牛津上海英语高三第一学期Unit1Summary Writing课件

SummaryWritingWarming-up:PicturetalkingIsdirtonourskingoodorbadforourhealth?Readthepassageandanswerthequestion:Whatistheauthor'spurposeinwritingthepassage?A．Tostresstheroleofdirt.B．Tointroducethehistoryofdirt.C．Topresentthechangeofviewsondirt.D．Tocallattentiontothedangerofdirt.Para.1Whatisthetopicsentence?However,thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.Groupwork:

Findtheauthor’sopinionsandthesupportingdetailsinParagraph2,3&4.Para.2Whatdidpeoplethinkofdirtontheskinintheearly16thcentury?OpinionExamplesPeoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease.TheFrenchkinghasclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.HenryIV,kingofFrance,wasfamouslydirtyandheorderedanoblemanwhohadtakenabathnottogoout.IncludedWhichshouldbeincludedinyoursummary,theopinionortheexamples?Para.3Didpeoplechangetheiropiniontodirtinthe18thcentury?Why?OpinionReasonDirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.(cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.)IncludedWhichshouldbeincludedinyoursummary,theopinionorthereason?Para.4Whatispeople'sattitudetodirtnowadays?OpinionSupportingdetailsAttitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist,encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunnesystem.IncludedWhichshouldbeincludedinyoursummary,theopinionorthedetails?

OutlinePointofviewinthe16thcenturysincethe18thcenturyNowadays

Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.SomepeoplelikeFrenchandBritishkingsthoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease.Dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighborbecausecleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelyfromparentstoscientists.Paraphrasethetopsentences:

1.Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.

Paraphrase:Peoplehavemixed/different

opinionstodirt(onourskin).Synonym(近义词)transformationofsentencepattern(句式转换)2.Inthe16thcentury,somepeoplelikekingsofFranceandEngland

thought

thatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease.Paraphrase:

Inthe16thcentury,somepeoplelikeFrenchandBritish/Englishkingsbelieveddirtprotectedpeoplefromillness.Wordformation(词性转换)France->French,England->British/EnglishSynonym(近义词)transformationofsentencepattern(句式转换)3.Sincethe18thcentury,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighborbecausecleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Paraphrase:However,peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirttwocenturieslaterbecausetheythoughtwashingdirtoffcankeephealthy.transformationofsentencepatternSynonym(近义词)transitionalword(衔接词)4.Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.First-timeparentsnervouslywarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirtwhilescientiststhinkdirtcanhelpbuildupastrongimmunesystem.Paraphrase:Nowadays,somescientistsmayholddifferentopinionsfromparentswhoareworriedaboutdirt.Synonym(近义词)SentenceSimplification(简化句子)WriteyourfirstdraftEvaluatepartners’summariesaccordingtothechecklist:

(Fullmarks:10’)Doesthesummarycoverallthemainpoints?Arewordscopiedorownwordsused?Aretransitionalwordsused?Arethereanyideasoutsidethepassageincluded?Areallthemistakesinspelling,grammarandpunctuationscorrected?SamplePeoplehavemixedattitudestodirtonourskin.Foralongtime,somepeoplelikeFrenchandBritishbelieveddirtprotectedpeoplefromillness.However,peoplebeganchangingtheirattitudestodirttwocenturieslater,becausetheyweretoldwashingdirtoffcankeephealthy.Nowadays,somescientistsmayholddifferentopinionsfromparentswhoareworriedaboutdirt.(60words)Conclusion:Tipsonsummarywriting:1.Identifythetopicaswellasthewriter'spurpose.2.

Findthetopicsentencesandparaphrasethem.3.Includethemainpointsinthepassageandomitunnecessarydetails.4.Containonlytheideasorinformationoftheoriginal.Donotincludeyourownideasoremotions.5.Usetransitionalwordssuchas,however,therefore,moreover,etc.tomakeitcoherent.6.Revisethesummaryandcorrectthemistakesinspelling,grammarandpunctuations.PracticeSample:Takingashowernotonlyhelpsusrelaxbutalsobenefitsourmind.Researchshowsshowingcaninc