（京津鲁琼专用）2023版高考英语二轮复习专题五书面表达层级三第二讲读后续写教案

〔京津鲁琼专用〕2022版高考英语二轮复习专题五书面表达层级三第二讲读后续写教案PAGE72-第二讲读后续写考点考查工程2022.62022.112022.62022.112022.6读后续写语篇类型轮空轮空故事类记叙文主题语境人与社会主题内容和爸爸去朋友家农场游玩迷路的故事和父母一起去旅行的故事和朋友一起骑行，在野外遇到狼的故事标示词名词777动词203形容词/副词130其他000考查方式提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词语进行续写(150词左右)，使之构成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文一、命题特点读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式，旨在考查考生的综合语言运用能力。读后续写——给出前文，写后文。理论上来说，前文用于阅读输入信息，信息经过大脑思维转换后，形成对前文的理解，理解一定是建立在确定主旨大意，明确前文作者态度和关键信息的前提下，在大脑思维中建立一个对前文的理解框架和概括，在此根底上，继续建立顺序思维，确定接下来在理解前文的根底上如何安排下面继续可能或者应该出现的内容，续写局部内容不仅要求词汇和语言框架的准确使用、语言的润色等，更重要的是，你要明白你应该如何整理续写内容，以使得其和前文形成统一连贯的、能够表述完整信息的表达内容。续写是读和写的统一，之间穿插了对阅读能力、概括能力、思维转化能力、语言领悟能力、语言组织能力、创造性思维能力，以及对上下文逻辑关系的掌握等的考查。续写对于前文文本的选择应该是脉络清晰，能够为不同层次考生根据不同能力确认主旨信息的文本。前文的选择一定既要信息完整，可以提炼观点，又要为下面的续写留有余地，考验命题者的选文判断能力。高质量地完成读后续写最重要的是要通过大量阅读信息的输入，形成一定的阅读思维能力。沉淀思维，归纳信息，梳理脉络，转换思维，那么阅读的思维能力注定会迅速提升，对续写的前文的理解是这一题型的最关键局部，否那么后面的续写就不会有任何形成思维的信息输入，也就谈不上输出了！多读，多思维，多沉淀，多拓展，这是应对读后续写的重要环节！二、题型特点读后续写的阅读材料一般以350词以内的记叙文和夹叙夹议文为主，偶有少量议论文。考生要在此文的后面接着续写约150词左右的文字与前文构成一个完整的故事。一般来说，记叙文浅显易懂，但故事情节多曲折动人，故事线索的逻辑性也较强。要求考生续写的局部多是故事开展的高潮或结局。情节曲折跌宕，线索性和逻辑性较强。考生要抓住故事的叙事线索，依据原文的写作思路续写文章，并适当发散。写作要求考生在读懂原文的根底上，在规定时间内展开合理的想象，并运用所学的英语知识完成一篇约150词左右的续写。原文给出10处左右的标有下划线的关键词语，所续写短文应使用5个以上。续写局部分为两段，每段开头语已经给出。考生所续写的局部要有创新性，不是原文的抄写或胡编乱造，同时，还要带有原文色彩(必须使用原文5处以上的关键词语)。续写一般分为两类：半开放性续写和完全开放性续写。半开放性续写要求考生务必根据文章的逻辑推理续写。完全开放性续写那么要求考生依据文章的思路自由发挥。续写时要尽可能与原材料的中心思想和语言风格上保持一致。读后续写不是随心所欲地写，而是要在所给段落开头和所标出关键词的帮助下完成续写局部(150词左右)。其中，段落开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似，在某种程度上引导你的思路向某个方面开展，所续写局部不能脱离各自的段落开头语另起炉灶，要在其根底上进行拓展发挥。读后续写要求读写并重，需要考生对给定材料精确理解，这样所续写局部才不至于偏离主题，就这方面而言，读后续写有点类似阅读理解题中对文章后续开展的推断，如：Whatwouldhappennext?续写局部的思路和内容并不一定是唯一的，考生可根据自己对上文材料的理解，对文章的结尾做出不同的诠释。三、评分原那么1．此题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2．评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。3．词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。4．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对文章的影响程度予以考虑。5．如书写较差以致影响文章，可将分数降低一个档次。6．评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；(2)内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况；(3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；(4)上下文的连贯性。各档次的给分范围和要求档次描述第五档(21－25)——与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。——内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。——所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。第四档(16－20)——与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理。——内容比拟丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。——所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响意义表达。——比拟有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。第三档(11－15)——与所给短文关系较为密切，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。——写出了假设干有关内容，应用了4个以上短文中标出的关键词语。——应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，虽有一些错误，但不影响意义表达。——应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。续表档次描述第二档(6－10)——与所给短文有一定的关系，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。——写出了一些有关内容，应用了3个以上短文中标出的关键词语。——语法结构单调，词汇工程有限，有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。——较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性。第一档(1－5)——与所提供短文和开头语的衔接较差。——写出内容太少，很少使用短文中标出的关键词语。——语法结构单调，词汇工程很有限，有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，严重影响了意义的表达。——缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯。0白卷、内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。一、思维流程1．品读原文，确定文章线索每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索，如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等，这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜(结尾)〞。2．仔细审题，明确续写要求一般短文后面的“注意〞都有对此短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制、使用几处标有下划线的关键词语、续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到“心中有数〞。3．回读原文，揣摩续写思路根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回读短文，抓住文章的思路，结合段首的提示语，最终确定续写段落的内容。4．拟写草稿，修改错词病句在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或文中画线的关键词语拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性、语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。5．关键词语的使用，誊写文字标出续写局部中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语，这一点可以帮助考生自己检查关键词语的使用并根据情况做出修改。最后在誊写文字时，务必做到字迹工整、清晰。二、续写方法1．精读所给语言材料，理清文章脉络并明确作者的论点，确定文章主旨。2．寻求前文与续写段段首句之间的内在联系，站在作者的角度，设计并开展情节，想象要合理，情节要连贯。3．后续情节一般为故事的高潮或延续，是原作者声音的延续、态度的延伸，因此，要尽量符合原文思路，并求得与读者的心理共鸣，让读者回味无穷。4．续写时心态要端正，所续写内容要积极、健康向上，把事物美好的一面展示出来。5．利用自己已有的知识和经验，在继承原作者风格和语言根底之上，准确、地道地表达，充分展示语言的表现力。提高关联词与过渡语的使用率，增强整句表现力。6．如果所给短文为议论文，那么议论文中的段落首句多为主题句，观点鲜明。续写时，要围绕段落分论点确定论证方法，如正反比照、例证等。三、备考建议面对读后续写这一新写作题型，在了解了其特点和写作技巧之后，考生只要加以适度练习，便可以对此新题型做到得心应手。1．充分利用记叙文故事类的阅读理解或者完形填空。考生在做此类文章的试题时，读到适当的位置，可以短暂停止，根据已读局部文章的脉络，对文章进行发散思维，设想可能的几种结尾，最后对照原文的结尾，看自己的设想是否与原文一致。2．经常实施微型化训练，也就是对所读文章的某一段落进行设想。根据某一段落的首句提示，结合文章的上文对该段进行合理设想，具体推断该段可能要讲述的内容。3．与传统写作类似，续写文章更加要注意句与句之间的连接词，甚至是冠词的暗示作用。4．进行适度专题化练习。俗话说，熟能生巧。对于读后续写这一新题型也是如此。通过适度地练习，可以进一步熟知该种题型的特色，更好地掌握该种题型的写作技巧，更有效地调动传统写作的根底知识，从而写出一篇优美的续写短文。(一)(2022·浙江卷6月)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwassummer，andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque，abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.Uncle__Paul,__mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarm__houselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm，〞hesaid.Afterbreakfast，IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon，IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride，andhesaidyes，aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So，mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats，gotonourhorses，andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbelateforsupper，〞UnclePaulcried，“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tget__lost！〞“OK！〞mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight．Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：Paragraph1：Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.AfraidthatImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.However,itbecamescaredandstartedtorunlikecrazy.Allthiscoming,withoutwarning,Iwasseizedbyfear.“Don’tletgotherope!Keepcalm！〞yelledDad.Ifollowedwhathetoldmeto.Tomyrelief,itstoppedslowly.Butbeforewejumpedoffthehorses,wefoundthatwehadbeenoffthebeatentrackandgot__lost.Paragraph2：Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Exhaustedandhungry,Iwonderedifwecouldfindourwayback.Ikeptshoutingforhelp,hopingmyshoutscouldbeheardbysomeone,buttherewasnoreply.Dadsoundedalittleworriedasheremindedmetocalmdown.Itwasthenthatmymindraced.“Listen,Dad,therushingriverwater，〞Ishoutedexcitedly,“wecanreturntothefarm__housedowntheriver．〞Beforelong,wecaughtsightofthelightsinthedistance.Weknewweweresafe.Whatathrillingvacation,likeneverbefore,wehad!(二)(2022·浙江卷11月)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。AVacationwithMyMotherIhadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother—loving,sweet,yetabsent­mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,__myeight­year­oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood­byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:“Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(放哨)whileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.〞Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind：“Honey,wherearethekids？〞“What？！Oh,Gosh...Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.〞Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely­lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections(反对).Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand­newtentwebroughtwithus.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofsightsalongtheway.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：Paragraph1：Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand­newtentwebroughtwithus.Wewerehappytoseeitstillpacked,andhopeditwouldbepackedforever.However,thingscametoitsturningpoint.MomlostDadinthegasstationwhenweweresleeping.What’sworse,asthedarkapproached,wemetthesametroubleagain.FearfulasMomwas,shedecidedtocampneartheroadwaitingforDad.Thewindcriedwidelylikeamonster.Tearstookcontrolofus.Momembracedustightlysingingasmoothsong,whichreallyrelaxedus.Wedidn’tmetDadinthelastfewdays,butwefeltcomfortablestayingwithMom.Paragraph2：Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofsightsalongtheway.Thetentbecameacloserfriendthen.Everytimewecamped,Momwouldreadabookorsingasoftsong.Thewarmthofherarmsneverfadedawayinmymemory.Thoughshewasforgetful，laughteraccompaniedusalongtheway.WefinallymetpoorDadinourdestination.Thistripmademerealizethatlovemayhavemanyways,butitcanalwayswarmpeopleinthedark.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。OnChristmasEve,seventy­three­year­oldGeorgeselectedhisfoodcarefully.Skimmilkwas$2.99,whitebread,89centswitha10­centdiscount.Leavingthecashier,hecalculatedthathehadsaved80centstoday.Atthe__exit,__thewindremindedhimofhisgloves.“Wherearethey？〞Notinthecoatpockets.Notinthegrocerybageither.Hewassurethathewaswearingthemwhenheenteredthe__store．Heclearlyrememberedputtingthemintothepocketofthiscoat.Georgemadeasecondthoroughsearchofallhispockets,againincludingthegrocerybag.Nowhewassurethattheymusthavebeendroppedsomewhereinsidethestore.OldGeorgehadboughttheblack__leather__glovesata25%discount,forjust$35.00,tenyearsago.Theyweresoftandwarmandverydurable.Hehadtakencarenottoletadropofwaterorraintouchhisexpensivegloves,sotheylookedlikenew.Losingthisfavoritepossessionwasalmostlikelosingachildtohim.George,calmontheoutsidebutnervousinside,re­enteredthestore.Hefollowedthesameroutehehadtakenbefore,startingatthebreadcounter,tothemilksection,thecornerwheresaltandsugarwereplaced,thentherestofthestore.Severalminutesofanxioussearchingturnedouttobeinvain.Heaskedthecustomerswhethertheysawapairofblackleathergloves,buttheysaidno.Thenwithout__hesitationhewentovertothe__cashiertoaskifshehadreceivedanylostgloves,butonlyreceivedthesameanswer.Hisheartgrewheavier.“Societyhaschanged；peoplehavechanged，〞hemurmuredtohimself.“Yearsago,ifsomebodypickedupsomethinglost,theywouldgiveitback.Nowa__good__actionislost.〞Yethedidnotgiveuphope.Hestartedtostareatanybodywearingblackglovestoseeiftheylookedlikehis.Thisfirsttwopersonshesawdidweargloves,butonewaswomen’sandtheotherwasnotblack.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：Suddenly,hefoundamanlookinglikealawyer，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Duringthewholeholiday,hewasalwaysthinkingwhethertobuyanewpair.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：Paragraph1：Suddenly,hefoundamanlookinglikealawyer,wearingapairofblack__leather__gloves．Abruptasitmightseem,Georgecameupwithout__hesitationandaskediftheywerehis,buttherecameadisappointinganswer.Onsecondthought,herealizednobodywouldbesofoolishastowearthemrightinsidethe__store.Hehadnootheralternativebuttoaskthe__cashiertokeepthemincasethelostgloveswerefound.Thenhedraggedhislegstowardsthe__exit．Paragraph2：Duringthewholeholiday,hewasalwaysthinkingwhethertobuyanewpair.Afterall,indeepwinter,hecouldnotdowithoutgloves.Finally,poorGeorgedecidedtobuyanotherpairofleathergloves.Withthelastrayofhope,__hesteppedintothestoreagain.Nosoonerhadheopenedthedoorthanthecashiertoldhimtherewasindeedonesuchpairashelost.Afterexaminingthemcarefully,hewaswildwithjoy,expressingsinceregratitudeandsayingtohimselfthata__good__actionwasneverlost.读后续写(一)(建议用时：每篇25分钟)A阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Hemetherataparty.Shewassooutstanding,withmanyboysaroundher,whilehewassoordinary,withnobodypayingattentiontohim.Attheendoftheparty,heinvitedhertohavecoffeewithhim.Shewassurprised,butoutofpoliteness,sheagreed.Theysatinanicecoffeeshop.Hewastoonervoustosayanything,andshefeltuncomfortable,__thinking,“Pleaseletmegohome.〞Suddenlyheaskedthewaiter,“Wouldyoupleasegivemesomesalt?I’dliketoputitinmycoffee.〞Everybodystaredathim.Sostrange!Hisfaceturnedred,but,still,heputthesaltinhiscoffeeanddrankit.Sheaskedhimcuriously,“Whydoyouhavethishobby？〞Hereplied,__“WhenIwasalittleboy,Iwaslivingnearthesea.Ilikedplayinginthesea,andIcouldfeelthetasteofthesea,justlikethetasteofthe__salty__coffee.Nowevery__timeIhavethesaltycoffee,Ialwaysthinkofmychildhood.Imisssomuchmyhometownandmyparentswhoarestilllivingthere.〞Whilesayingthathecouldn’tholdbackhistears．Shewasdeeplytouched.That’shistruefeeling,fromthebottomofhisheart.Amanwhocanspeakouthishomesicknessmustbeamanwholoveshome,caresabouthome,andhasresponsibilityforhisfamily.Thenshealsostartedtospeakaboutherfarawayhometown,herchildhood,andherfamily.Thatwasareallynicetalk,alsoabeautifulbeginningoftheirstory.Theycontinuedtodate.Shefoundthatactuallyhewasamanwhometallherdemands:hewaskind­hearted,__warmandcareful.Hewassuchagoodpersonbutshealmostmissedhim!Thankstohissaltycoffee！Thenthestorywentonjustlikeeverybeautifullovestory:theprincessmarriedtheprince,andthentheywerelivinginhappiness．..And,everytimeshemadecoffeeforhim,sheputsomesaltinthecoffee.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：After40years,hepassedaway,leavingheraletter.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Learningthetruthwhilereadingtheletter，__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：Paragraph1：After40years,hepassedaway,leavingheraletter.Itsaid,“Mydearest,pleaseforgivemyonlylieItoldyou—the__salty__coffee．Rememberthefirsttimewedated?IwassonervousthatIsaidsalt.ActuallyIwantedsomesugar.〞Hesaidmanytimeshewantedtotellherthetruth,buthewasafraidoflosingher.Healsotoldherhavingherwithhimwashisbiggesthappinessinhislife.Ifhecouldliveforasecondtime,hestillwantedtomarryher.Paragraph2：Learningthetruthwhilereadingtheletter,shewept,withtearsdownherface,makingthepapertotallywet.Neverhadshedoubtedit.Thinkingthatevery__timehedrankthestrangetasteofcoffee,herheartachedalot.Herhusbandwassuchakind­heartedandconsideratemanthathehidthetruthforhiswholelife.Howdeeplyhelovedher!Someday,someoneaskedher,“What’sthetasteofsaltycoffee？〞“It’ssweet，〞shereplied．B阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。In2022,myhusband,JoeandIworkedinadesigncompanyinArizona.Oneday,whenwegotbackhomeafterwork,myten­year­olddaughterBecky,andJoewereunitedintheirdesireforadog.Asforme,Isharednoneoftheirs.“Butwhy，〞theypleaded(恳求)．“BecauseIdon’thavetimetotake__care__ofadog.〞“Butwe’lldoit.〞“Really?You’regoingtowalkthedog?Feedthedog?Bathethedog？〞“Yes,yes,andyes.〞“Idon’tbelieveyou.〞“Wewill.Wepromise.〞Theydidn’t.Theywantedtowalkthecutedogthatfirstday.Fromdaytwo,neitherofthemthoughttowalkthedog.WhileIwasslowtoacceptthatIwouldbetheonetokeeptrackofhershots,tofeedandcleanher,Mistyknewthisondayone.Asshelookedupatthethreenewhumansinherlife,shecalculated，“Themediumoneisthemostreliable.〞Quickly,sheandIdevelopedsomethingverysimilartoaVulcanmindmeld(心灵相通)．She’dlookatmewiththosesadbrowneyesofhers,sendherneed,andthenwait,trustingIwouldunderstand—which,strangely,Ialmostalwaysdid.Innotime,shewouldextendacrossmystomachasIwatchedtelevision,andsnoredonmyhome­officecouchasIworkedonmydesign.Evenso,partofmecontinuedtorejectwalkingduty.JoeandBeckyhadpromised.“Notfair，〞IsaidtomyselfassheandIwalked.“Notfair，〞I’dloudlyremindanyonewithinearshotuponourreturnhome.InSeptember,2022,theGreatDepressionhitArizona.Withthat,myhusbandandIwerebothlaidoffovernight.Duringthefollowingsixmonths,JoeandIhurriedlyrushedhereandtheretoseekanewjob,doinganythingandeverythingwecouldtorequestemployment.Everypartofmylifechanged;__nopartofmyoldroutineremained.However,Mistystillneededwalking.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：UpsetasIwas,IhadtowalkMistywhileseekingajob._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Monthsgoingby,mylifechangedalittleandIcametoenjoymywalkswithMisty._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：Paragraph1：UpsetasIwas,IhadtowalkMistywhileseekingajob.Ifeltitaheavydutytoapplymyenergytotheroutinewalk.EverytimeIwalkedMisty,Ifeltexhaustedandfedup.Oneday,Mistystoppedinfrontofme,unwillingtomoveforwarddespitemydraggingtherope.Dramatically,allmyanxiety,exhaustionanddispleasureeruptedlikeavolcano.Ikneltdown,buryingmyheadinmyhands,tearsrollingdownmyface.Then,Mistyapproachedmeandlaidherheadonmykneestocomfortme.IwasalittleembarrassedbutgratefulforMisty’sunderstanding．ThenIstoodup,withmystepsfirmandpowerful.Paragraph2：Monthsgoingby,mylifechangedalittleandIcametoenjoymywalkswithMisty.Itfeltmorelikerelaxationthanduty.Mistysharedmynegativefeelingsandkeptwalkingpeacefully,whichcomfortedmealot.ThankstoMisty’ssilentcompanion,Iregainedtheenthusiasmtolifeandfinallywentthroughthehardtimes.Withmyunremittingefforts,Ieventuallygotanewjob,andsodidJoe.Everythingseemedtobejustfineandmyfamilywentbacktoroutine.Butsomethingdidchange—Ihadanearnestandfaithfulfriend.C阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。TheeventthatstandsoutinTom’smemoryhappenedonemorningwhenTomwasonlytenyearsold.HewasathomewithhiseldersisterJane.Tomwasdoinghishomeworkwhenheheardraisedvoices.Atfirsthethoughtnothingofitsincecustomersinthemotorcycleshopdirectlybelowtheirflatoftenbecameloud,buthesoonrealizedthistimeitwasdifferent.“Quick！Quick!Removethemotorcyclesfromtheshop.〞someoneyelled.Thenathickburningsmellfilledtheair.WhenTomopenedthefrontdooroftheirflattoinvestigate,athickcloudofsmokegreetedhim.Themotorcycleshophadcaughtfireandpeoplewererunningandcrying.Jane,whohadbeenplayingtheviolininherroom,hurriedtothelivingroom.Theyrushedoutofthe__doorandalongthecorridor(走廊)throughthesmoke.TheywereheadingtowardsthestairwayatthefarendofthecorridorwhenJanestoppedinhertrack.Sheturnedaroundandheadedbackthewaytheycame.Tomhadnoideawhatshewasdoing,buthefollowedsuit.Janehadsuddenlyrememberedtheladyinher70swholivednextdoortothem,whotheycalledMakcik,Malayforauntie.JanebeganbangingonMakcik’sdoor,butgotnoanswer.Asthesmokethickenedaroundthem,Tomcouldseemanyoftheirneighbors—somestillintheirpyjamas(睡衣裤)—runningforsafety.Thethoughtoffearcrossedhismind.“Shewouldhaverunforsafetylikeeveryoneelse！〞Tomcried.However,Janerefusedtogiveup.“IknowMakcik’sstillinside.〞ShesaidshewasfamiliarwithMakcik’sdailyroutineandwascertainshewouldstillbesleeping.Shepoundedthedoor.“Godownstairs.Gonow!Go！〞注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：Tomnoticedtheflamewasreachingup.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Luckily,someneighborspassingbystoppedandofferedhelp.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：Paragraph1：Tomnoticedtheflamewasreachingup.Frozenwithfear,hestoodrootedtothespot.HecomprehendedthegravityofthesituationandheldJane’shandtightly.Bythen,bothofthemwerecoughingandtheireyeswerestinging.Timeseemedtostandstill,thoughtheywereprobablythereforonlytwoorthreeminutes.TombeggedJanetorunforsafetyasquicklyaspossible.Janetriedtoshieldhernosefromthechokingsmokeandshookherhead.Shekeptpoundingagainstthe__door.Tomburstoutcrying.Paragraph2：Luckily,someneighborspassingbystoppedandofferedhelp.AsenseofstrengthimmediatelyreplacedthemountingfearandanxietyinJane’smind.ShetoldthemMs.Makcikmustbestillintheroom.Theyforcedthedooropenwithalltheirmight.Sureenough,Makcikwaslyi