教你如何衔接与过渡2

写作进阶提升之四

——教你如何衔接与过渡

写作进阶提升衔接与过渡：

把要点按照时间先后，空间顺序，逻辑关系，因果关系整理，加以适当调整，加入过渡词来串句成文。体会一下Eg1.Heworkshard.Heisnotlikelytohaveasuccessfulcareer.Hewillstillbeausefulpersoninthesociety.Heworkshard,butheisnotlikelytohaveasuccessfulcareer.However,hewillstillbeausefulpersoninthesociety.Eg2.Becausehehelpedmeintime,Ipassedtheexam.Thankstohistimelyhelp,Ipassedtheexam.Asaresultofhistimelyhelp,Ipassedtheexam.Hehelpedmeintime,asaresult,Ipassedtheexam.表时间关系的关联词开始

然后

最终atfirst,atthebeginningof,inthebeginning,tobeginwith,first(ly),firstofall

atlast,atlength,finally,eventually,intheendafterawhile,afterwards,andthen,later,afterthat,next,shortlyafter,thenextmoment同时

atthesametime,inthemeantime,meanwhile过去

atthattime,beforebythattime,earlier,formerly,inthepast现在

atpresent,presently,rightnow,nowadays,uptonowEg.ThenIwillbehappytobeyourguide.

Thenextmomentthecarhithimwhilehewascrossingtheroad.其他

fromnowon,immediately,rightaway,rightnow,shortly,soon,until,when,assoonas,sincethen,forthetime,themoment/minute,hardly...when,nosooner...than,soonerorlater,gradually,beforelong,suddenly

表空间关系的关联词说明文和描写文中，表空间方位和顺序

before,behind,below,beneath,between,here,there,where,beyond,nearby,under,above,over,ontheright/left,in(the)frontof,inthemiddleof,atthebackof,atthebottomof,oppositeto,nextto,ononeside,ontheotherside,atthefoot/endof,west/eastofEg.Ourlibraryisinthecenteroftheschool.Thereisabeautifulgardeninfrontofitandourclassroombuildingisrightbehindit.表起始关系的关联词Firstofall,aboveall,sofar,sofaras,accordingto,tobeginwith,inmyopinion

表顺序，序列关系的关联词

firstofall,tobegin/startwith,first(ly)...second(ly)...third(ly),inthefirstplace...andinthesecondplace...,foronething...andforanother...,inmyopinion,accordingto,asfarasIamconcerned,asyouknowEg.TherearethreereasonswhyIlikehim:first,heishonest,second,heiskind,andthird,heishandsome.表递进的关联词

what’smore,moreover,

furthermore,additionally,inaddition,

also,too,besides,aswell

,still,notonly...butalso,what’sworse,tomakethingsworse,worsestill

Eg.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.What’smore,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls.表转折的关联词

(al)though,however,onthecontrary,but,inspiteof,nevertheless,yet,otherwise,despite,while,instead

Eg.Icoveredmyearswithhands,butitwasnouse.Althoughthecityismodernandconvenient,therearestillsomeproblems.表因果的关联词asaresult,thus,so,therefore,hence,accordingly,consequently,asaconsequence(of),

because,for,forthisreason,as,since,onaccountof,

thanksto,forthesakeof,dueto,owingto

表解释说明或列举的关联词

forexample,

forinstance,

take...foranexample,

suchas,thatis,asfollows,toillustrate,namely,inotherwords,andsoon,believeitornot,totellthetruth,inthiscase,inparticular,

particularly,

specially

Eg.Icanfollowmyowninterestssuchasreadingbooks,visitingmuseumsandtakingcomputerlessons.表异同关系的关联词

similarly,

likewise,like,unlike,justas,inlikemanner,

inthesameway,but,

yet,however,

nevertheless,

ontheotherhand,

onthecontrary,

incontrast,instead,atthesametime,comparedwith,differentfromEg.Tomysurprise,myfatherdidn’tcriticizeme.Hepraisedmeinstead.表平行，对等或选择关系的关联词

and,both...and,aswell(as),neither...nor,or,either...or,notonly...butalso,besides,what’smore

Eg.ThiswilldoalotofharmnotonlytotheirChineselearningbutalsototheirfutureEnglishlearning.表强调的关联词

do,indeed,actually,really,truly,especially,tobehonest,tobefrank,inparticular,torepeat,aboveall,obviouslyEg.Aboveall,Icanlearnmoreaboutnature.表条件，让步的关联词If,unless,so/aslongas,onconditionthatAs,though,evenif/though,whoever,nomatterwhat表结论或摘要的关联词

asaresult,finally,so,therefore,accordingly,thus,consequently,inconclusion,inshort,inbrief,inaword,tosumup,ingeneral,onthewhole,allinallEg.Inshort,thingshavebegantoimprovesinceschoolswerecalledontoreducelearningload.表插入的关联词Ithink/believe,tobehonest,generallyspeaking,asfarasIknow,asweallknowpractice因为他充分利用时间学习英语，所以顺利通过高考。2.他有许多朋友，但没有一个富有。BecausehemadegooduseofhistimetolearnEnglish,hepassedthecollegeentranceexam.Hehasmanyfriends,noneofwhomarerich.3.因为他弄丢了钥匙，所以进不了房间。4.李平是我的朋友，我很喜欢他。Havinglosthiskey,hecouldn’tentertheroom.LipingismyfriendandIlikehimverymuch.1.Johnisclever,diligentandpolite,_____________,heisagoodstudent.2.Lucyis12andLilyis11,_______,LucyisoneyearolderthanLily.3.Heisagoodmaster________hetreatshisservantswell.4.Youmustworkharder,___youwillbeputintoanotherclass.5.Heispoor,___heiscontented.6.Somepeoplewastefood_____othersdon’thaveenough.inotherwordsthatisbecauseorbutwhile

Radioandtelevisioncanbeseeneverywhere.____theTVsetismoreusefulthantheradio________onTVyoucanseeandhearwhatishappeningintheworld._______