牛津上海英语高三第一学期Unit2

TheGuidancetoWritingonPictures/CartoonsDifficultiesHowtodescribethepictureHowtoexpressyourideasHowtopolishupyourwritingAgroupofstudentstogetherwithsometeachersfromClass13,smilinghappily,aretakingaphotoinSuzhouUniversity,whichhasbeautifulsceneryandalonghistory.Aboy,crouchingonthegroundofthevegetablegarden,ispickingsomevegetables

whengoingonanautumnouting.DifficultiesHowtodescribethepictureHowtoexpressyourideasHowtopolishupyourwritingHowtodescribethepictureTipsTobebriefandtothepoint2.TobeaccurateKeyElementsWhenWhereWhoWhatHow/Why／onthebuswoman／carryababystandunsteadilykeepherbalancesitbeside…lookoutofthewindowturnablindeye/ignoreayounggirl&otherpassengersPicture-describingAsisvividlyshowninthepicture,ona___________busamother__________herbabyis___________unsteadily,________tokeepherbalance.However,ayounggirlaswellasotherpassengers________besideheris_________outofthewindow,________them.crowdedcarryingstandingtryingsittinglookingignoringPresenttenseThirdpersonDifficultiesHowtodescribethepictureHowtoexpressyourideasHowtopolishupyourwriting1.Touselinkingwordsandlinkingsentencesifnecessary2.Touseadvancedvocabularyand

complicatedstructuresifpossibleHowtopolishupyourwriting(1)排序关系first;firstly;second;secondly;lastbutnotleastLinkingWords(2)并列关系(3)转折关系(4)表示结果(5)归纳总结(6)递进关系(7)个人观点and;also;aswellasbut;however;onthecontrary;(ontheonehand)ontheotherhandasaresult;therefore;thusinaword;tosumup;inconclusionwhat’smore;besides;inaddition;what’sworse;worsestillinone’sopinion;personally;asfarassbbeconcerned;fromone’spointofviewComplicatedstructures

使用(None-infinitive)非谓语动词使用(Inversion)倒装结构尝试with的复合结构尝试使用复合句，虚拟语气等Challengeyourself1.

山东青岛输油管道爆炸事故是今年最重大的工业事故之一，造成55人死亡。3.随着江阴一中班主任节的到来，学生们毫不吝啬地向老师表达敬意，老师们也会竭尽全力帮助他们实现自己的梦想。4.为了鼓励大学生不要浪费粮食，烟台大学7位餐厅保洁员每天吃学生的剩饭，成为报纸头条新闻。2.不仅政府应该呼吁公众诚实，我们也应该从自身做起。只有通过共同努力，我们才能创造一个充满诚实和信任的和谐社会。TheoilpipelineexplosioninQingdao,Shandongprovinceisoneofthedeadliestindustrialaccidents

inChinathisyearand55peoplewerekilled.,costing55

people

theirlives.,killing55people.,whichkilled

55people.,claiming55lives.1.山东青岛输油管道爆炸事故是今年最重大的工业事故之一，造成55人死亡。Notonlyshouldthegovernmentappealtothepublictobehonest,butalsowecitizensareexpectedtostartfromourselves.Onlythroughjointefforts

canwecreateaharmonioussocietyfullofhonestyandtrust.

2.不仅政府应该呼吁公众诚实，我们也应该从自身做起。只有通过共同努力，我们才能创造一个充满诚实和信任的和谐社会。3.随着江阴一中班主任节的到来，学生们毫不吝啬地向老师表达敬意，老师们也会竭尽全力帮助他们实现自己的梦想。WithHeadTeachers’DaycominginNo.1HighSchoolofJiangyin,

everystudentshowsrespectfortheirteachersgenerouslywhileteachersalsotrytheirbesttohelpstudentsrealizetheirdreams.Inabidto

discouragefoodwaste,sevencleanersatYantaiUniversity’sdininghallinShandongProvinceeattheleftoversthat

studentsleavebehindontheirplates,makingtheheadlinesthesedays.4.为了鼓励大学生不要浪费粮食，烟台大学7位餐厅保洁员每天吃学生的剩饭，成为报纸头条新闻。Conclusion1.Tobebrief

andtothepoint2.Tobeaccurate3.Touselinkingwordsandlinkingsentencesifnecessary4.Touseadvancedvocabularyand

complicatedstructures

ifpossible

由于越来越多的年轻人外出工作，中国目前约有8000万空巢老人(empty-nesters)。请你根据对这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。

1.简述图片信息，并说明此图揭示了什么现象。

2.对此发表你的感想（原因及影响）。

3.提出解决办法（至少两点）。WritingKeyElementsWhenWhereWhoWhatHow/Why／／Part1:Picture-describingunderatreeanoldwomanabirdstandwithastickwaitforherchildrenstandbesideanemptynestwaitforherchildreninatreeAsisvividlyshowninthepicture,underatreeanoldwomanwithastick,alongwithabird________besidean___________,isanxiously_________forherchildrentocomeback.Part1:Picture-describingWhatthepicturereflectsisasocialproblemofempty-nesters.

standingemptynestwaitingReasonsEffectsPart2:Reasonsandeffectscanhardlyaffordtimeignorethelawsandabandontheresponsibilitytheabsenceofcommunicationmaketheelderlyfeellonelyandhelpless.liveapartfromparentsGovernmentIndividualPart3:Solutionsappealtopeopleto

paymoreattentiontotheelderlypasslawstoclarifytheresponsibilityofchildrensparenoeffortto

improvethelivingstandardsWhenparentsarealive,wedonottraveltothedistance.

gobackhome

regularlyandkeep

theelderlycompany

由于越来越多的年轻人外出工作，中国目前约有8000万空巢老人(empty-nesters)。请你根据对这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。

1.简述图片信息，并说明此图揭示了什么现象。

2.对此发表你的感想（原因及影响）。

3.提出解决办法（至少两点）。WritingPresentationOnePossibleVersion

Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,underatreeanoldwomanwithastick,alongwithabirdstandingbesideanemptynest,isanxiouslywaitingforherchildrentocomeback.

Whatthepicturereflectsisasocialproblemofempty-nesters.

Suchaphenomenonisquitecommonnowadays.Alargenumberofoldpeoplelivealonewithoutchildren’scompany,justlikethebirdinthepicture.Therearevariousreasonsaccountingforit,oneofwhichisthatchildrenareoccupiedintheirdailyworkandattachlittleimportancetoparents’lifeandfeelings.What’smore,aschildrengrowup,theyestablishtheirfamilyandliveapartfromparentsduetodifferentlivinghabits.Asaconsequence,lackofcommunicationmakestheelderlyfeellonelyandhelpless.

Inviewofthegravityofthesituation,it’shightimethatweputanend