李华带你去中考 热点08 -中考英语高分作文（江苏专用版）

备战2023年中考英语高分作文热点08李华带你去中考一、材料作文1．“少年强则国强”，安徽省正在围绕这个主题举行“好少年”评比活动。假设你是李华，请根据下面的信息，为自己写一篇自荐信，标题为“Iamanoutstandingstudent”。外表班上最高的，带着眼镜性格大方，热于助人校园生活努力学习，与同学相处融洽爱好旅游……未来计划要求：1.词数80~100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。IamanoutstandingstudentIamLiHuainGradeNinefromNo.5MiddleSchool._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】IamanoutstandingstudentIamLiHuainGradeNinefromNo.5MiddleSchool.Iamthetalleststudentinmyclasswithglasses.Iamhumorous,kindandfriendly.Iamamonitorofmyclass.Iliketodosomethinghelpfultoourteachersandclassmates.So,Iamnotonlyhard-workingbutalsogetalongwellwithmyclassmates.AndIamalwaysstrictwithmyselfinordertosetagoodexample.Iamgoodatallmysubjects.Aboveall,Ihavesomehobbies,likeclimbingandtraveling.Ihopetotraveltomanydifferentplaceswithmyparents.AndIwanttobeamathteacherbecauseIlikemathandIamreadytohelpchildreninpoorareas.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己的基本信息、外表、性格等；第二步，介绍校园生活；第三步，介绍自己的爱好。[亮点词汇]①notonly…butalso不仅……而且……②bestrictwith对……严格③getalongwellwith与……相处融洽[高分句型]①AndIwanttobeamathteacherbecauseIlikemathandIamreadytohelpchildreninpoorareas.（原因状语从句）二、电子邮件2．假设你是某国际学校的学生李华，你们班将于近日举办汉语名著阅读分享活动(ChineseClassicsSharingActivity)，请你根据表格要点提示及要求，给在你校学习的交换生Mike写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加，并告诉他时间、地点、目的、活动安排等。写作要点具体内容TimeFrom8:00pmto10:00pmonSeptember1PlaceSchoolartcenterPurpose①MakemorepeoplereadChineseclassics②LearnmoreaboutChinesetraditionalcultureParticipants(参与者)EveryoneinterestedActivities①TalkaboutaChineseclassictheyread②Haveadiscussionandshareideas要求：1.电子邮件应包括表格中的要点提示，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.电子邮件中不得出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数80~120；电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMike,How’severything?I’mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheChineseClassicsSharingActivity._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearMike,How’severything?I’mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheChineseClassicsSharingActivity.Itwillbeheldintheschoolartcenterfrom8:00pmto10:00pmonSeptember1.Thisactivity,whichfaceseveryonewhoisinterested,aimstomakemorepeoplereadChineseclassicsaswellastogivepeopleawaytolearnmoreaboutChinesetraditionalculture.Duringtheactivity,eachstudentwilltalkaboutaChineseclassictheyreadfirst,andthenwecanhaveadiscussionandshareourideasaboutit.IknowyouareinterestedinreadingChineseclassics,sothiswillbeagreatchanceforyoutotalkaboutyourfavoriteChineseclassic.Iamsureyouwillhavemuchfunthenifyoucome!Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点以及开头已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的写作要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明要邀请Mike参加活动；第二步，具体介绍活动时间、地点以及活动等信息；第三步，书写结语，表达对Mike的祝愿。[亮点词汇]①aswellas以及②learnabout了解③talkabout讨论④beinterestedin对……感兴趣[高分句型]①Thisactivity,whichfaceseveryonewhoisinterested,aimstomakemorepeoplereadChineseclassicsaswellastogivepeopleawaytolearnmoreaboutChinesetraditionalculture.（定语从句）②Iamsureyouwillhavemuchfunthenifyoucome!（宾语从句）3．假如你是LiHua，你的外国好友Frank来信告知他将成为你校七年级新生。请根据下列表格中的内容，结合自己初中阶段学习、生活等方面的经历，回一封邮件，供他参考。注意：1.文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3.词数100左右；邮件的格式及正文首句已给出，不计入总词数。内容要点参考词汇Thingsneedednotebook,dictionary,…Attitude(态度)totakehard-working,active,happy,…Relationshiptodeveloprespect,getalongwith,…Others…DearFrank,Iamgladtoknowyou’recomingtostudyinourschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua【参考范文】：DearFrank,I’mgladtoknowyou’recomingtostudyinourschool.HereissomethingI’dliketoshare.Firstofall,youneedtogetsomenotebooksanddictionariesready,especiallyaChineseone,becauseyouwilloftenneedtheminyourstudy.Asastudent,youhavetoworkhard.Butwhateverhappens,stayactive,evenwhenyoufail.Andrespecttheteachersasit’saChinesetradition.Besides,youwillbehappierifyougetonwellwithyourclassmates.Lastly,itisagoodideatodevelopsomehobbiestomakeyourlifebetterandmorecolourful.Ihopemyadvicewillwork.Lookingforwardtoseeingyou!Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封电子邮件，为应用文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当增加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，欢迎对方来中国学习并引入主题；第二步，根据表格提示详细说明来中国学习需要注意的事项；第三步，表达自己的希望。[亮点词汇]①firstofall首先②workhard努力工作③lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①Besides,youwillbehappierifyougetonwellwithyourclassmates.（if引导条件状语从句）②Lastly,itisagoodideatodevelopsomehobbiestomakeyourlifebetterandmorecolourful.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语；动词不定式作目的状语）4．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Linda想了解你们学校英语节的情况，请你根据表格提示给她写一封e-mail。TimeLastweekPlaceIntheschoolhallPeopleAlltheteachersandstudents,someparentsActivitiesSingEnglishsongs,playEnglishplays,readEnglishpoems...Feelings...要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现任何真实信息；4.词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）DearLinda,WehadanunforgettableEnglishfestivallastweek._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearLinda,WehadanunforgettableEnglishfestivallastweek.Itwasreallyfuntoenjoysuchwonderfulshowsinourschoolhall.Alltheteachersandstudentstookpartintheactivities.Someparentswerealsoinvitedtowatchourperformances.Asyoucanimagine,alltheperformerstriedtheirbesttoshowthemselves.SomesangEnglishsongs.SomeplayedEnglishplays.AndothersreadEnglishpoems.MyfavoritewastotellChinesestoriesinEnglish.IwasverygladtotellatraditionalChinesestoryfreelyinEnglish.AndIwasexcitedtoknowIwonthefirst.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无语法和拼写错误。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题，介绍上周度过了一个难忘的英语节；第二步，介绍英语节举行时间、地点、参加的人员以及活动；第三步，谈谈自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①takepartin参加②tryone’sbesttodosth.尽某人最大努力做某事③inEnglish用英语④beexcitedtodosth.兴奋地做某事[高分句型]①Itwasreallyfuntoenjoysuchwonderfulshowsinourschoolhall.（Itis+名词+todosth.做某事……）②Someparentswerealsoinvitedtowatchourperformances.（含一般过去时的被动语态）三、书信作文5．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Luke的学校即将开设特色选修课程，他正在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。请你根据所给提示给他写封回信。内容提示：YoursuggestionsLearnChineseImportanceHowtolearn注意：(1)内容必须包含思维导图中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥。其中“Howtolearn”需拓展，结合自身经验，介绍至少2种学习汉语的方法；(2)文中不能出现学生真实姓名和所在学校名称；(3)词数100左右。DearLuke,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearLuke,I’msogladtohearfromyou.IsuggestyouchoosetheChinesecourse.WiththedevelopmentofChina,Chineseisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.LeaningChineseisnotonlyawaytocommunicate,butalsoachancetoadmireChineseculture.AsaChinese,IhavebeenlearningChineseformanyyears.Ihavemuchexperiencetosharewithyou.Inmyopinion,therearemanywaystolearnChinese.It’susefultoreadChinesebooksandlistentoChinesesongs.What’smore,youaresupposedtojoinaChineseclubtopracticeyourspokenChinese.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：要求根据提示内容，针对学习汉语给出建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，建议对方选择汉语课；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“重要性、如何学习”两个方面重点介绍；第三步，书写结语，希望建议能帮到对方。[亮点词汇]①hearfrom收到……的信②withthedevelopmentof随着……发展③inmyopinion在我看来④besupposedto应该[高分句型]①WiththedevelopmentofChina,Chineseisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.（形容词比较级结构）②Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.（省略that的宾语从句）6．假如你是LiHua，你的外国好友Frank来信告知他将成为你校七年级新生，请结合自己在初中阶段学习、生活等方面的经历，给Frank写一封100词左右的回信。（可能用到的词汇：respect尊重）1.需要用到的学习用品；2.对待学习、生活的态度；3.如何与老师、同学相处；4.需要注意的其它方面。DearFrank.I’mgladtoknowyou’recomingtostudyinourschool.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Bestwishes,LiHua【参考范文】DearFrank,I’mgladtoknowyou’recomingtostudyinourschool.HereissomethingI’dliketosharewithyou.Tobeginwith,youneedtopreparesomenotebooksanddictionaries,especiallyaChineseone,becauseyouwilloftenneedtheminyourstudy.Asastudent,youhavetoworkhard.Pleaseremembernomatterwhathappens,stayactive,evenwhenyoufail.Pleaserespecttheteachersasit’saChinesetradition.Besides,youwillbehappierifyougetonwellwithyourclassmates.Lastly,itisagoodideatodevelopsomehobbiestomakeyourlifebetterandmorecolorful.Ihopemyadvicewillwork.Lookingforwardtoseeingyou!Bestwishes,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，承接开头，表明写信缘由；第二步，就初中生活，在学习、生活等方面给出建议；第三步，最后表达希望见到对方。[亮点词汇]①sharewithsb与某人分享②Tobeginwith开始③getonwellwithsb与某人相处得很好[高分句型]①Pleaserespecttheteachersasit’saChinesetradition.（as引导的原因状语从句）②itisagoodideatodevelopsomehobbiestomakeyourlifebetterandmorecolorful.（动词不定式作定语和作目的状语）7．光明中学最近举行了“学校年度榜样学生”评选，需要征集同学的自我简介。假如你是李华，请你根据所给提示写一篇介绍自己的文章，向学校校报投稿。80词左右，短文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。要点提示：1.你的特长爱好（至少两点）；2.日常生活习惯（至少两点）；3.你的校园生活，参加的社团以及收获。要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；2.须包含所有要点，并适当发挥；3.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；Dearstudents,I’mLiHuafromGrade7.I’mgladtointroducemyselftoyou._______________________________________________________________________