建议英语作文写作

Howtowritealetterforadvice写作要点：1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2.对象：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3建议信的常用结构如下：首段：表明写作意图，陈述事由。中段：围绕问题，结构清晰、科学婉转地提出有针对性的建议,提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力尾段：简单予以希望。希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助。A．建议信开头常用句式

(照应材料,表明写作意图)1．AfterIreadyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2．Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…3．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter4.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.5.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.6.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout...7.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning______.8.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-----B.表达建议（body）1.IfIwereyou,Iwould…2.Youmayconsiderdoing…3.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.4.Iwonderifyouhaveconsideredthefollowingadvice.5.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushould…6.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…7.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…C.建议信结尾常用句式

1.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.2.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.3.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.4.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.适当运用模板Dear________，模板一：①I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon______./I'mgladtowritethelettertoyouonhowto______.

(引出主题).

②Hereareafewsuggestionsforyourreference.③First，itisimportantto______.④As

you'll________.⑤Then，italsohelpsifyou________.⑥Besides，itshouldbeagoodideato________.⑦Because________.⑧Youcanalso________.⑨I'msurethat________.

(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).

⑩I'mlookingforwardto

(表达愿望).Sincerelyyours，Signature模板二：Dear_____,

Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning___(问题).

Inmyopinion,

itwouldbemorebeneficialtotakethefollowingactions.Firstofall,Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…_______(建议一);in

addition,itshouldbeagoodideato_____(建议二);

Lastbutnotleast,

Itishightimethat

sbshoulddosth_____(建议三).

Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful./Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing如何算是一篇好文章？－覆盖了所有的要点－应用了较多的语法结构和词汇－有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。要点全词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道连接词

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：⑴参加中文学习班； ⑵看中文书刊、电视； ⑶学唱中文歌曲； ⑷交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。DearPeter,

I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell._________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题样题分析第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？要写的文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？

(order)动作是什么时候发生的？(时态)(when)第一人称一封信学好中文的几条建议说理逻辑性一般现在时第二步：搜索相关词组或句型

问题建议howtolearnChinesewell

takeaChinesecoursewatchTVandreadbookslearnandsingChinesesongsmakefriendswithmoreChinese第三步.连句成文注意：篇章的连贯性

连词的使用：1.表示次序和时间:

first(ly),firstofall,inthefirstplace,首先

second(ly),what’smore,inaddition,besides其次

finally,eventually,lastbutnotleast最后

ontheonehand(一方面)…ontheotherhand（另一方面）高一学生目前能够尝试使用已学句型：it作形式主语，定语从句，虚拟语气…DearPeter, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.

Hereareafewsuggestions.

First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou‘llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends，whowilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese. TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHua假如你叫孙军，是恩施高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：参考词汇:穿行threadone’sway天桥overpass问题建议学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小,家长接送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。第一步:Whatmustwepayattentiontowhenwritinganarticle?题材：人称

Person(Thefirst/thirdperson…)时态：Tense

(thesimplepresenttense)要点：…

aletter第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题样题分析第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？要写的文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？

(order)动作是什么时候发生的？(时态)(when)第一人称一封信建议政府采取措施舒缓交通拥挤的状况说理逻辑性一般现在时第二步：搜索相关词组或句型

问题建议学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小,家长接送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。

学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街standnextto…primary…face/befacedwith…themainstreet…There’saprimaryschoolnearourschool,andbothschoolsfacethemainstreet.Ourschoolstandsnexttoaprimaryschool,facedwith/facingthemainstreet.推荐句型：Therebe+并列句非谓语结构Standingnexttoaprimaryschool,ourschoolisfacedwith/facesthemainstreet.润色小建议Nexttoaprimaryschool将介词短语提前（全倒装）stands/lies/isourschool,facedwith/facingamainstreet.可将standnextto替换为高级词汇/短语belocatednextto(near/beside/by)border/adjoinvt.beadjacentto与…毗邻在…对面beoppositetoThetrafficisbusyduringtherushhours.高峰期交通繁忙…..traffic….duringtherushhoursDuringtherushhours,therearesomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroadthat…Duringtherushhours,thereisalotoftraffic.so….that…with结构Withsomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroad,…润色小建议“高峰期”可意译:atpeaktime，alargecurrentofcarsandpeople“交通繁忙”可译为:trafficjamcongestion交通堵塞bechokeupwithbecrammedwith被…堵塞/塞满

加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤send…to…,fetch….,

非谓语结构….Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,makingthetrafficheavier.,which….加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤What’smore,…pickup….make….Tomakethings

worse/what’sworse,manyparentscomingtopickuptheirchildrenmakethestreetmorecrowded.Inaddition/Additionally,manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.What’smore,parentsoftenattendtheirkidstoschool,resultinginmoreserioustrafficjams.Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.makingthesituationmoreserious.makingthetrafficheavier可意译为：so….that….=too…toThechildrenaresoyoungthatparentshavetosendthemtoschoolandfetchthemhome,which

makes/makingthetrafficheavier.making可替换为：causing,leadingto,resultingin“send…fetch…”可替换为短语：pickup润色小建议

学生过街在车辆中穿行危险threadone’sway，whendoingItisdangerousforthestudentstothreadtheirwayamongbusesandcarswhencrossingtheroad.固定句型Itis+adj.for…todo….Studentsarerisking

theirlives

tothreadtheirwayamongcars.润色小建议2.Someareexposedtodangerwhencrossingtheocean/seaofcars.

灵活运用其它的短语进行意译：

适当增加形容词和副词：itisextremelydangerous，itisofgreat/tremendousdanger政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。suggest/suggestion,

takesteps/measures/actiontodo…suchasMysuggestionisthatthegovernmentshould…表语从句固定句型Itishightimethat…(虚拟语气)Itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuilding…Isuggestthatthegovernmentshouldtakestepssuchasbuildinganoverpass.简单句1.Inordertoreleasethestressoftrafficproblems,…润色小建议2.Aimedatsolvingtheseproblems,thegovernmentshould…A.适当添加一些意思（过渡句）Thegovernment

shouldpaymoreattentiontoitandtrytosolveit.B.语义的意译3.Seeingthesematters,neverwillIstopurgingourgovernmenttotakesomemeasures.Forthesakeofimprovingthequalityoftraffic,itissignificanttobuild…C.添加形容词和副词Istronglysuggest…,active/effectivemeasures第三步.连句成文但要注意：篇章的连贯性Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facingamainstreet.___________,it’scrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour._______________childrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.___________,it’sofgreatdangerforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic._________________,itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass.A.AsaconsequenceB.AccordingtothephenomenonstatedaboveC.WhenitcomestotrafficjamsD.WhatmakesthingsworseisthatA.C.D.B.反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例不推荐字体优秀作文范例1优点：考生能灵活地处理各个信息点，大量运用非谓语，介词短语，从句，连词等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显个性和语言功底。优秀作文范例2优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用therebe句型，介词短语，从句，非谓语，套用句式等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。优秀作文范例3优点：考生运用倒装句，so…that句式，精彩的表达以及虚拟语气等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。优秀作文范例4优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底蕴。优秀作文范例5优秀作文范例6Congestionn.阻塞,拥挤,充血CompositionsfromStudentTimes假如你是李华，你的笔友黎明来信说他的父母工作变动刚转入一所学校，由于性格内向，生活经历与同学差异很大等原因，在新学校没有知心朋友，很苦恼。请根据以上提示，给他写封回信，谈谈你对如何交友的看法。注意：词数100左右翻译下列句子：我很高兴了解到你现在一所新学校就读。（learn）Iamgladtolearnthatyouarestudyinginanewschool.如果你现在没有知心朋友，不用着急。(if)Donotworryifyouhavenorealfriendsrightnow.虽然你是一个性格内向的男孩，而且生活经历与你目前同学差异很大，只要你遵循下列提示不是没有可能交上好朋友的。（although，aslongas)Althoughyouarenotanoutgoingboyandhavedifferentlifeexperiencesfromyourpresentclassmates,itisnotimpossibletomakegoodfriendsaslongasyoutakethefollowingtips.首先，如果你能与同学同甘共苦，就会交上朋友。（firstofall)Firstofall,youcanmakefriendswithothersifyousharetheirjoysandsorrows.第二，你应该向同学敞开你的心扉。Secondly,youshouldopenyourhearttoyourfriends,holdingbacknothing.最后，一旦有了朋友，你必须不断用善举来保持你们的友谊。Lastbutnotleast,onceyouhaveafriend,youmustconstantlymaintainyourfriendshipwithactsofkindness.希望你很快找到真诚的友谊。Ihopeyouwillfindtruefriendshipsoon.连句成篇DearLiMing,Iamgladtolearnthatyouarestudyinginanewschool,whichisagoodchanceforyoutoturnoveranewleaf.（适当增加的细节，高级表达）Donotworryifyouhavenorealfriendsrightnow.Althoughyouarenotanoutgoingboyandhavedifferentlifeexperiencesfromyourpresentclassmates,itisnotimpossibletomakegoodfriendsaslongasyoutakethefollowingtips.首先，如果你能与同学同甘共苦，就会交上朋友。（firstofall)Firstofall,youcanmakefriendswithothersifyousharetheirjoysandsorrows.第二，你应该向同学敞开你的心扉。Secondly,youshouldopenyourhearttoyourfriends,holdingbacknothing.(增加细节，闪光句子）最后，一旦有了朋友，你必须不断用善举来保持你们的友谊。（Lastbutnotleast;once)Lastbutnotleast,onceyouhaveafriend,youmustconstantlymaintainyourfriendshipwithactsofkindness.希望你很快找到真诚的友谊。Ihopeyouwillfindtruefriendshipsoon.=Hopefully,youwillfindtruefriendshipsoon.=Itishopedthatyouwillfindtruefriendship.DearLiMing,Iamgladtolearnthatyouarestudyinginanewschool,whichisagoodchanceforyoutoturnoveranewleaf.Donotworryifyouhavenorealfriendsrightnow.Althoughyouarenotanoutgoingboyandhavedifferentlifeexperiencesfromyourpresentclassmates,itisnotimpossibletomakegoodfriendsaslongasyoutakethefollowingtips.Firstofall,youcanmakefriendswithothersifyousharetheirjoysandsorrows.

Secondly,youshouldopenyourhearttoyourfriends,holdingbacknothing.Lastbutnotleast,onceyouhaveafriend,youmustconstantlymaintainyourfriendshipwithactsofkindness.Ihopeyouwillfindtruefriendshipsoon.仿写下面是一个中学生给某报编辑部写的一封信，仔细阅读并就信的内容以编辑的名义给此中学生回一封信。DearEditor，Iamanactivegirl，andIspeakandlaughloudlyintheclassroom，likeaboy.Idon'tcareaboutsmallmatters.Onthecontrary，myneighbor，thegirlwhositsnexttome，speaksquietlyanddarenotdothethingsIoftendo.Icanunderstandthis.WhatIcan'tstandisthatsheoftengetsangrywithmeaboutsmallthings.HowcanIgetalongwithher?Sunny，Shandong注意：1.书信格式要规范；2．回信就原信内容给出至少三条建议(如谈心，相互理解，参加他们的生日等活动，谈论共同话题，分享快乐等等)。[思路分析]

写作时应注意下面几点：1．确定文体：这是一篇应用文，写作中应注意书信的常规格式。2．主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。3．主体人称：由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。[词汇热身]

1．与某人交朋友________________2．依我看________________3．与某人谈心________________4．参加某人……活动________________5．分享快乐________________6．出去散步________________【答案】

1.makefriendswithsb.

2.inmyopinion3