2023年广州调研考（及建议信）讲义 高三英语应用文训练

一、考场真题

第一节（满分15分）假定你是李华,

你校交换生Kevin准备熬夜观看世界杯足球赛,

你认为这样做不合适、请你给Kevin写一封邮件,

内容包括：1.

解释理由2.

提出建议,注意：1.

写作词数应为80个左右；2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。参考词汇：世界杯

WorldCupDearKevin,Ihopethise-mailfindsyouwell.

Yourssincerely,LiHua（来源：2023年8月广州市调研考）建议信谋篇布局：STEPSofletterofgivingadviceBackgroundinformation+writingpurposeDearKevin,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.I'veheardaboutyourplantostayupallnightfortheWorldCupsoccermatch,andwhileIunderstandyourexcitement(上步缓和语气),I’dliketoshareinsights.(背景+写作目的)Givingyouradvice:softenyourlanguagewhengivingadviceFirstly,maintainingahealthysleepscheduleiscrucial.Stayingupallnightcandisruptyoursleeppatternsandnegativelyimpactyourwell-being.Thelackofsleepmightalsoleadtoreducedconcentrationlowerenergylevels,andevenaffectyouracademicperformance.(述理由)Explainthereasonswhyyoufeelthewayyoudo.Irecommendconsideringamorebalancedapproach.Insteadofsacrificingsleepentirely,tryadjustingyourscheduletocatchthekeymomentsofthegame.Prioritisingyourhealthwillallowyoutoenjoythematchwithoutcompromisingyourwell-being.(提供建议+justification)Closewithanoteofencouragementandconfidence.Pleasetakethesesuggestionstoheartasyoumakeyourdecision.Balancingyourenjoymentofthegamewithyouroverallhealthisessential.语料准备：1.Backgroundinformation+writingpurposeEXAMPLEItrustthisletterfindsyouingoodspirits.I'vebeenmadeawareofthechallengesyou'recurrentlyencountering(背景),andIwouldliketooffermysupportandguidanceduringthistime(写信目的)SAMPLEPHRASESI1）Backgroundinfo:explainthatyouarerespondingtoarequestforadviceaboutaproblemorsituation.Thankyouforyourletteraskingformyopinionon...Iamhonouredthatyouwouldaskmeforadviceon...2)Writingpurpose:Iamwritinginreplytoyourletteraskingforadviceabout3)Devicestoimprovecohesion:Ihopethefollowingadvicewillbeofsomehelptoyou.2.Givingyouradvice:softenyourlanguagewhengivingadviceEXAMPLE[wouldliketosuggestconsideringasystematicapproachtoaddressingthesituation(总).(Doingsth)canoftenmakeitlessoverwhelming.Itmightalso(段内逻辑)behelpfultoseekadvicefromindividualsyoutrustand(并列整合语块，提升语言质感)reachoutforassistancewheneverneeded.SamplePhrasesforStep2itseemslikeagoodideatosuggestthatyou……thebestadviceIcangivetoyouis……wouldrecommendthat……wouldbemoreeffective……wouldadviseyouto……3.ExplainthereasonswhyyoufeelthewayyoudoEXAMPLEMyadvice(衔接建议与理由)isbasedontheprinciplethatafocused,step-by-stepstrategytendstoleadtomoresustainablesolutions.Additionally,involvingtrustedindividualsoffersdiverseperspectivesthatcanshedlightonaspectsyoumightnothaveconsideredotherwise(理由与此前建议匹配)SamplePhrasesforStep3theadvantagesofthiscourseofactionthinkyouneedtoconsiderwillpayoffintheendwouldbeinyourbestintereststowouldbetoyouradvantageto4.ClosewithanoteofencouragementandconfidenceEXAMPLEYourdeterminationandstrengtharetrulyinspiring,andI'mconfidentthatyou'llfindawaytoovercomethissituation.下水作文：DearKevin,I

hopethise-mailfindsyouwell.

LearningthatyouaretostayuplatetowatchtheWorldCup,

Icanwellrelatetoyourpassionforfootballbutdon’tthinkitagooddecision.Stayinguplatewillbreakyourregularsleeppattern,leavingyouwideawakeatnightandsleepyanddizzyinthedaytime.Shortofsleepandfeelingphysicallyandmentallyexhausted,youwon’tbeabletofocusonyouracademicwork,whichshouldbeyourtoppriority.Withtheseconcerns,Ithinkyou,anexchangestudent,shouldneverdosoattheriskofyourhealthandacademicendeavors.AsfortheWorldCup,youcanwatchtherecordedversionatamoreappropriatetime.Hopemyideascanbeseriouslyconsidered.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua三、迁移练习

假定你是李华，你的朋友Alice最近沉迷于手机游戏，影响了她的学习和健康。请你给Alice写一封邮件，表达你的关心，并提出建议。

内容包括：1.表达关心，陈述问题；2.解释问题的影响；3.提出建议，如何平衡娱乐与学业。

（请确保在邮件中使用合适的称呼和结束语）参考范文DearAlice,

Ihopeyou’rewell.

I'venoticedyour

increasedengagementinmobilegames.

Whiletheycanbefun,I’mconcernedabouttheimpactonyourstudiesandhealth.

Iunderstandthatgamescanbeentertainingandawaytorelax,

butI’veobservedthat

yourdedicationtothemseemstobeaffectingyourstudiesandwell-being.It’simportanttostrikeabalancebetweenleisureactivitiesandresponsibilities.

Mysuggestionwouldbeto

setspecifictimelimitsforgamingandallocatededicatedhoursforyourstudiesandotheractivities.

Thisway,youcanenjoythegameswithoutcompromisingyouracademicandpersonalwell-being.

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