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任务回应情况（内容）Task衔接与连贯（结构）Coherenceand词汇资源（词汇 Lexical语法多样性和准确性(语法)GrticalRangeand DiscussadvantagesandTowhatextentdoyouagreeorDiscussbothviewsandgiveyourownWhatarereasons,effectsandWhat？题1：Someexpertsbelievethatitisbetterforchildrentobeginlearningaforeignlanguageatprimaryschoolratherthansecondaryschool.Dotheadvantagesofthisoutweighthedisadvantages？ (剑9-1)开头段版本（背景+观点）Traditionally,childrenbegantostudyforeignlanguagesatsecondaryschool,butnowthiscoursehasbeenintroducedtomanyprimaryschools.Thiscanhelpchildrenmastertheforeignlanguageearlier,buttherearesomeproblemsthatshouldnotbeignored.背景句其它参考写法（介词、从句、并列、动词不定式延长句子Aslearningforeignlanguageshas eapopulartrend,manystudentsstarttolearntheminprimaryschoolsTraditionally，childrenbegantostudyforeignlanguagesatsecondaryschools，butnowthiscoursehasbeenintroducedtomanyprimaryschools.开头段考官范文版本（背景+观点）：Traditionally,childrenhavebegunstudyingforeignlanguagesatsecondaryschool,butintroducingthemearlieris mendedbysomeeducationalists.Thishasbeenadoptedbysomeeducationalorindividualschools,withbothpositiveandnegative 针对题目的引出话运用词汇替换和语法技巧（切换主语Ithinkthebenefitsofthistrendoutweighitsdrawbacks.Ithinkthistrendhasbothpositiveandnegative ThistrendbringsaboutadvantagesaswellasAlthoughthisphenomenonhassomebenefits,Iamalsoconcernedaboutitsdrawbacks.Thistrendhassomebenefits,althoughtherearesomeproblemsthatshouldnotbeignored.Thispatternhassomebenefits,thoughitmayleadtosomeThereasonsforthistrendmayinvolvetherecognitionthat （5-Theobviousargumentinitsfavouristhat…(9- （剑10-Thefirstbenefitis…Tobeginwith,……Firstofall,……ItiswidelyagreedThereisnodoubtthatThereisnodenyingthatTherearehoweversome However,therearecertainlydangersintakingtimeoffatthatimportant (5-2) hasquiteanumberofadvantages,thereexistsomeDespiteallthesebenefits,peopleshouldnotignorethefactthatalsocausesmanyproblems. hasitsdrawbackswhenitbringsusalltheseTosumup,MyviewisthatBasedonthepointsoutlinedabove,IbelievethatFromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecancometotheconclusionthatInaddition，Furthermore，Also，AnotherbenefitisAnotherproblem主语用“事物”（名词或者动名词……enables(allows,helps)peopletodo……isagoodwayforpeopletodo…..maypreventpeople ngItisadjforsbtodosth.Itisadj.that从句Peoplefinditadj.todo…makesitadj.forsb.todoTherebe并列（句子并列和句子成分并列时间when，after，before，结果so，sothat，方式as）定语从句名词性从句（主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、同位语从句Tobeginwith,primaryschoolstudentscanpickuplanguagesmuchmoreeasilythanhighschoolstudents.Theirlearningislesslikelytobeaffectedbythemothertongue.Whentheygrowupintoadolescents,theymayfeelshyandreluctanttocommunicatewithothersinaforeignlanguage.Theobviousargumentinitsfavouristhatyoungchildrenpickuplanguagesmuchmoreeasilythanteenagers.Theirbrainsarestillprogrammedtoacquiretheirmothertongue,whichfacilitateslearninganotherlanguage,andunlikeadolescents,theyarenotinhibitedbyself-consciousness.Anotherbenefitisthatprimaryschoolstudentshavemoretimetolearnforeignlanguages.Astheprimarytimetableisflexible,theclasscanbedesignedtobeshorterandmorefrequent.Meanwhile,theteachercanaddmoreentertainmentelementstothecourseandmaintainlearners’enthusiasmandprogress.Thegreaterflexibilityoftheprimarytimetableallowsformorefrequent,shortersessionsandforay-centeredapproach,thusmaintaininglearners’enthusiasmandprogress.Primaryschoolteachersaregeneralists,andmaynothavethenecessarylanguageskillsthemselves.Thelearningprocessinprimaryschoolisnotcontinuousandsystematic.Ifthecourseisnotstandardised,studentswouldbeatdifferentlevelswhentheyenterthehighschool.Moreover,learningforeignlanguagestooearlymayaffecttheacquisitionofa ’smothertongue.AgoodexampleisthatmanyyoungchildreninstarttolearnEnglishataveryyoungage,buttheirabilitytospeakand 结构一结构一 版本范文结尾段：有好处，但是也需要克服弊端（有好处，弊端也可以被克服intermsoflearningotherlanguagesandunderstandingforeigncultures.Butwhenandhowprimaryschoolstudentsshouldlearnforeignlanguagesshouldalsobeconsidered.（需要克服弊端）intermsoflearningotherlanguagesandunderstandingforeigncultures.Toachievethebestresultweshouldchoosetherighttimeandadoptappropriatemethods.（需要克服弊端）版本3：Overall,earlyexposuretoforeignlanguageswouldbenefitchildrenintermsoflearningotherlanguagesandunderstandingforeigncultures.Ifwechoosetherighttimeandadoptappropriatemethods,theproblemscouldbeaddressed. issuescanbeaddressedstrategicallywithintheadopted.）Anythingwhichencourageslanguagelearningbenefitssocietyculturallyandeconomically,andearlyexposuretolanguagelearningcontributestothis.Youngchildren’sinnateabilitiesshouldbeharnessedtomakethesebenefitsmoreachievable.题2Countriesare tobuythesameproductsanywhereintheworld.Doyouthinkthisisapositiveornegativedevelopment? (剑10-3) ingsimilartoeachotherandthesameproductsareavailableforpurchasethroughouttheworld.Thishasbroughtconveniencestoourlives,butitmayleadtothelossofcultureandtraditions.开头段考官范文（背景+观点）：Itissaidthatcountriesare toeachotherbecauseoftheglobalspreadofthesameproducts,whicharenowavailableforpurchasealmostanywhere.IstronglybelievethatthismoderndevelopmentislargelydetrimentaltocultureandtraditionsThistrendcanenrichpeople’slives,asitgivespeoplemorechoicesinbuyingproductsintheirdailylives.Theycanchoosealargevarietyofforeignfoods,clothesandelectricapplianceswithoutgoingabroad.Italsohelpstravellerstoadapttothelocalenvironmentandreduce shock.Forinstance,whenafromtheUStravelsin,hecangointoWal-Marttobuynecessitiesandhaveamealinawesternrestaurant.Heismorelikelytofeelcomfortableandconvenientduringhisstayin.Theinvasionofforeignproductswouldthreatentheculturaldiversityofanation.Theproductsandbrandsreflectacountry’scustomsandcultures.Iflocalpeoplefollowthetrendtobuyforeigngoods,itstraditionalobjectswouldbeabandoned,whichwouldbealossoflocalculture.Moreover,whentouriststraveltodifferentcesoftheworld,theymayfindoutthateveryceisthesameaswhattheyhavevisitedpreviously.Thiscouldmakethemboredanddisappointedanditdoesnotimpelthemtoopentheirwalletstobuysouvenirs.Iftouristslosetheirinterestintravelling,itwouldhaveanundesirableeffectontourism.Overall,globalizationwillmakeitpossibleforpeopletobuythesameproductseverywhereintheworld.Thisseemstobeanirreversibletrend,butallnationsshouldalsotakeactiontopreservetheirownobjects,customsandcultures.结构一：（版本生活选结构二：（10-3书上考官范文版本，这种一边倒的写法比较难，不推荐文化独特性，文化多样性减：Tourismnumbersmayalsobeaffected,astravelers disillusionedwithfindingeverycejustthesameastheonetheyvisitedpreviously.Toseethesameproductsinshopstheworldoverisboring,anddoesnotimpelvisitorstoopentheirwalletsinthesamewaythattrinketsorsouvenirsuniquetotheparticularareado.版本1：Astouristsfindoutthateveryceisthesameaswhattheyhavevisitedpreviously,theymay eboredanddisappointedatthetouristsites.Theyareunwillingtoopentheirwalletstobuysouvenirs,whichwouldhaveanundesirableeffectontourism.2WhenfindoutthateveryceisthesameaswhattheyhavevisitedpreviouslyThiscouldmakethemboredanddisappointedanditdoesnotimpelthemtoopentheirwalletstobuysouvenirs.Iftouristslosetheirinterestintravelling,itwouldhaveanundesirableeffecton版本3：Astouristsfindoutthateveryceisthesameaswhattheyhavevisitedbefore,theymay eboredanddisappointed.Sincealmostallproductscanbeboughtintheirhometown,theyareunwillingtoopenthewallettobuysouvenirs.Thiscouldleadtothedeclineinthe eofthelocalernmentandpeople,whichwouldhaveanundesirableeffectontourism.theirparentsaftertheygraduateandfindjobsDoyouthinkthebenefitsoutweighitsdrawbacks？（2015-4-30）父母和孩子能够相互照顾，生活中遇到，家人会伸出援手skills（mature会（adapttothesociety（对比论证）（eItiscommonforyoungpeopleinmanycountriestolivewiththeirparentsaftertheyleaveschoolandfindjobs.Thispatternisbeneficialtofamilymemberseconomicallyandemotionally,butitmayalsoleadtosomeLivingwithparentsisagoodwaytosavethecostofliving,whichisparticularlyimportantforthosewhonewlygraduatefromschoolandearnalowsalary.Theydonotneedtorentorbuyahousebythemselvesandtheycanalsosharesomenecessitiesandelectricapplianceswiththeirparents.Besides,whenlivingunderthesameroof,parentsandadultchildrencantakecareofeachother.Whensomeoneencou