲座时间、地点。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇:书法calligraphy_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】InordertomakeusstudentslearnmoreaboutChinesecalligraohyandarouseourawarenessofprotectingthetraditionalChineseculture,alectureaboutChinesecalligraphyistobeheldinthelecturehalloftheArtBuildingonMay15ththisSunday.Itwilllasttwohoursfrom8amto10am.ThelecturewillbegivenbyShenYang,afamousChinesecalligrapher.Itmainlyconsistsofthreeparts:first,listentoalectureforoneandahalfhours,thenhaveadiscussionforhalfanhour;afterthatobservethecalligrapherimprovisingonthespot.Allthestudentsarerequiredtoarrivebefore7:30am.Dobepunctual!Students’Union

【写作步骤】第一步：审题体裁：应用文通知时态：一般现在时和一般将来时结构：分两部分，第一部分发出通知和通知的具体内容，第二部分希望按时参加。要点：1.通知全校学生参加书法讲座，对书法讲座作介绍①书法讲座主讲人②书法讲座的具体安排：地点、时间、内容2.希望准时参加。第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）inorderto;Chinesetraditionalculture;Chinesecalligraphy;arouseone’sawarenessof;Chinesecharacters;lasttwohours;consistof;onthespot;berequired;bepuncutal第三步：连词成句1.In

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7:30am.8.Dobepunctual/ontime!根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)表示时间顺序：Firstofall;tobegin/startwith,InthebeginningFirstly....Secondly....Lastly/Finally/Intheend表示并列或补充关系：whatismore;besides,moreover,inaddition,aswellas；notonly…but(also),meanwhile,inthemeantime,some...some…others表示转折对比关系：but,however,although,though,yet,whileononehand…ontheotherhand...,表示因果关系：because,as,therefore,Asaresult,asaconsequence,consequently,thus连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、段与段之间结构清晰。4．假如你是英华国际学校学生会主席李华，你在食堂发现有浪费粮食现象，打算向全校师生作"FOODFORLIFE"的演讲，请你用英文写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1.演讲的主题；2.演讲的原因；3.你的倡议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Goodmorning,respectedteachersanddearfellowstudents!__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourlistening!【参考范文】Goodmorning.respectedteachersanddearfellowstudents!Ifeelsohonored/privilegedtodeliveraspeechthemedatfoodforlife.Thepastyearshavewitnessedtheseverenessoffoodcrisisworldwide.However,someofushaven'tattachedgreatimportancetotheissue.Foodwasteisstillacommonsight,especiallyinthecanteen.Facingthesternreality,Ithinkit'shightimethatwestoppedit.Notonlyareweexpectedtoraisetheawarenessofsavingfood,butalsogointoactionimmediately.Doremember,everybitofeffortcountsintheprocessofsavingfoodforabetterlife.Thankyouforyourlistening!【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇题为“"FOODFORLIFE"”的演讲稿，号召同学们珍惜粮食。【写作步骤】1.词汇积累发表演讲：makeraspeech=deliveraspeech重视：payattentionto=attachedgreatimportanceto严峻的：serious→severe行动：takeaction=gointoaction2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Foodwasteisstillacommonsight,especiallyinthecanteen.拓展句：ItisespeciallyincanteenthatFoodwasteisstillacommonsight.【写作亮点】[高分句型1]：Notonlyareweexpectedtoraisetheawarenessofsavingfood,butalsogointoactionimmediately.这句话运用了倒装句。[高分句型2]：Doremember,everybitofeffortcountsintheprocessofsavingfoodforabetterlife.这句话运用了强调句。5．你校正在举办英语周活动，你准备参加以Sharing为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你结一个事例，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈Sharing的作用。演讲稿应包含下列要点：1.有关Sharing的一个事例：时间，人物，内容，过程，影响等；2.你的感悟。注意：1.词数120左右.2.演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Goodmorning,everyone!It’sagreathonortobehereandsharesomethingwithyou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Goodmorning,everybody!It'sagreathonourtobehereandsharesomethingwithyou.IstillrememberhowdepressedIwasafterthemidtermexaminationinSeniorOne,whenIhadhopedtobestillamongthebestasinjuniorhighschool.Atthattime,mybestfriendcameupandaskedmetogototheplayground.“You'realwaysthebestinmyheart，”shecomfortedme.“Thereisalwaysaroadahead.”Strangely,myheartwasfilledwithwarmthIhadneversensedbefore.Ifeltmuchbetter.Sharingispartofbeauty.JustasaSwedishproverbgoes,“Sharedjoyisadoublejoy;sharedsorrowishalfasorrow.”Sharingcanbroadenourhorizons.Asforme,bydoingthis,Iliveahappierandmoreconfidentlife.Thanksforyourattention!【写作分析】这是一篇以Sharing为主题的英语演讲比赛，首先要用正确的格式去写，会用一些短语，了解英语的句子结构与汉语的不同，需要平时对课本上的课文要正确地理解，会仿照课文的句子写出正确的英语句子，这里是有关Sharing的一个事例：时间，人物，内容，过程，影响等以及自己的感悟。所以注意用一般现在时，用第一人称来叙述。【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和固定句式，为文章增色不少，如：It'sagreathonourtodosth.、sharesomethingwith、comeup、liveahappierandmoreconfidentlife等，为了上下文的衔接还用了一些过渡词如：atthattime、strangely等，使文章更加连贯完整。全文主要用的是一般现在时，时态做到使用准确。6．假定你是李华，是新华中学的一名中学生。你班的外教Mr.Johnson即将回国，请你代表同学们在欢送会上致辞，内容包括:1、对Mr.Johnson致谢；2、准备了礼物，以留作纪念；3、希望Mr.Johnson以后常回来看看。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________