Lesson2记叙文（课件）译林版英语五年级上册

Lesson2记叙文2人称时态审题1.顺叙★2.倒叙3.插叙1.第一人称是从“参与者”亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历开始叙述；2.第三人称是以“观察者”的身份进行记叙,通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事呈现在读者面前。故事性文章用过去时，其中感受可用现在时记叙方式回顾记叙文六要素1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多且恰当的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑如何算是一篇好文章？要点全词汇,句型,语法多样化连接词回顾常见衔接词★1.表示顺序的连接词：

常见衔接词：

first,next,then,finally/last

补充：first

of

all首先above

all

最重要的是；尤其是last

but

not

the

least最后一点，也是非常重要的一点对比的连接词:

结果的连接词:常见衔接词：ononehand,on

the

other

handas

a

result,therefore4.表示递进的连接词

and，what’smore，besides，moreover5.表示转折的连接词:

6.表示原因的连接词:列举的连接词：

★总结的连接词:常见衔接词：but,howeverbecause

for

example,such

asIn

a

word/

In

short/Inconclusion/Tosumup记叙文开头模板句开头模板句1.Oncetherewasa...从前，有一个……2....was/werebornin/intoapoor/richfamily.……出生在一个贫穷的/富裕的家庭。3.Asachildof.…yearsold..

还是个……岁的孩子时……4.Inthepast...years...hasimpressedmedeeply.在过去的……年里……给我留下了深刻的印象。5.InmylifethepersonIwillneverforgetismyfather.在我的生命中，我永远也不会忘记的人是我的父亲。记叙文结尾模板句结尾模板句1.Iwasverytired,butIwashappythatIdidagooddeed.我很疲惫，但我很高兴自己做了一件好事。2.NowIunderstandmyfather’slovetome.Iwillneverforgetmyfather.现在我明白了父亲对我的爱。我永远不会忘记我的父亲。3.Fromit,Iunderstandweshouldnotcheatanyone,especiallymyparents.从这件事中，我明白了我们不应该欺骗任何人，尤其是我们的父母。记叙文中间段写作重点中间段Body/Details：

1.Why?3.Whatdidyoudo?2.Whathappened?4.Howdidyoufeel?识别常见写作错误文章改错

AunforgettablethingLookingbackat

thesepastthreeyears,Ihadalotsweetmemory.Lastsummervacation,Idecidetolearntoswim.Atfirst,Iwasafraidofswiminthewater.Ididn’tfeelwellinthewater.ButthecoachsaidhewouldprotectI.ThanIstartedswimming,butIcouldn’tswimforwardatall.Underthecoach’shelp,Iknewhowtomoveandswimwithmyhandsandlegs.Alittledayslater,Icouldswimwithmyself.Iwasveryexcitedlyandproudofmyself.文章改错WhatIlearnfromthisexperienceisthatnothingisimpossibleifIputmyheartintoitandtrytodoitbravely.文章

AnunforgettablethingLookingbackat

thesepastthreeyears,Ihadalotofsweetmemories.Lastsummervacation,Idecidedtolearntoswim.Atfirst,Iwasafraidofswimminginthewater.Ididn’tfeelgoodinthewater.Butthecoachsaidhewouldprotectme.ThenIstartedswimming,butIcouldn’tswimforwardatall.Withthecoach’shelp,Iknewhowtomoveandswimwithmyhandsandlegs.Afewdayslater,Icouldswimbymyself.Iwasveryexcitedandproudofmyself.文章WhatIlearnfromthisexperienceisthatnothingisimpossibleifIputmyheartintoitandtrytodoitbravely.真题写作-AfightwithmyfriendWarmup

1.Whydofriendsfight?2.Howdopeopleactwhentheyareangry?Discussandshare1.Whenwasthelasttimeyoufoughtwithyourfriend?3.Whathappenedduringthefight?2.Whatwasthefightabout?4.Whathappenedafterthefight?Areyoustillfriends?Listenandanswer范文赏析IntroducitoinBody/DetailsConclusionAfightwithmyfriendWhodidyoufight?

Whendidithappened?Whydidyoufight?Whathappenedduringthefight?Whatdidyousay?Howdidyoufeel?Howdoyoufeelnow?

Whatdoyouwanttodo?写作框架IntroducitoinBody/DetailsConclusionAfightwithmyfriendYesterday,I...Letmetellyouwhathappened.Usually,we...Butyesterday,...Isaid....Ifelt