高考英语二轮复习英语写作之建议信(同名122)课件

英语书面表达系列之

Writingaletterofadvice英语书面表达系列之Writingaletterofa写作攻略1：什么是建议信？1.建议信是写信人针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告。2.建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3.建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由。提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。写作攻略1：什么是建议信？Page

2三段式：第一段：点明主题：表明写作意图，（有时要简单介绍自己）。第二段：陈述事实，提出建议，给出理由

第三段：总结全文，表明希望三段式：Page

3写作攻略2：建议信常用句式A．建议信开头常用句式

(照应材料，表明意图)1.AfterIreadyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2.Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.3.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowto…andI'lltrytomakesomesuggestions.4.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson/concerning…写作攻略2：建议信常用句式A．建议信开头常用句式

(照应材料Page

41.Haveyouconsidereddoing.../Sowhynotdo...?2.You'dbetterdo.../Itis/seemsbetterforyoutodo...3.Thebestwaytodosthistodo…4.Itwouldbeagoodideaif...B.建议信正文常用句式（详述建议，合情入理）B.建议信正文常用句式（详述建议，合情入理）Page

5C.建议信结尾常用句式（归纳总结，提出希望）

1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.3.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.C.建议信结尾常用句式（归纳总结，提出希望）1.IbePage

6写作攻略3：建议信常用常用关联词1.表示总结/归纳的过渡词或短语:ina/oneword,allinall,onthewhole,tosumup，inconclusion，inshort2.表示递进/增补的过渡词或短语moreover;what’smore;besides;inaddition;what’sworse;

worsestill;tomakemattersworse;写作攻略3：建议信常用常用关联词1.表示总结/归纳的过渡词Page

73.表示转折/让步的过渡词或短语:

4.表示原因的过渡词或短语:5.表示结果的过渡词或短语:

6.表示条件的过渡词或短语:

however;

although;evenso/not;because,

becauseof,thanksto,dueto（由于）,

asaresultoftherefore,consequently,

forthisreason,aslongas,onconditionthat...,once...

3.表示转折/让步的过渡词或短语:however;alPage

87.表示时间的过渡词或短语:8.表示论述顺序关系的过渡词或短语:9.表示解释说明的过渡词或短语:10.表示强调事实的过渡词或短语:first,second,third,firstly,secondly,thirdly,firstofall;tobegainwith;tostartwithwhat'smoreimportant;inaddtionlastbutnotleast,lastlyinthebeginning，andthen,afterthat,next,finally,intheend,inotherwords;thatis(tosay);namely;...infact,totellyouthetruth,tobehonest/frank,asamatteroffact,actually7.表示时间的过渡词或短语:first,second,Page

91.在下面空格中填入正确的连接词，使句子的衔接更加紧密1.Thebossaskedhimtoleave._________________，hewasfired.2.Heisagreatscientist._______________________，heisgoodatplayingtheviolin.3.HethoughtaboutgoingtoGreeceorSpain,but_______________decidedonCanada.4.Ididn'tgotothepartywiththem.________，Iwenttohelpanoldladywithherhousework.5.Somepeopleareoverambitious.________，theyareusuallyunhappy.What'smore/Besides/InadditionInotherwords/ThatistosayfinallyInsteadTherefore/later1.在下面空格中填入正确的连接词，使句子的衔接更加紧密1.Page

102.请阅读下列短文，选择适当的过渡词或短语填空并补充横线上的内容second,asaresult,despite,on(the)onehand,what’smore,inaword,ontheotherhandAsanewwayofshopping,onlineshoppingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.

①________,onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.First,onlineshoppingmakesiteasierforustobuythings._____________________________________________________________________________________

_____②,itismuchfasterforustodoshopping.______________________________________________Third,wecanseealotofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenatthesametime.

__③__,onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Thepicturesofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenarenotalwayswhattheyare.______④,wecanbecheatedeasily.______⑤wecannotseethethingsindetail.

_____⑥,____⑦thedisadvantagesofonlineshopping,Ithinkitisanadvancedwaytodoshopping.Soweshoulddevelopit.On(the)onehandontheotherhandasaresultwhat’smoreInaworddespitesecondInsteadof

searchingacrowdedstore,wejustneedtowatchthe

computerscreenandchoosethethingswelike.

spendalotoftimegoingtoshops.Wedon’thaveto2.请阅读下列短文，选择适当的过渡词或短语填空并补充横线上Page

11DearLiHua,I'vereceivedyourletter,sayingyouhavesomedifficultiesinlearningEnglish.I'msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclass.Secondly,thebestwaytolearnEnglishisreadingitwellandknowingthemeaningsofit.Thirdly,youcanspeakEnglishwithyourclassmatesandteachers,whichcanimproveyourlisteningandspeakingabilities.What'smore,themostimportantadviceisreadingEnglishbooksbeforetheclassandaftertheclass.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx

3.找出文章中的模板句子DearLiHua,3.找出文章中的模板句子Page

12建议信写作模板(1)

Dear___,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon____./I’mgladtowritethelettertoyouon____.Hereareafewsuggestionsforyourreference.First,itisimportantto____.Asyou’ll____.Then,italsohelpsifyou____.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato____.Because____.youcanalso____.I’msurethat_____.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.yoursSincerely建议信写作模板(1)Page

13DearLiHua,I'vereceivedyourletter,saying+你碰到的问题.I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,____________,because________.Secondly,you'dbetter________________,because_________.Thirdly,you’dbetter_________________.Onlyinthiswaycanyou__________.What’smore,_____.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx

建议信写作模板(2)DearLiHua,建议信写作模板(2)Page

14假设你是李华，最近收到了你的朋友Bob的来信，他在信中说，进入高中后，不能适应高中的学习生活，学习遇到障碍，因而情绪低落，甚至有了放弃学业的想法，请你给他回信，内容如下：1向Bob表示问候和安慰2针对他的问题提出建议，要点如下：1)要了解高中正确的学习方法，并学会把知识转化成能力。2）上课认真听讲，遇到问题及时向老师和同学求助3）不要丧失信心。注意：词数100左右可对要点进行适当扩充参考词汇：适应adjustto(sth/doing)学习方法learningmethods课后练习假设你是李华，最近收到了你的朋友Bob的来信，他在信中说，进Page

15DearBob,I’msorrytohearthatyoufeelbadafterenteringseniorhighschool.Youshouldrememberthatitisverycommonandotherstudentsmayfacethesameproblem,soyoudon’thavetoworrytoomuchaboutit.Herearesometipstohelpyou.DearBob,Page

16

Firstofall,itisnecessarytoknowabouttheproperlearningmethodsinseniorhighschoolandlearntoturnknowledgeintoability.Secondly,itisagoodideatolistentotheteachersattentivelyandturntoyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpwhenmeetingwithanydifficultiesinstudy.I’msuretheywillbewillingtohelpyou.Finally,neverloseconfidence.Afterall,confidenceisthefirststeptosuccess.Firstofall,itisnecePage

17Ihopeyouwillfindmyideashelpful.yours,LiHua(115words)IhopeyouwillfindmyidePage

181.学习语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，也是在与自己对话。每当你读一篇文章时，仿佛作者就在你身边，他的经历、他的情感都进入了你心中。2.不论读名家名篇，还是自己创作，你会更清楚地认识到自己，每次学习语文，其实都是对自己的一次审视，你不仅仅懂的更多，而且文学素养也随之提高。这便是语文，需要你与之心灵相通。3.动物也有着自己的语言。它们不光有声音语言，还有许多无声的语言，例如美妙的舞姿、绚丽的色彩和芬芳的气味，研究这些千奇百怪的语言对人类有特殊的意义。4.议论文写作中大部分同学会陷入泛泛而谈，没有议论的内容，就算有论据可用，也只是蜻蜓点水，草草收兵。不少作文且不说能运用几种修辞组织语言，更不说能使句子富有意蕴，单是连最基本的语言通顺也很难做到。5.记叙文的写作反映的问题则更大，且不说选材的平淡，就语言的叙述而言，无法体现出一个学生高中三年这一思想蜕变的进步，反而还停留在初中的水平，令人汗颜。6.大部分的记叙文平铺直叙，语言啰嗦乏味，缺少灵动性的语句，不会运用各种表达方式，逻辑错乱，这样的文章基本都被判为四类下。7.由果溯因法。事物都是互相联系的。比如，有很多事物就是以因果关系的联系形式存在的。写材料作文，审题时如果能由材料中列举的现象或结果推究出造成所列现象或结果的本质原因，往往能找到最佳的立意。8.提炼中心法。这是写新材料作文最为常见且最为稳妥的审题立意方法。写新材料作文时，如果能准确地提炼出材料的中心，并以其作为文章的主旨，一定会使所写文章既切题又有深度。所以，写新材料作文时这种方法来立意最多。9.抓关键句法。关键句常常有暗示材料中心的作用。所以，有些新材料作文材料中的关键性语句可以作为选择立意角度的突破口。在新材料作文的材料中，关键句常常是命题者或材料中的人物的评议性语句。感谢观看，欢迎指导！1.学习语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，Page

19英语书面表达系列之

Writingaletterofadvice英语书面表达系列之Writingaletterofa写作攻略1：什么是建议信？1.建议信是写信人针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告。2.建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3.建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由。提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。写作攻略1：什么是建议信？Page

21三段式：第一段：点明主题：表明写作意图，（有时要简单介绍自己）。第二段：陈述事实，提出建议，给出理由

第三段：总结全文，表明希望三段式：Page

22写作攻略2：建议信常用句式A．建议信开头常用句式

(照应材料，表明意图)1.AfterIreadyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2.Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.3.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowto…andI'lltrytomakesomesuggestions.4.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson/concerning…写作攻略2：建议信常用句式A．建议信开头常用句式

(照应材料Page

231.Haveyouconsidereddoing.../Sowhynotdo...?2.You'dbetterdo.../Itis/seemsbetterforyoutodo...3.Thebestwaytodosthistodo…4.Itwouldbeagoodideaif...B.建议信正文常用句式（详述建议，合情入理）B.建议信正文常用句式（详述建议，合情入理）Page

24C.建议信结尾常用句式（归纳总结，提出希望）

1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.3.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.C.建议信结尾常用句式（归纳总结，提出希望）1.IbePage

25写作攻略3：建议信常用常用关联词1.表示总结/归纳的过渡词或短语:ina/oneword,allinall,onthewhole,tosumup，inconclusion，inshort2.表示递进/增补的过渡词或短语moreover;what’smore;besides;inaddition;what’sworse;

worsestill;tomakemattersworse;写作攻略3：建议信常用常用关联词1.表示总结/归纳的过渡词Page

263.表示转折/让步的过渡词或短语:

4.表示原因的过渡词或短语:5.表示结果的过渡词或短语:

6.表示条件的过渡词或短语:

however;

although;evenso/not;because,

becauseof,thanksto,dueto（由于）,

asaresultoftherefore,consequently,

forthisreason,aslongas,onconditionthat...,once...

3.表示转折/让步的过渡词或短语:however;alPage

277.表示时间的过渡词或短语:8.表示论述顺序关系的过渡词或短语:9.表示解释说明的过渡词或短语:10.表示强调事实的过渡词或短语:first,second,third,firstly,secondly,thirdly,firstofall;tobegainwith;tostartwithwhat'smoreimportant;inaddtionlastbutnotleast,lastlyinthebeginning，andthen,afterthat,next,finally,intheend,inotherwords;thatis(tosay);namely;...infact,totellyouthetruth,tobehonest/frank,asamatteroffact,actually7.表示时间的过渡词或短语:first,second,Page

281.在下面空格中填入正确的连接词，使句子的衔接更加紧密1.Thebossaskedhimtoleave._________________，hewasfired.2.Heisagreatscientist._______________________，heisgoodatplayingtheviolin.3.HethoughtaboutgoingtoGreeceorSpain,but_______________decidedonCanada.4.Ididn'tgotothepartywiththem.________，Iwenttohelpanoldladywithherhousework.5.Somepeopleareoverambitious.________，theyareusuallyunhappy.What'smore/Besides/InadditionInotherwords/ThatistosayfinallyInsteadTherefore/later1.在下面空格中填入正确的连接词，使句子的衔接更加紧密1.Page

292.请阅读下列短文，选择适当的过渡词或短语填空并补充横线上的内容second,asaresult,despite,on(the)onehand,what’smore,inaword,ontheotherhandAsanewwayofshopping,onlineshoppingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.

①________,onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.First,onlineshoppingmakesiteasierforustobuythings._____________________________________________________________________________________

_____②,itismuchfasterforustodoshopping.______________________________________________Third,wecanseealotofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenatthesametime.

__③__,onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Thepicturesofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenarenotalwayswhattheyare.______④,wecanbecheatedeasily.______⑤wecannotseethethingsindetail.

_____⑥,____⑦thedisadvantagesofonlineshopping,Ithinkitisanadvancedwaytodoshopping.Soweshoulddevelopit.On(the)onehandontheotherhandasaresultwhat’smoreInaworddespitesecondInsteadof

searchingacrowdedstore,wejustneedtowatchthe

computerscreenandchoosethethingswelike.

spendalotoftimegoingtoshops.Wedon’thaveto2.请阅读下列短文，选择适当的过渡词或短语填空并补充横线上Page

30DearLiHua,I'vereceivedyourletter,sayingyouhavesomedifficultiesinlearningEnglish.I'msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclass.Secondly,thebestwaytolearnEnglishisreadingitwellandknowingthemeaningsofit.Thirdly,youcanspeakEnglishwithyourclassmatesandteachers,whichcanimproveyourlisteningandspeakingabilities.What'smore,themostimportantadviceisreadingEnglishbooksbeforetheclassandaftertheclass.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx

3.找出文章中的模板句子DearLiHua,3.找出文章中的模板句子Page

31建议信写作模板(1)

Dear___,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon____./I’mgladtowritethelettertoyouon____.Hereareafewsuggestionsforyourreference.First,itisimportantto____.Asyou’ll____.Then,italsohelpsifyou____.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato____.Because____.youcanalso____.I’msurethat_____.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.yoursSincerely建议信写作模板(1)Page

32DearLiHua,I'vereceivedyourletter,saying+你碰到的问题.I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,____________,because________.Secondly,you'dbetter________________,because_________.Thirdly,you’dbetter_________________.Onlyinthiswaycanyou__________.What’smore,_____.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx

建议信写作模板(2)DearLiHua,建议信写作模板(2)Page

33假设你是李华，最近收到了你的朋友Bob的来信，他在信中说，进入高中后，不能适应高中的学习生活，学习遇到障碍，因而情绪低落，甚至有了放弃学业的想法，请你给他回信，内容如下：1向Bob表示问候和安慰2针对他的问题提出建议，要点如下：1)要了解高中正确的学习方法，并学会把知识转化成能力。2）上课认真听讲，遇到问题及时向老师和同学求助3）不要丧失信心。注意：词数100左右可对要点进行适当扩充参考词汇：适应adjustto(sth/doing)学习方法learningmethods课后练习假设你是李华，最近收到了你的朋友Bob的来信，他在信中说，进Page

34DearBob,I’msorrytohearthatyoufeelbadafterenteringseniorhighschool.Yous