高二英语9月考试读后续写 讲义

【续写原文】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ThesummerbeforeIlefthometouniversity,Ihadaverypleasantandmeaningfultalkwithmydadabouttheolddaysthatwespenttogether.Wecameupwithanobjectthatwebothrememberedclearly.Itwasmyveryfirstbicycle.

在我离家上大学的前一个夏天，我和爸爸聊了聊我们在一起的旧时光，聊得很愉快，也很有意义。我们想出了一个我们都记得很清楚的东西。这是我的第一辆自行车。MymemorytoldmeIgotitwhenIwasseven,whowascheatedtorideitforfiftyyardsalonethefirsttimeItried!我的记忆告诉我，我七岁的时候就得到了它，我第一次尝试时，他被骗了，独自骑了五十码！Mydadputtogetherallthesmallpiecesofthebicyclefromabeautifulmaterialthathecalled,“Yourowncar.”OfcourseIknewhehadsomemagicalability,butIdidn'tthinkhecouldmakesuchanawesomeobject.Headdedtheseatandthepedals(踏板)sothatIwouldnothaveanyproblems.MydadrecalledthebicyclewasthesmallesthecouldfindwhileIrememberhowhugeitwas.IwassoafraidofitandtherewasnowaythatIwasgoingtocontrolthatmonster-sizedmaterial.ThebicyclewasleftinmybackyardasadecorationforamonthbecauseIrefusedtorideit.Honestly,Iwasscaredtotryit.我爸爸用一种漂亮的材料把自行车的所有小部件组装在一起，他称之为“你自己的车”。我当然知道他有一些神奇的能力，但我没想到他能做出这么棒的东西。他增加了座椅和踏板(踏板)这样我就不会有任何问题。我爸爸回忆说，这辆自行车是他能找到的最小的，而我记得它有多大。我非常害怕它，我无法控制那种怪物大小的材料。这辆自行车被放在我家后院装饰了一个月，因为我拒绝骑它。老实说，我很害怕尝试。Amonthlater,mydadgavemealecturetoteachmewhatbeingamanwasallabout.Iwasfinallydeterminedtotryit.MydadwasproudofmeandIfeltverymanly.HeandIwenttotheparktoseewhatwecoulddothere.一个月后，我爸爸给我上了一堂课，教我什么是做人。我终于下定决心要试一试。我爸爸为我感到骄傲，我觉得自己很有男子汉气概。他和我去了公园看看我们能在那里做些什么。Theparkwasemptywhenwearrived.Ihadnodoubtthatmydadtoldeverybodynottobetherebecausewehadtouseit.Ifeltsorryforotherpeople,butIwasproudtohavesuchanomnipotent(全能的)personasmydad.我们到达时公园里空无一人。我毫不怀疑，我爸爸告诉每个人不要去那里，因为我们必须使用它。我为其他人感到难过，但我为有这样一个无所不能的人而感到骄傲(全能的)就像我爸爸一样。Wefoundasmoothandopenspace.MydadwasholdingthebackpartoftheseattomakesureIdidn'tfall.HepromisedmethatIwasnotgoingtofallbecausehewouldberunningrightbehind,holdingthebicyclefirmlyforme.我们找到了一个平坦开阔的空间。我爸爸扶着座椅的后部，确保我没有摔倒。他向我保证我不会摔倒，因为他会在后面跑，紧紧地为我抱着自行车。注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Iturnedaroundandfoundmydadwasnotbehind.

Istartedtopedalandthebicyclemoved.

【文本分析】文本故事回忆了作者童年时与父亲一起学习骑自行车的经历，刻画了一位能干温情的父亲形象，同时也记录了在父亲的鼓励下，作者克服了恐惧心理，成长为勇敢的男子汉。【续写分析】根据续写第一段首句“Iturnedaroundandfoundmydadwasnotbehind.”可以设想，此段应该描写作者第一次骑车，看到父亲撒开手后的恐惧心理，不知如何处理自行车，进而摔倒的过程。另外，根据续写第二段首句“Istartedtopedalandthebicyclemoved.”可知，本段还必然写在父亲的鼓励下，作者重拾信心，再次尝试。续写第二段首句为“Istartedtopedalandthebicyclemoved.”，本段应该写在父亲的鼓励和指导下，作者克服恐惧心理，逐渐学会了骑自行车并享受其中。本段还可以添加作者的情绪变化和对父亲伟岸形象的描写，以此回扣原文。【原文衔接】考生在续写过程中，原文可供衔接的部分包括：IhadaverypleasantandmeaningfultalkwithmydadabouttheolddaysthatwespenttogetherwhowascheatedtorideitforfiftyyardsalonethefirsttimeItried

hehadsomemagicalabilityIwassoafraidofitandtherewasnowaythatIwasgoingtocontrolthatmonster-sizedmaterial.ThebicyclewasleftinmybackyardasadecorationforamonthbecauseIrefusedtorideit.Honestly,Iwasscaredtotryit.mydadgavemealecturetoteachmewhatbeingamanwasallabout.Iwasfinallydeterminedtotryit.MydadwasproudofmeandIfeltverymanly.Iwasproudtohavesuchanomnipotent(全能的)personasmydadWefoundasmoothandopenspace.MydadwasholdingthebackpartoftheseattomakesureIdidn'tfall.HepromisedmethatIwasnotgoingtofallbecausehewouldberunningrightbehind,holdingthebicyclefirmlyforme.以上句子或段落，都为续写提供了很好的衔接思路，尤其是基础差的考生，借鉴这些内容，通过paraphrase的方法，重述句子，巧妙地应用于写作中，采用首尾呼应的方法升华主题，必然会起到事半功倍的效果。【下水文】Iturnedaroundandfoundmydadwasnotbehind.

Atonceawaveofpanic

rushesoverme.My

hands

heldthehandlestightly,

and

myarms

became

trembling.Iwasatalossforwhattodonextand

even

didn'tknowwheretoputmyfeet,soIyelled,

“Daddy,help!”

Everythingthathadgonesmoothlyjustnowsuddenlyturnedintoa

mess.

Iendedupfallingoffthebike,crying.MydadcheckedmetomakesureIwasn’thurt.Thenhecomfortedgently,

“

Fiftyyardsbyyourself!Anywayanicestart.Wouldyouliketotryagain,honey?”

Withhisencouragingsmile,Inoddedtearfully.

(100words)Istartedtopedalandthebicyclemoved.

Notholdingthebike,mydadranaside,coaching,

“Honey,theridingclothingcanprotectyou.Bebrave.Eyesstraightahead.”

Underhisguidance,Iwasmovingforwardslowlyandshakily.Amomentlater,Itriedgoingfastertomakebalancingeasier.Focusedahead,Iwasn'tsoscaredanymore.Iactuallyenjoyedeverymomentonthebike.Finally,theinstantIcametoastopsuccessfully,Iexclaimed,

“Yeah,Imadeit.”

Mydadhuggedmeproudly.Icherished

those

good

years

we

spent

together.

Inmylifeitwasmydad

who

encouraged

metobearealman.

(100words)参考范文：Iturnedaroundandfoundmydadwasnotbehind.IwassoscaredthatIfeltlikeIwasgoingtofallanytime.Sureenough,aftershakingmybodyseveraltimes,Ifelltotheground.Iwasveryangrywithmyfatherwhyletmeridealone.Myfathersmiledandsaidtome,“It'sOK,sticktoitforawhile."Thenhestartedtoteachmehowtokeepbalance.Ilearnedtheskillsmyfathertaughtmeandrepeatedthepracticeseveraltimes.我转过身来，发现我爸爸不在后面。我非常害怕，觉得自己随时都会摔倒。果不其然，在摇晃了几次身体之后，我倒在了地上。我很生气我爸爸为什么让我一个人骑。父亲微笑着对我说：“没关系，坚持一会儿。”然后他开始教我如