课程全部类task1开头结尾法饼图_第1页
课程全部类task1开头结尾法饼图_第2页
课程全部类task1开头结尾法饼图_第3页
课程全部类task1开头结尾法饼图_第4页
课程全部类task1开头结尾法饼图_第5页
已阅读5页,还剩79页未读 继续免费阅读

付费下载

下载本文档

版权说明:本文档由用户提供并上传,收益归属内容提供方,若内容存在侵权,请进行举报或认领

文档简介

OVERVIEW关于雅思写作那点事VIP

Solution

金颖Irene第一课

IELTS写作概述+Task1审题与思维攻略+开头结尾法+饼图第二课

Task

1-

表格+柱形图第三课

Task1-线形图+混合图第四课

Task

1-

流程图+地图第五课

Task2审题与思维攻略+开头结尾法+中间段落写作绝招第六课

Task

2

-

Agreement第七课第八课Task

2

-

DiscussionTask

2-Report+总复习+考前复习计划目录UNIT

1VIP

Solution

金颖IreneFAQ写作考试---什么情况?雅思写作小作文150字A类图表G类书信大作文250字议论文Task

1Task

2Agreement

单面同意Discussion

双面讨论Report

报告分析小作文 大作文20

分钟 40分钟55+7=

(5

x1

+

7x

2)

/3

=6.7+5=

(5

x2

+

7x

1)

/3

=5.小作文

x

1/3

+

大作文x

2/3=写作得分5小作文

5.0

+

大作文

7.0=

6.5小作文

7.0

+

大作文

5.o=

5.5FAQ考官是如何评分的?After

the

TEST考官的阅卷过程:10分钟快速阅卷(T1+

T2)判断是否偏题,5分根据评分标准,批改作文不要胡乱涂改,考官印象小明的作文Task

1我是小作文达人!Task

1Pie

Chart

饼图Bar

Chart

柱形图Line

Chart

线形图Table

表格Flow

chart

流程图Map

地图Charts

多图题Task1开头法主题改写paraphrasing,一定要关注图表信息!Good

beginning

is

half

done!如何创作高分开头句?High

Score

Introduction语法

灵活多元词汇

同义替换图表

信息完善境界攻略内容来源Band

6Very

Good图表信息完善补充体现出总趋势的信息代表性的小标题/坐标信息词汇同义替换核心实词替换(表示趋势/比较)重要虚词替换(表示时间/状态)语法灵活多元形态转化(单词-词组-从句)语态转化(主动态-被动态)Sample(C5T1T1)

The

graph

below

shows

the

proportion

aged

65

and

overbetween

1940

and

2040

in

three

differentcountries.原题:The

graph

below

shows

the

proportion

ofthe

population

aged

65

and

over

between

1940and

2040

in

three

different

countries.INFORMATION

FROM

DIAGRAMThe

graph

below

shows

the

proportion

aged65

and

over

between1940

and

2040

in

threedifferent

countries.The

line

graph

below

shows

the

increase

inthe

proportion

of

population

aged

65

andover

between

1940

and

2040

in

Japan,Sweden

and

the

USA.总趋势,如

increase/decrease, fluctuation等表示变化或趋势的词原题:The

graph

below

shows

the

proportionofthe

population

aged

65

and

over

between1940

and

2040

in

three

different

countries.LEXICAL

RESOURCESThe

graphbelowshows

theproportion

aged65

and

over

between

1940

and

2040

in

threedifferent

countries.The

given

graph

below

depicts

the

increasein

the

percentage

of

aging/elderly

peoplefrom

1940

to

2040

in

Japan,

Sweden

and

theUSA.核心实词N,

V,

Adj;

重要虚词Prep,

Conjdepicts

为Task1通用,亦可替换describe/indicate/reveals/

illustrate...原题:The

graph

below

shows

the

proportionofthe

population

aged

65

and

over

between1940

and

2040

in

three

different

countries.GRAMMATICAL

RANGEThe

graph

below

shows

the

proportion

aged65

and

over

between

1940

and

2040

in

threedifferent

countries.Presented

in

a

line

chart,the

graph

revealshow

the

aging

population

increased

。。。

in

three

countries,namely

Japan,Sweden

andthe

USA

beween

1940

and

2040.分词作状语词组

宾语从句how…verb.

或how

much+noun.被动语态Practice

Writing(C5T2T1)

The

charts

below

show

the

main

reason

for

study

amongstudents

of

different

age

groups

and

the

amount

of

support

theyreceive

from

employers.Sample

AnswerThe

first

bar

graph

shows

that

there

is

a

gradual

decrease

in

studyfor

career

reasons

with

age

and

that

study

stemming

from

interestincreases

with

age.

The

second

graph

shows

that

employersupport

is

maximum

for

the

under

26

year

students.正反比关系:名词表达:There

be

a

decrease

in

XX

with

XX.动词表达:XX

increase

with

XX.Task

1

结尾法总结提炼轻松搞定,Perfect

Ending

!Typical

Conclusion经典结尾句总结重申主要特征SAMPLE(C7T2T1)

The

graph

below

shows

the

consumption

of

fish

and

some

differentkinds

of

meat

in

a

European

country

between

1979

and

2004.[

]

Overall,

the

graph

shows

how

the

consumption

of

chickenincreased

dramatically

while

the

population

of

other

foodsdecreased

over

the

period.[

]

In

brief,

the

graph

illustrates

the

changes

in

the

amounts

of

foods

consumed,

among

which

chicken

turns

out

to

be

the

most

favored

by

European

people

over

the

period.同义替换,重申关键信息It

is

clear

that

European

consumers

do

not

like

to

eat

red

meat

any

more.不要对描述对象和描述时间范畴进行主观臆测Practice

Writing(C7T4T1)

The pie

charts

below

show

units

of

electricity

productionby

fuel

source

in

Australia

and

France

in

1980

and

2000.Suggested

AnswerIn

Summary,

it

is

noteworthy

that

by

2000

these

two

countries

relied

on

different

principal

fuel

sources:

Australia

relied

oncoal

and

France

on

nuclear

power.Task

1中间段拓展+范文详解Key

WordsLogic

Structure

逻辑结构Paraphrasing同义变化General

Trend

趋势把握Task

1任务完成逻辑联系词汇来源语法变化与准确Criteria评分标准高分必应准确审题,结构鲜明逻辑有序,有效衔接词汇丰富,同义变化句式多样,能读能懂七种图形=七种写法?动态类静态类动态类C3T1T1/

C3T4T1按时/空趋势写突出变化和比较Have

a

try!Practice

Writing(C5T2T1)The

charts

below

show

the

amount

of

support

studentsof

different

age

groups

received

from

employers.时间趋势AgeGroupShoppingCentersArtGalleriesZooMuseumNightclubsDisco-thèquesCinemas20-2978%15%87%69%78%21%34%30-3985%32%37%34%56%45%43%40-4995%56%58%59%26%34%27%50-5960%81%67%78%23%16%5%AllTourists83%70%46%59%61%56%53%Practice

WritingThe

table

shows

the

percentage

of

tourists

who

visited

thedestinations

in

Llorente

on

their

last

holiday.时间趋势C2T1T1/

C5T1T1C2T1T1时间趋势按逻辑顺序时空关系静态类C4T3T1

/

C4T1T1按照数值分组写突出极值和比较Have

a

try!Percentage

of

national

consumer

expenditure

by

categery

-

2002CountryFood/Drinks/TobaccoClothing/FootwearLeisure/EducationIreland28.91%6.43%2.21%Italy16.36%9.00%3.20%Spain18.80%6.51%1.98%Sweden15.77%5.40%3.22%Turkey32.14%6.63%4.35%Practice

Writing(C7T1T1)The

table

below

gives

information

on

consumer

spendingon

different

items

in

five

different

countries

in

2002按数值分组Practice

WritingThe

two

pie

charts

show

the

types

of

communication

used

in

1962and

in

1982.70%60%50%40%30%20%10%0%LetterPhoneComputer19621982时间趋势TASK

1

写作思路分析题型风格写作思路关键词单图多图动态按时间/空间趋势写突出比较静态按数值分组写突出特殊值多图依次写,注意图间联系突出主要趋势突出特殊值小作文怎么写?我的个性化VIP网上众说纷纭,你懂的!0

分缺考;

交白卷;完全抄袭背诵好的范文Task

1题型分析(1)Pie

ChartOverview所有图表题中最好写的一种主要是动词“占”和比例的同义替换常以同类或混合多图题型出现Tips阅卷考官经常是不会看那些图表的!!!因此文章必须逻辑清晰,如果描述得能令人在脑海里勾画出那个data

chart,这篇task1无疑会拿到高分。以下是根据某饼图的中间段第一段,你能否逆向思维,基于如下文字画出一张Piechart?According

to

the

chart,

the

largest

one

was

cheese,

whichaccounted

for

24%

of

the

total.

Chocolate

took

up

21%,becoming

the

second

largest.

Hamburger

and

French

fries

bothgot

16%,

followed

by

salad

which

made

up

12%.

All

the

restproportions,

11%

of

all,

went

to

pizza

and

non-fat

ice

cream,constituting

5%

and

6%

respectively.24%21%16%16%12%6%5%CheeseChocolateHamburgerFrenchFriesSaladPizzaNon-facticecream对比另一位考生写的:[A

Band

5Answer]According

to

the

chart,

the

largest

one

is

cheese.

It

have

24%

of

the

total.Chocolate

is

21%

and

Hamburger

and

French

fries

both

get

16%,

and

saladhas

12%.TaskAchievement字数不足,缺省数据Coherence

&

Cohesion

运用少量逻辑联系Lexical

Resources

词汇简单重复,数据描述贫乏Grammatical

Range

&

Accuracy

语法时态错误看出其中的不同之处了么?下面我们来系统学习一下

pie

chart的解题步骤Sample

WritingYou

should

spend

about

20

minutes

on

this

task.

Write

a

report

for

a

universitylecturer,

describing

the

information

shown

below.

You

should

write

at

least

150words.The

two

pie

charts

show

the

types

of

communication

used

in

1962

and

in

1982.审题出题方式

多图时

过去时主要特征

动态写作思路

边比较边写,语言多元化思路段落线索字数Intro主题改写,要素不能少:phone,computer,letter1962

and

in

1982~

20B

1图1与图2比较:letter说明三点:项目,所占比例与地位,两图比较>

70B2图1与图2比较:phones,computers说明三点:项目,所占比例与地位,两图比较>

70Con总结和归纳N/SIntro[A

Band

5

Answer]The

pie

charts

show

the

different

percentages

of

communication

types

in

1962and

1982,

including

phone,computerandletter.要素有所添加,但大部分照抄题目[A

VeryGoodAnswer]同义替换

The

graphs,

presented

in

pie

charts,

compare

different

communicationmethods

including

phone,computer

and

letter

used

in

1962

and

d1982.B1[A

Band

5

Answer]Letter

occupied

most

of

the

chart

in

picture

1,

and

it

become

smaller

in

picture

2.In

1962,

letter

has

50,

while

in

1982,

it

only

left

10%,

which

is

muchless.衔接手段不准确;缺少指代和替换;词汇和句型有限;语法错误明显[A

VeryGoodAnswer]过去时态逻辑衔接-顺序,转折同义替换-“占”动词,比例,被动语态,非限定从,拟人修辞

In

the

first

pie

chart,

the

entire

body

of

world’s

communication

was

dominatedby

letter,

which

took

uphalf

of

the

total.

However,letter

experienced

a

dramatic

drop

after

that.

In

the

next

20

years,

this

figure

had

a

plunge

of

only

40%,

which

turned

out

tobe

the

most

unpopular

one

of

all.The

most

popular/

The

biggest

percentageThe

second

most

popular/

The

second

biggest…The

least

popular/

The

smallest

percentage如何表示特殊值ParaphrasingA

small

percentage

of

(X%)The

minority

of

(X%)The

majority

of

(X%)Most

of

(X%)A

quarter

of

…One-fifth

of

…Half

of

…Double/Triple/Fourfold(adj&adv)Four

times

as

much

as百分比的表达ParaphrasingAccountfor,

takeup,

makeup,

constitute,

getbe

responsible

for,

be

in

charge

ofcover,

%

goes

to,

%

begiven

to,be

shared

by,动词“占”的表达Fish 30%

of

allFried

chicken 21%

ofthesurvey.Microchips the

biggestpercentage.Sporting

dogs half

of

thechart.Employees 75%

of

the

total.ExerciseFish

accounts

for

30%

of

allFriedchickentakes

up21%

ofthe

survey.Microchips

make

up

the

biggestpercentage.Sporting

dogs

represents

half

of

thechart.Employees

constitute75%

of

the

total.REF

KEYS:GMTCASRIGWord

GameYou

can’t

stop

meXOMHDFPHQOTB2

,

(1962-1982),

(phones

and

computers)

.

In

,

phone

just

35%

and

computer

of

three,

15%.

,

In

,

phone

60%,

becoming

.

,

computer

accounted

for

30%,

which

of

its

use

in

1962.过去时态逻辑衔接-并列,转折同义替换-“占”动词,倍数,时间,分词作状语[A

VeryGood

Answer]On

the

other

hand,

during

the

two

decades,

people

used

(phones

and

computers)significantly

more

than

before.

In

1962,

phonejust

got35%

and

computer

wasthe

least

used

form

of

three,

constituting

15%.

However,

In

1982,

phone

accountedfor

60%,

becoming

the

most

popular

communication

form.

Similarly,

computeraccounted

for

30%,

which

had

doubled

the

quantity

of

its

use

in

1962.Con总结趋势同义替换:项目Generally,

there

are

significant

changes

for

each

mediumssurveyed.Practice

Writing(C7T4T1)

The

pie

charts

below

show

units

of

electricity

production

by

fuelsource

in

Australia

and

France

in

1980

and2000.审题出题方式

同类多图题性

数据型时

过去时主要特征

静态+项目多写作思路

各图依次边比较边写合并同类项思路段落线索字数Intro要素也不能少:sources,

electricity,

Australia

and

France,

1980

&

2000~

20说明两个国家从1980

到2000

的总量的变化B

1说明了澳大利亚1980

年情况>

70说明了澳大利亚2000

年的情况B

2说明法国1980

年的情况>

70说明了法国2000

年的情况Con2000

年两国的主要依赖能源(国家对照)N/SIntroThecharts

thesourcesofelectricity

in

intheyears

.

The

charts

compare

the

sources

of

electricity

in

Australia

and

France

in

the

years

1980

and

2000.这次我们也试着将名词性短语改成一个句子:The

charts

indicate

how

many

units

of

electricity

were

produced

bydifferent

fuel

sources

in

Australia

and

France

between

1980

and

2000.Between

these

years

electricity

production

almost

doubled,

rising

from

100

units

to

170

in

Australia,

and

from

90

to

180

units

in

France.比较一下两个double

的用法,这两种用法在雅思图表作文中都很常用double

[vi]:

Electricity

production

almost

doubled.double

[vt]:

The

two

countries

doubled

their

electricity

production.B1In

1980

Australia

(50

units)andthe

remainder

,

hydropower(

20

units)andoil

(

10units).你只要将几个要素(coal,electricity,Australia)所在的句子成分发生变化,句式就会呈现多样性Australia

used

coal

as

the

main

electricity

sourceCoal

was

the

main

source

for

electricity

in

Australia.The

main

proportion

of

electricity

was

produced

from

coal

in

Australia.Coal

became

the

main

fuel

to

produce

electric

温馨提示

  • 1. 本站所有资源如无特殊说明,都需要本地电脑安装OFFICE2007和PDF阅读器。图纸软件为CAD,CAXA,PROE,UG,SolidWorks等.压缩文件请下载最新的WinRAR软件解压。
  • 2. 本站的文档不包含任何第三方提供的附件图纸等,如果需要附件,请联系上传者。文件的所有权益归上传用户所有。
  • 3. 本站RAR压缩包中若带图纸,网页内容里面会有图纸预览,若没有图纸预览就没有图纸。
  • 4. 未经权益所有人同意不得将文件中的内容挪作商业或盈利用途。
  • 5. 人人文库网仅提供信息存储空间,仅对用户上传内容的表现方式做保护处理,对用户上传分享的文档内容本身不做任何修改或编辑,并不能对任何下载内容负责。
  • 6. 下载文件中如有侵权或不适当内容,请与我们联系,我们立即纠正。
  • 7. 本站不保证下载资源的准确性、安全性和完整性, 同时也不承担用户因使用这些下载资源对自己和他人造成任何形式的伤害或损失。

评论

0/150

提交评论