读后续写：观察蚂蚁学案=高三英语写作专项

读后续写原材料：Thefirst

week

ofmysummervacationwasexciting,andmysenseoffreedomwassointensethatitfeltlikeIhadtopackeverythingintothatsingleweek.Thenextweekwasalittlecalmer.

Butbythethirdweekmytwobestfriendshadleftfor

summercampandmyactivitieswounddownintoboredom.Gettinguplatereachmorning,Iwasspendingmoreandmoretimewithmy

cellphone

andinfrontoftheTV.ThatiswhenMomreacted,declaringmyphoneandtheTVofflimitsbetween6:00inthemorningand6:00atnight.

Itwasshockingjusttohearhersayit.InthatfirsthourIfeltI'dlostmysensesofsightandhearing.Thesilencewasnumbing.Icircledthehouse,goingfromroomtoroomlookingforsomethingtodo,askingmyselfwhatIcando?WhatcanIdo?WhatcanIdo?WhenIencountered

Mom

inthekitchen,Iaskedher,too,“WhatcanIdo?""That'suptoyou,"shesaidwithoutlookinginmydirection.ThroughthedayIposedmy

question

toherseveralmoretimes,gettingmuchthesameresult.Thenlateintheafternoon,whileshewasworkingathercomputer.Idaredtoaskagain.Instantlysheswungaroundtolookatme,andIcouldseethatmyquestionhadadefiniteeffectonherexpression.Shelookedasthoughshehadbeenshocked.Herjawsclenched,likeshewasholdingherwordsbetweenherteethastheystruggledtogetout.Shelookedmestraightintheeye,then

smiled

andsaid,“Well,

areyouupfora

challenge?”"Surewhat?""Yourchallengeisto

follow

thesame

ant

fortenminutes,”"Whatissotoughaboutthat?"Shesmiledagain."Youmightbe

surprised."SometimelaterMomstoodbesideme,

timer(计时器)inhand.

“I'llsetthetimerfortenminuteswhenyoufindyourwinningant."

P1:SomeoftheantsIsawseemedtobeeatingsomething.P2:IheardMom’stimerringandthen“Youwin,sweetie,”shesaid.翻译：1.幸运的是，很快我的眼睛就锁定在一只大蚂蚁身上，它背着一片长长的草叶。_________________________________________2.妈妈提醒我，时钟开始滴答作响。_________________________________________3.我爬着跟着蚂蚁，而他挣扎着四处走动。_________________________________________4.但好奇心使我的眼睛粘在了蚂蚁身上。_________________________________________5.当他接近裂缝时，他转身爬回混凝土上，寻找另一条可能的路线。蚂蚁真聪明！_________________________________________6.当你沉迷于有趣的事情时，时间真的过得飞快。_________________________________________7.我暑假的其余时间充满了更多有趣的活动，从沿着篱笆种植向日葵到在后院观察鸟类。_________________________________________8.我完全放弃了自己，沉浸在一种兴奋的喜悦中，想发现以后会发生什么。_________________________________________9.我完全沉浸在其中，在它的身后近距离凝视着它。_________________________________________10.妈妈微笑着走过来，拍了拍我的肩膀，“你这十分钟无聊了吗？我毫不犹豫地摇了摇头。_________________________________________答案：1.幸运的是，很快我的眼睛就锁定在一只大蚂蚁身上，它背着一片长长的草叶。Fortunatelyenough,soonmyeyeslockedonabig

ant

thatwascarryingalongbladeofgrass.2.妈妈提醒我，时钟开始滴答作响。

Mom

remindedmethatthe

clockstartedtotick.

3.我爬着跟着蚂蚁，而他挣扎着四处走动。Icrawledtofollowtheantwhilehestruggledupandaround.4.但好奇心使我的眼睛粘在了蚂蚁身上。Butcuriositygluedmyeyestotheant.

5.当他接近裂缝时，他转身爬回混凝土上，寻找另一条可能的路线。蚂蚁真聪明！Whenhewasapproachingacrack,heturnedandclimbedbackontotheconcrete,

seekinganotherpossibleroute.

Howclevertheantwas!「动作描写细腻」6.当你沉迷于有趣的事情时，时间真的过得飞快。Timereallyflieswhenyouareabsorbedinsomethinginteresting.7.我暑假的其余时间充满了更多有趣的活动，从沿着篱笆种植向日葵到在后院观察鸟类。herestofmy

summer

dayswerefilledwithmorefunactivities

from

plantingsunflowersalongthefence

to

observingbirdsinourbackyard.8.我完全放弃了自己，沉浸在一种兴奋的喜悦中，想发现以后会发生什么。Iabandonedmyselfentirelytotheirmovesinanexcitedpleasureofdiscoveringwhatwouldhappenlater.

9.我完全沉浸在其中，在它的身后近距离凝视着它。

Utterlyabsorbedinit,Igaveaclosestareinitswake.「utterly完全地」10.妈妈微笑着走过来，拍了拍我的肩膀，“你这十分钟无聊了吗？我毫不犹豫地摇了摇头。Momcame

upsmiling,pattingmeontheshoulder,"Wereyouboredinthepasttenminutes?"Ishookmyheadwithouthesitation.「patting非谓语，注意双写」(11)蚂蚁SomeoftheantsIsawseemedtobeeatingsomething.

WhatIreallyneededwasalong-distanceant---arunner,otherwiseIwouldstandnochanceofwinningthechallenge.

Fortunatelyenough,soonmyeyeslockedonabig

ant

thatwascarryingalongbladeofgrass.

Mom

remindedmethatthe

clockstartedtotick.

Icrawledtofollowtheantwhilehestruggledupandaround.

Wheneverhewasnearthe

tiny

holearoundthecorner,

myheartmissedabeat.

Whatifhedisappearedintothenearesthole?Butbelieveitornot,

thistime,Iwasfavoredbyluck.IheardMom’stimerringandthen“Youwin,sweetie,”shesaid.

Butcuriositygluedmyeyestotheant.

Whenhewasapproachingacrack,heturnedandclimbedbackontotheconcrete,

seekinganotherpossibleroute.

Howclevertheantwas!

Timereallyflieswhenyouareabsorbedinsomethinginteresting.

Therestofmy

summer

dayswerefilledwithmorefunactivities

from

plantingsunflowersalongthefence

to

observingbirdsinourbackyard.Ihardlythoughtofmy

cellphone,

whichlay

still

inthebackofmydeskdrawer.

NordidIraisethatsilly

question

“WhatcanIdo”again!译文：我看到的一些蚂蚁似乎在吃东西。我真正需要的是一只长距离的蚂蚁---一只跑步者，否则我就没有机会赢得挑战。幸运的是，很快我的眼睛就锁定在一只大蚂蚁身上，它长着一片长长的草叶。妈妈提醒我，时钟开始滴答作响。我爬着跟着蚂蚁，而他挣扎着四处走动。每当他靠近拐角处的小洞时，我的心就错过了一拍。如果他消失在最近的洞里怎么办？但信不信由你，这一次，我被运气青睐。我听到妈妈的计时器响起，然后“你赢了，亲爱的，”她说。但好奇心使我的眼睛粘在了蚂蚁身上。当他接近裂缝时，他转身爬回混凝土上，寻找另一条可能的路线。蚂蚁真聪明！当你沉迷于有趣的事情时，时间真的过得飞快。我暑假的其余时间充满了更多有趣的活动，从沿着篱笆种植向日葵到在后院观察鸟类。我几乎没想到我的手机，它静静地躺在书桌抽屉的后面。我也没有再次提出那个愚蠢的问题“我能做什么”！小词讲解glueButcuriosity

glued

myeyestotheant.

glue是名词和动词同形，名词为胶水，动词引申为：专注于。例如：Mykidsaregluedtotheirphones.glue为动词，被黏在，专注于，所以意思为：我的孩子们都粘在手机上了。试译：你是否下班后也总是对着电脑？____________________________答案：你是否下班后也总是对着电脑？Areyou

glued

tothecomputeroutsideofworkaswell?crawl

I

crawled

tofollowtheantwhilehestruggledupandaround.

crawltofollow写出了动态过程以及作者观察时的动作状态，非常形象试译：1.他们爬得更快了，汗流如雨。______________________________________2.它们到处爬，速度极快，攀岩走壁不在话下。______________________________________答案：1.他们爬得更快了，汗流如雨。They

crawled

quicker.Sweat

pouredoffthem.2.它们到处爬，速度极快，攀岩走壁不在话下。They'refast,theyziparoundandthey

crawl

upwalls.struggle

I

crawled

tofollowtheantwhilehe

struggled

upandaround.

v.奋斗，努力；搏斗（写出了过程中的挣扎）试译：1.愤怒同痛苦在她胸中搏斗着。_______________