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OVERVIEW关于雅思写作那点事VIP
Solution
金颖Irene第一课
IELTS写作概述+Task1审题与思维攻略+开头结尾法+饼图第二课
Task
1-
表格+柱形图第三课
Task1-线形图+混合图第四课
Task
1-
流程图+地图第五课
Task2审题与思维攻略+开头结尾法+中间段落写作绝招第六课
Task
2
-
Agreement第七课第八课Task
2
-
DiscussionTask
2-Report+总复习+考前复习计划目录UNIT
1VIP
Solution
金颖IreneFAQ写作考试---什么情况?雅思写作小作文150字A类图表G类书信大作文250字议论文Task
1Task
2Agreement
单面同意Discussion
双面讨论Report
报告分析小作文 大作文20
分钟 40分钟55+7=
(5
x1
+
7x
2)
/3
=6.7+5=
(5
x2
+
7x
1)
/3
=5.小作文
x
1/3
+
大作文x
2/3=写作得分5小作文
5.0
+
大作文
7.0=
6.5小作文
7.0
+
大作文
5.o=
5.5FAQ考官是如何评分的?After
the
TEST考官的阅卷过程:10分钟快速阅卷(T1+
T2)判断是否偏题,5分根据评分标准,批改作文不要胡乱涂改,考官印象小明的作文Task
1我是小作文达人!Task
1Pie
Chart
饼图Bar
Chart
柱形图Line
Chart
线形图Table
表格Flow
chart
流程图Map
地图Charts
多图题Task1开头法主题改写paraphrasing,一定要关注图表信息!Good
beginning
is
half
done!如何创作高分开头句?High
Score
Introduction语法
灵活多元词汇
同义替换图表
信息完善境界攻略内容来源Band
6Very
Good图表信息完善补充体现出总趋势的信息代表性的小标题/坐标信息词汇同义替换核心实词替换(表示趋势/比较)重要虚词替换(表示时间/状态)语法灵活多元形态转化(单词-词组-从句)语态转化(主动态-被动态)Sample(C5T1T1)
The
graph
below
shows
the
proportion
aged
65
and
overbetween
1940
and
2040
in
three
differentcountries.原题:The
graph
below
shows
the
proportion
ofthe
population
aged
65
and
over
between
1940and
2040
in
three
different
countries.INFORMATION
FROM
DIAGRAMThe
graph
below
shows
the
proportion
aged65
and
over
between1940
and
2040
in
threedifferent
countries.The
line
graph
below
shows
the
increase
inthe
proportion
of
population
aged
65
andover
between
1940
and
2040
in
Japan,Sweden
and
the
USA.总趋势,如
increase/decrease, fluctuation等表示变化或趋势的词原题:The
graph
below
shows
the
proportionofthe
population
aged
65
and
over
between1940
and
2040
in
three
different
countries.LEXICAL
RESOURCESThe
graphbelowshows
theproportion
aged65
and
over
between
1940
and
2040
in
threedifferent
countries.The
given
graph
below
depicts
the
increasein
the
percentage
of
aging/elderly
peoplefrom
1940
to
2040
in
Japan,
Sweden
and
theUSA.核心实词N,
V,
Adj;
重要虚词Prep,
Conjdepicts
为Task1通用,亦可替换describe/indicate/reveals/
illustrate...原题:The
graph
below
shows
the
proportionofthe
population
aged
65
and
over
between1940
and
2040
in
three
different
countries.GRAMMATICAL
RANGEThe
graph
below
shows
the
proportion
aged65
and
over
between
1940
and
2040
in
threedifferent
countries.Presented
in
a
line
chart,the
graph
revealshow
the
aging
population
increased
。。。
in
three
countries,namely
Japan,Sweden
andthe
USA
beween
1940
and
2040.分词作状语词组
宾语从句how…verb.
或how
much+noun.被动语态Practice
Writing(C5T2T1)
The
charts
below
show
the
main
reason
for
study
amongstudents
of
different
age
groups
and
the
amount
of
support
theyreceive
from
employers.Sample
AnswerThe
first
bar
graph
shows
that
there
is
a
gradual
decrease
in
studyfor
career
reasons
with
age
and
that
study
stemming
from
interestincreases
with
age.
The
second
graph
shows
that
employersupport
is
maximum
for
the
under
26
year
students.正反比关系:名词表达:There
be
a
decrease
in
XX
with
XX.动词表达:XX
increase
with
XX.Task
1
结尾法总结提炼轻松搞定,Perfect
Ending
!Typical
Conclusion经典结尾句总结重申主要特征SAMPLE(C7T2T1)
The
graph
below
shows
the
consumption
of
fish
and
some
differentkinds
of
meat
in
a
European
country
between
1979
and
2004.[
√
]
Overall,
the
graph
shows
how
the
consumption
of
chickenincreased
dramatically
while
the
population
of
other
foodsdecreased
over
the
period.[
√
]
In
brief,
the
graph
illustrates
the
changes
in
the
amounts
of
foods
consumed,
among
which
chicken
turns
out
to
be
the
most
favored
by
European
people
over
the
period.同义替换,重申关键信息It
is
clear
that
European
consumers
do
not
like
to
eat
red
meat
any
more.不要对描述对象和描述时间范畴进行主观臆测Practice
Writing(C7T4T1)
The pie
charts
below
show
units
of
electricity
productionby
fuel
source
in
Australia
and
France
in
1980
and
2000.Suggested
AnswerIn
Summary,
it
is
noteworthy
that
by
2000
these
two
countries
relied
on
different
principal
fuel
sources:
Australia
relied
oncoal
and
France
on
nuclear
power.Task
1中间段拓展+范文详解Key
WordsLogic
Structure
逻辑结构Paraphrasing同义变化General
Trend
趋势把握Task
1任务完成逻辑联系词汇来源语法变化与准确Criteria评分标准高分必应准确审题,结构鲜明逻辑有序,有效衔接词汇丰富,同义变化句式多样,能读能懂七种图形=七种写法?动态类静态类动态类C3T1T1/
C3T4T1按时/空趋势写突出变化和比较Have
a
try!Practice
Writing(C5T2T1)The
charts
below
show
the
amount
of
support
studentsof
different
age
groups
received
from
employers.时间趋势AgeGroupShoppingCentersArtGalleriesZooMuseumNightclubsDisco-thèquesCinemas20-2978%15%87%69%78%21%34%30-3985%32%37%34%56%45%43%40-4995%56%58%59%26%34%27%50-5960%81%67%78%23%16%5%AllTourists83%70%46%59%61%56%53%Practice
WritingThe
table
shows
the
percentage
of
tourists
who
visited
thedestinations
in
Llorente
on
their
last
holiday.时间趋势C2T1T1/
C5T1T1C2T1T1时间趋势按逻辑顺序时空关系静态类C4T3T1
/
C4T1T1按照数值分组写突出极值和比较Have
a
try!Percentage
of
national
consumer
expenditure
by
categery
-
2002CountryFood/Drinks/TobaccoClothing/FootwearLeisure/EducationIreland28.91%6.43%2.21%Italy16.36%9.00%3.20%Spain18.80%6.51%1.98%Sweden15.77%5.40%3.22%Turkey32.14%6.63%4.35%Practice
Writing(C7T1T1)The
table
below
gives
information
on
consumer
spendingon
different
items
in
five
different
countries
in
2002按数值分组Practice
WritingThe
two
pie
charts
show
the
types
of
communication
used
in
1962and
in
1982.70%60%50%40%30%20%10%0%LetterPhoneComputer19621982时间趋势TASK
1
写作思路分析题型风格写作思路关键词单图多图动态按时间/空间趋势写突出比较静态按数值分组写突出特殊值多图依次写,注意图间联系突出主要趋势突出特殊值小作文怎么写?我的个性化VIP网上众说纷纭,你懂的!0
分缺考;
交白卷;完全抄袭背诵好的范文Task
1题型分析(1)Pie
ChartOverview所有图表题中最好写的一种主要是动词“占”和比例的同义替换常以同类或混合多图题型出现Tips阅卷考官经常是不会看那些图表的!!!因此文章必须逻辑清晰,如果描述得能令人在脑海里勾画出那个data
chart,这篇task1无疑会拿到高分。以下是根据某饼图的中间段第一段,你能否逆向思维,基于如下文字画出一张Piechart?According
to
the
chart,
the
largest
one
was
cheese,
whichaccounted
for
24%
of
the
total.
Chocolate
took
up
21%,becoming
the
second
largest.
Hamburger
and
French
fries
bothgot
16%,
followed
by
salad
which
made
up
12%.
All
the
restproportions,
11%
of
all,
went
to
pizza
and
non-fat
ice
cream,constituting
5%
and
6%
respectively.24%21%16%16%12%6%5%CheeseChocolateHamburgerFrenchFriesSaladPizzaNon-facticecream对比另一位考生写的:[A
Band
5Answer]According
to
the
chart,
the
largest
one
is
cheese.
It
have
24%
of
the
total.Chocolate
is
21%
and
Hamburger
and
French
fries
both
get
16%,
and
saladhas
12%.TaskAchievement字数不足,缺省数据Coherence
&
Cohesion
运用少量逻辑联系Lexical
Resources
词汇简单重复,数据描述贫乏Grammatical
Range
&
Accuracy
语法时态错误看出其中的不同之处了么?下面我们来系统学习一下
pie
chart的解题步骤Sample
WritingYou
should
spend
about
20
minutes
on
this
task.
Write
a
report
for
a
universitylecturer,
describing
the
information
shown
below.
You
should
write
at
least
150words.The
two
pie
charts
show
the
types
of
communication
used
in
1962
and
in
1982.审题出题方式
多图时
态
过去时主要特征
动态写作思路
边比较边写,语言多元化思路段落线索字数Intro主题改写,要素不能少:phone,computer,letter1962
and
in
1982~
20B
1图1与图2比较:letter说明三点:项目,所占比例与地位,两图比较>
70B2图1与图2比较:phones,computers说明三点:项目,所占比例与地位,两图比较>
70Con总结和归纳N/SIntro[A
Band
5
Answer]The
pie
charts
show
the
different
percentages
of
communication
types
in
1962and
1982,
including
phone,computerandletter.要素有所添加,但大部分照抄题目[A
VeryGoodAnswer]同义替换
The
graphs,
presented
in
pie
charts,
compare
different
communicationmethods
including
phone,computer
and
letter
used
in
1962
and
d1982.B1[A
Band
5
Answer]Letter
occupied
most
of
the
chart
in
picture
1,
and
it
become
smaller
in
picture
2.In
1962,
letter
has
50,
while
in
1982,
it
only
left
10%,
which
is
muchless.衔接手段不准确;缺少指代和替换;词汇和句型有限;语法错误明显[A
VeryGoodAnswer]过去时态逻辑衔接-顺序,转折同义替换-“占”动词,比例,被动语态,非限定从,拟人修辞
In
the
first
pie
chart,
the
entire
body
of
world’s
communication
was
dominatedby
letter,
which
took
uphalf
of
the
total.
However,letter
experienced
a
dramatic
drop
after
that.
In
the
next
20
years,
this
figure
had
a
plunge
of
only
40%,
which
turned
out
tobe
the
most
unpopular
one
of
all.The
most
popular/
The
biggest
percentageThe
second
most
popular/
The
second
biggest…The
least
popular/
The
smallest
percentage如何表示特殊值ParaphrasingA
small
percentage
of
…
(X%)The
minority
of
…
(X%)The
majority
of
…
(X%)Most
of
…
(X%)A
quarter
of
…One-fifth
of
…Half
of
…Double/Triple/Fourfold(adj&adv)Four
times
as
much
as百分比的表达ParaphrasingAccountfor,
takeup,
makeup,
constitute,
getbe
responsible
for,
be
in
charge
ofcover,
%
goes
to,
%
begiven
to,be
shared
by,动词“占”的表达Fish 30%
of
allFried
chicken 21%
ofthesurvey.Microchips the
biggestpercentage.Sporting
dogs half
of
thechart.Employees 75%
of
the
total.ExerciseFish
accounts
for
30%
of
allFriedchickentakes
up21%
ofthe
survey.Microchips
make
up
the
biggestpercentage.Sporting
dogs
represents
half
of
thechart.Employees
constitute75%
of
the
total.REF
KEYS:GMTCASRIGWord
GameYou
can’t
stop
meXOMHDFPHQOTB2
,
(1962-1982),
(phones
and
computers)
.
In
,
phone
just
35%
and
computer
of
three,
15%.
,
In
,
phone
60%,
becoming
.
,
computer
accounted
for
30%,
which
of
its
use
in
1962.过去时态逻辑衔接-并列,转折同义替换-“占”动词,倍数,时间,分词作状语[A
VeryGood
Answer]On
the
other
hand,
during
the
two
decades,
people
used
(phones
and
computers)significantly
more
than
before.
In
1962,
phonejust
got35%
and
computer
wasthe
least
used
form
of
three,
constituting
15%.
However,
In
1982,
phone
accountedfor
60%,
becoming
the
most
popular
communication
form.
Similarly,
computeraccounted
for
30%,
which
had
doubled
the
quantity
of
its
use
in
1962.Con总结趋势同义替换:项目Generally,
there
are
significant
changes
for
each
mediumssurveyed.Practice
Writing(C7T4T1)
The
pie
charts
below
show
units
of
electricity
production
by
fuelsource
in
Australia
and
France
in
1980
and2000.审题出题方式
同类多图题性
质
数据型时
态
过去时主要特征
静态+项目多写作思路
各图依次边比较边写合并同类项思路段落线索字数Intro要素也不能少:sources,
electricity,
Australia
and
France,
1980
&
2000~
20说明两个国家从1980
到2000
的总量的变化B
1说明了澳大利亚1980
年情况>
70说明了澳大利亚2000
年的情况B
2说明法国1980
年的情况>
70说明了法国2000
年的情况Con2000
年两国的主要依赖能源(国家对照)N/SIntroThecharts
thesourcesofelectricity
in
intheyears
.
The
charts
compare
the
sources
of
electricity
in
Australia
and
France
in
the
years
1980
and
2000.这次我们也试着将名词性短语改成一个句子:The
charts
indicate
how
many
units
of
electricity
were
produced
bydifferent
fuel
sources
in
Australia
and
France
between
1980
and
2000.Between
these
years
electricity
production
almost
doubled,
rising
from
100
units
to
170
in
Australia,
and
from
90
to
180
units
in
France.比较一下两个double
的用法,这两种用法在雅思图表作文中都很常用double
[vi]:
Electricity
production
almost
doubled.double
[vt]:
The
two
countries
doubled
their
electricity
production.B1In
1980
Australia
(50
units)andthe
remainder
,
hydropower(
20
units)andoil
(
10units).你只要将几个要素(coal,electricity,Australia)所在的句子成分发生变化,句式就会呈现多样性Australia
used
coal
as
the
main
electricity
sourceCoal
was
the
main
source
for
electricity
in
Australia.The
main
proportion
of
electricity
was
produced
from
coal
in
Australia.Coal
became
the
main
fuel
to
produce
electric
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