读后续写品德故事类贫困画家与违背诺言的女士之间的故事课件高考英语一轮复习

高考英语读后续写语篇练习品德故事——贫困画家与违背诺言的女士之间的故事1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文4续写原文Theyoungpainterknewthewomanbrokeherpromiseonpurpose,sohefeltannoyed.Hesaidinafirmvoice,“No,Iwouldprefertokeepthispaintingratherthanbehumiliatedbyyou.Todayyoubreakyourwordandsomedayyoumustpay20timesforit.”“Whatajoke!20timeswillbe40,000!Iwon’tbestupidtopay40,000dollarstobuythepainting!”“Well,we’dbetterwaitandsee,”theyoungartistshoutedtothewomanwholeftangrily.Afterthestimulationofsuchanincident,thepaintermovedoutofthissadplace,studiedunderacknowledgedteachersandworkedharddayandnight.Morethanadozenyearslater,hefinallystartedanewwayandbecamepopularinthecircleofart.However,thewomanhadforgottentheartist’spaintingandwordsthenextday.5段首句Para1：Oneday,thatfamouspainterdecidedtoholdanartexhibition.Para2：Thewomanwenttherehurriedly,apologisedamilliontimesandpromisedthatshewouldbuyherportraitassoonaspossible.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个靠画肖像为生的画家过着贫穷的生活，他为一位女士画像，结果女士故意违背诺言，不按约好的价钱支付费用，让画家很生气。十几年后，画家终于在艺术界大受欢迎，决定举办一次艺术展，展览上画家把这位女士的画像挂出来，取名《小偷》，女士得知后赶到，给画家道歉，最终画家把画像还给了她，希望她能做一个诚实的女人。9续写思路分析Para1:Oneday,thatfamouspainterdecidedtoholdanartexhibition.由第一段首句内容“一天，那位著名的画家决定举办一次艺术展。”可知，第一段可描写画家把女士的画像挂出来，取名《小偷》，消息传开了，最后传到了那个女人的耳朵里。10续写思路分析Para2:Thewomanwenttherehurriedly,apologisedamilliontimesandpromisedthatshewouldbuyherportraitassoonaspossible.由第二段首句内容“女子匆匆赶到，道了无数次歉，并承诺会尽快买下她的画像。”可知，第二段可描写画家是如何应对女士道歉的以及事情的最终结局。11续写思路分析续写线索举办艺术展——挂出女士画像，取名《小偷》——女士得知消息——女士赶到——女士道歉——画家赠画12续写素材13续写素材可用句型：【高分句型1】Beforethewomancouldpay,thepainterexplainedthatitwasagiftforher,hopingshewouldbeanhonestwomanwithoutvanity.(运用了that引导宾语从句)【高分句型2】Withmanyvisitorsaround,soembarrassedwasshethatshestoodthereawkwardly,feelingthebloodrushtoherface.(运用了部分倒装)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Oneday,thatfamouspainterdecidedtoholdanartexhibition.Presentintheexhibitionhallwerecrowdsofcelebritiesandartists.Itwasafeastinthecircleofart.Inthecentrewasapaintingentitled“Thief”,pricedat40,000dollars.Strangelyenough,thewomaninthepaintinglookedjustthesameasthevainwomaninreality.Wordspreadandfinallyitreachedthewoman’sears.Sherecalledtheincidentandthepainter.Itdawnedonherthatthepainterhumiliatedherinthisway.16范文呈现Thewomanwenttherehurriedly,apologisedamilliontimesandpromisedthatshewouldbuyherportraitassoonaspossible.Thesuccessfulpainterturnedhisbacktoher,speechless.Withmanyvisitorsaround,soembarrassedwasshethatshestoodthereawkwardly,feelingthebloodrushtoherface.Thenthepainterturnedaroundandhandedhertheportrait.Beforethewomancouldpay,thepainterexplainedthatitwasagiftforher,hopingshewouldbeanhonestwomanwithoutvanity.Anyway,forthepainter,itwasthisincidentthatmadehimwhatheistoday.17范文译文一天，那个著名的画家决定举办一个艺术展。出席展览大厅的是一群名人和艺术家。这是一场艺术界的盛宴。中心有一幅名为《小偷》的画，售价4万美元。奇怪的是，画中的女人看起来和现实中虚荣的女人一模一样。消息传开了，终于传到了那个女人的耳朵里。她回忆起这件事和画家。她突然意识到画家以这种方式羞辱了她。18范文译文这位女士匆匆忙忙地去了那里，道歉了一百万次，并承诺会尽快买下她的肖像。这位成功的画家背对她，无言以对。周围有很多来访者，她非常尴尬，尴尬地站在那里，感觉鲜血直流。然后画家转过身来，把画