外研版（2019）必修 第一册Unit 4 Friends forever Writing an ending to a story课件

B1U4FriendsforeverDevelopingideas--WritinganendingtoastoryReviewAfterTwentyYearsCanyouretellthestorytotheclass?Lead-inAfterTwentyYearsCanyouimaginewhatwillhappentoBobafterbeingreleasedfromjail?1.HowdidBobfeelwhenhefinallygotoutofjail?2.WhodidBobmeetafterbeingreleasedfromjail?Whatisthecharacter'sname?3.WhathappenedafterBobmetthecharacter?4.WhyJimmynamedhissonafterBob?Firstreading:Readthestoryandanswerthequestions.Hefeltlostandhelpless.BobmetJimmy'sson,Bob.BobgotanotefromJimmy'sson,fromwhichtheoldBobknewthathewasalwaysJimmy'sdearfriend.TorememberandvaluehisfriendshipwithBob.Workinpairsandanswerthequestions.1.Whatkindofendingisthis?Morethanonedescriptionmaybesuitable.2.Doyoulikethisending?Giveyourreasons?AhappyendingAsadendingAsurpriseendingAnopenendingSecondreading:ReadtheendinginActivity5andfindtheexpressionsthatdescribe:settingscharactersactionsElementsofastoryexpressionssettingscharactersactionsoutofjail、coldwind、cold,darknight、now58,lostandhelpless,ayoungman,afamiliar-lookingmaninhisthirties,doubtfullysteppingoutof,smiledbitterly,heard,turnedaround,shaking,finishedreading,shoutedinsurprise,smiled

WritingTaskAccodingtoAfterTwentyYearsandtheoriginalendingthatwehavelearnedtowriteyourownendingtoJimmyandBob'sstory.Thefirstsentenceisgiven,andthenumberofthewordsshouldbelimitedtowithin150words.Pre-writingStep1:

readAftertwentyYearsandtheoriginalendingtofigureout5Ws(who,when,where,why,what)whowhenwherewhywhatJimmy,Bob,aplainclothesmanaftertwentyyears,cold,darknightNewYork,outsideashopJimmystayedinNewYork,andBobwenttothewesttomakehisfortun.Theymadeapromisetomeeteachotheraftertwentyyears.Aftertwentyyears,BobwaswaitingforJimmyoutsideashop.ButJimmywasapolicemanwhileBobwasthemanwantedinChicago.JimmygotaplainclothesmantoarrestBob.Step2Thinkoftheinnerconnectionbetween

thetwogivensentencesItwasacoldwinternightwhenBobcameoutofjail._______________________________________________________________________________.“Bob”,theoldmanlookedup.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step3:

makeanoutlinebyansweringthefollowingquestions.Pre-writingWhattypeoftheendingwillitbe?Doyouwanttointroduceothercharactersintheending?Ifso,who?Wherewilltheendingtakeplace?

WhathashappenedtoBobandJimmyoverthepasttwentyyears?

Howwillthestoryend?ahappyendingNo.Yes,Tombar;outofthejail;onthestreethiswifelefthimandtookhisdaughterwithher;friendscutallcontactswithhim;smile,hug;talkingandlaughing.Bobhadahomenow.Step4:ThinkofusefulwordsandexpressionsandusetransitionalwordsproperlySettings:Characters:actions:transitionalwords:Pre-writingcolddarkwinternight;outofjailnow58,lostandhelpless,anotheroldmaninhisblackcoat,doubtfulysmilebitterly;losecontactwithfriends;thinktohimself;wanderblindlyonthestreet;lookup;recognize;laughingandtalking....What'sworse,toone'ssurprise...While-writingStep5:WriteyourownendingtoAfterTwentyyears.ItwasacoldwinternightwhenBobcameoutofjail.______________________________________________________________________________________.“Bob”,theoldmanlookedup.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Post-writing

Step6:PolishandpresentyourwritingsOnepossibleversionItwasacoldwinternightwhenBobcameoutofjail.Aftertwentyvearsbehindbars,hefeltlikeastranaertothecityandeveryoneinit.Lostandheloless,hedidn'tknowwheretogoorwhomtogoto.Ayearafterhehadbeenarrested,hiswifehadlefthimandtakentheirdaughterwithher.Formergoodfriendshadcutallcontactwithhim.“Isthereanyoneherewhostillthinksofme?"hewonderedbitterly.Recallingthenighttwentyyearsearlierthathadcompletelychangedhislife,hewanderedblindlythroughthestreets.Inthedimlightofastreetlamp,henoticedanoldmansittingonabench."Anotherlonelyman,justlikeme,"hethoughttohimself.

"Bob,"theoldmanlookedup.Althoughtwentyyearshadpassed,hecouldstill