应用文讲评回复咨询慈善义卖课件-2023届高三英语二轮复习

2023.3宁波十校应用文假定你是李华，

你校学生会刚举办了“慈善义卖”(CharitySale)活动。你的澳大利亚网友David对这个活动很感兴趣，写邮件向你了解基本情况。请你给他写一封回信，介绍此次活动的有关情况。要点如下：1.活动目的和内容；2.你的心得体会。注意:1.词数80左右；（-2）2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。体裁时态人称语气要点意识审题告知信（回复咨询）一般过去时(描述慈善义卖活动)+一般现在时(第一段和第三段)第三人称(活动介绍时)+第一人称(个人心得体会)+第二人称(交际目的)informal&friendly—e-pal1.活动目的和内容；2.你的心得体会。读者意识和主题意识踩分点比重多P1写作背景+写作目的——很感兴趣+介绍有关情况P2活动目的和内容+你的心得体会P3实现交际目的(期待回信)文章结构Knowingthatyou’reinterestedin…,I’mwritingtotellsbsth.;sharesth.withsb;introducesthtosb.Ifyouwanttoknowmore,feelfreetoaskme.Haveyoueverparticipatedinsomethingsimilar?Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Aimingto+do目的，theCharitySalewasheld+地点+时间(从小到大)[+组织者].P2

活动目的和内容+你的心得体会tookplacekickedoffIfanevent,game,series,ordiscussion

kicksoff,or

iskickedoff,itbegins.开始(事件、比赛等)AimedatdoingWiththepurposeofdoingsthInordertodoTodointheschoollecturehall/ontheschoolplayground一个过去的时间点StudentUnion慈善义卖1+1(物质意义+精神意义)慈善义卖物品someunwanted/unused

butstillserviceable(能用的)/usefulitemslikesecond-handclothes,booksandsoon.homemadecakes/cookies/snackshandicrafts(手工艺品)madebystudents慈善义卖内容sellthematheavily

discountedprices/atpricesbelow

fair

market

valuedonatethemoneyweraisedtocharitiesTheCharitySaleconsistedofmanyremarkableparts/activities,rangingfromsellinghomemadecakesandsecond-handitemsatdiscountedpricestodonatingthemoneyweraisedtocharitiesaswellassomewonderfulperformancesaddingcolortotheactivity.

Withasloganof“TogetherWeCanMakeADifference”,thisactivityaimedtoraisemoneyforkidsinpoverty-hit

mountainous

regionsinChina.Duringthe3-hourbazaar(义卖),sellerssoldmanyunused

items

broughtfromhome,ranging

fromelectronicdevicestooldfancyclothes,mostly

ataprettylowprice.Themoney,alongwiththeleftgoods,went

directlytotheRedCrossandwouldbedistributedtothoseneedychildren.Thehighlightwasthatallthoseinvolvedwere

giventhe“LoveAward”asarewardfortheirgoodness(善良).你的心得体会Asavolunteer/Forme,itwasawonderfulexperiencetohavethechancetohelptheneedyandmakemeabettermyself.Throughtheactivity,Iclearlyunderstoodanysmallkindnesscouldbeofgreatvalueandwantedtolendahelpinghandunceasingly.gainasenseofsatisfactionfromdoinggooddeedsrealizethatifwealldoourbit(尽本分)tomakeacontributiontothe

charitablecause(事业),thesocietywillbebetter