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申请信一般现在时I,you三段式applyforpositionBeijingeraprivilegeanddutyvoluntaryservicepromotePara.2:你的优势（语言的掌握和使用+与人沟通的能力+冬奥会的知识+参加过交换生项目）有资格的_________________熟练运用英语_______________流利地说英语________________以便更好地与外国客人交流____________________有信心做某事________________引导和帮助___________冬季运动的广博的知识参与一个国际交换生项目__________________喜欢传播中国文化_衔接词：首先_________而且_________另外__________bequalifiedforspeakEnglishfluentlybeconfidentindoingsth.guidanceandhelprich/wideknowledgeofwintersportsbeinvolvedinaninternationalexchangestudentprogramenjoyspreadingChineseculturefirstofallBesides/What’smoreInadditionPara.3:感激+请对方考虑+期待回复我将不胜感激如果你能......______________________Iwouldappreciateitifyoucould...把我的请求纳入考虑之中_____________________takemyrequestintoconsiderationDearSir/Madame,IhavelearnedthatvolunteersforBeijingWinterOlympicGamesareneeded.I’mwritingtoapplyforthisposition.AsaBeijinger,IthinkitisaprivilegeanddutyformetoofferthebestvoluntaryservicetoourforeignguestsandmeanwhilepromoteChineseculture.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity.Pleasetakemyrequestintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua同学们，你曾经误会过别人吗？或者你被别人误会过吗？Who：人物关系图_________when:_________what:_________where:_________why:____how:____Predicttheendingofthestory：_________________________________________________________Whatwillthewriterlearnfromtheexperience?________________________________________________I，mywife,theotherjoggerinthemorningmanyyearsagoImisunderstoodtheotherjoggerasamuggerintheparkHebumpedintomeandIthoughtmymoneywasmissing.Andhegavemethemoney.Iapologizedtohimandheforgaveme.Itistooearlytojudgeapersonbeforeyouknowthetruth.Para.1:1.

HowdidIfeel?根据段首句确定第一句:_____________________________________

2.Whatwasinmymind?

3.Whatweretheregretandreflectionaboutmyrudeness

?(两个反问句)我怎么能对他这么粗鲁在不知道真相的情况下？HowcouldIbesorude...?我为什么不耐心地听他解释呢？Whynot...explanationpatiently?

4.WhatcouldIdothen?

根据续写第二段首句Paragraph2:Forseveraldays,Iwaitedatthesamespot.定第一段结尾(决定找机会向他道歉+第二天早上去公园找他，失败

____________________________________________extremelyguilty，misunderstoodinnocentandfrightened，appeareddecidedtofindachance,apologizedtohim，failedPara.2:4.Whatwastheresultafterwaitingforseveraldays?根据段首句确定第一句:Buttomydisappointment,hedidn'tturnup/appear.____5.WhendidIseethejoggeragain?aweeklater6.WhatdidIdoandsaytohim?(还钱+道歉)

returnedsth.tosb/gavesth.tosb.

saidsorrytosb.againandagain7.Didheforgiveme?forgavesb.8.Whatdidhesaytome?

Itdoesn'tmatter./Nevermind.Don’tmakethesamemistakenexttime.9.HowdoIfeelaftermanyyearsaboutthething?

stillfeelmycheeksburningwithshame.10.WhatdidIlearnfromthisexperience?(不要太早评判一个人在知道真相前)Para.1:1.

HowdidIfeel?根据段首句确定第一句:_____________________________________

2.Whatwasinmymind?

3.Whatweretheregretandreflectionaboutmyrudeness

?(两个反问句)我怎么能对他这么粗鲁在不知道真相的情况下？HowcouldIbesorudetohimwithoutknowingthetruth?我为什么不耐心地听他解释呢？Whynotlistentohisexplanationpatiently?

4.WhatcouldIdothen?

根据续写第二段首句Paragraph2:Forseveraldays,Iwaitedatthesamespot.定第一段结尾(决定向他道歉+第二天早上去公园找他，失败

____________________________________________Fortherestoftheday,IfeltextremelyguiltybecauseImisunderstoodhim.Hisinnocentandfrightenedfaceappearedinmymindagain.Paragraph1:Lookingatthemoneyonthetable,Istoodthere,shocked.

Fortherestoftheday,Ifeltextremelyguilty,withtheinnocent

jogger

andhis"helplessness"onmymind."HowcouldIbesorudetohimwithoutknowingthetruth?Whywasitthatthejoggergavemethe

money?WhatifIwaitedforhimtoexplain?"IstillrememberhisfrightenedfacewhenIscaredhimawaylikeamonster.Idecidedtofindachancetoapologizetohim.Thenext

morning,Igotupandwenttothe

park

asusual,butnotforjogging.IjusthungaroundwhereImetthatjogger,butinvain.Paragraph2:Forseveraldays,Iwaitedatthesamespot.

Buttomydisappointment,hedidn'tturnup.ItwasalmostaweeklaterbeforeIfinallysawhimagain.I,the"mugger",gavethe$10bill

backtohimandsaidsorrytohimagainandagain.Fortunately,hefo