定语从句与写作公开课定省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖课件

全国卷英语作文评分标准最高档（21-25分）1.完全完成了试题要求任务；2.覆盖全部内容关键点；3.准确应用较为复杂语法结构和高级词汇；4.全文结构紧凑，有效使用语句间连接成份；5.完全到达了预期写作目标。6.卷面洁净整齐。1/21AttributiveclauseGrammarandwriting2/21合作探究：高考满分作文中定语从句观赏：年全国高考新课标Asyouknow,myuncleLiMingisgoingtothecitywhereyoulive

toattendaninternationalmeeting.I’veaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChinesepaintingwhichyouhaveaskedforbefore.Asweallknow,cleaningstreetsisoneofthehardestwork.3/21写作中定语从句主要作用1.增加词数（100词左右）能够连接两个包含同一事物句子，防止单词重复和句式单一。补充细节，以丰富文章内容。4/21定语从句在写作中应用合作探究:怎样写出定语从句用5/21

(1)Thereason______hewaslatewasthathegotuplate.

(2)Istillremembertheday_______IfirstcametoBeijing.

(3)Itisanimportantday________Iwillneverforget.

(4)Thepark__________theypaidavisittoisbeautiful.(5)VisitingthenewAmberRoomisagoodway________peoplecanknowmoreaboutthehistory.whywhen(Which/that)(Which/that)复习导学：用适当关系词填空。(inwhich/that)6/212.合并句子。（1）Aplaneisamachine.Itcanfly._____________________________________（2）Myuncleboughtacarlastweek.Itwasstolen.__________________________________（3）Themaniswalkingontheplayground.Heismyoldfriend._____________________________________(4)Isawawoman.Herbagwasstolen._____________________________________Aplaneisamachinewhich/thatcanfly.Thecar（which/that）myuncleboughtlastweekwasstolen.Themanwhoiswalkingontheplaygroundismyoldfriend.I

sawawomanwhosebagwasstolen.7/21合作探究:怎样写出定语从句题干中出现两句包括同一事物简单句。Solution:1>找出这两个简单句中都出现同一个事物。

2>将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰另外一个句子中那个相同事物（注意关系词选取）

8/21达标练习:1.众所周知，琥珀屋有着一段令人惊奇历史，它用黄金和珠宝装饰。2.琥珀屋闻名世界原因是它非常宝贵。3.人们不会忘记那个时期，琥珀屋被德国纳粹党人偷走。4.现在人们能够去夏宫（theSummerPalace）参观，新琥珀屋已经在这里建成。9/21众所周知，琥珀屋有着一段令人惊奇历史，它用黄金和珠宝装饰。Asisknowntoall，theAmberRoomhasanamazinghistory.TheAmberRoomwasdecoratedwithgoldandjewels.Asisknowntoall，theAmberRoom,whichwasdecoratedwithgoldandjewels,hasanamazinghistory.10/21TheAmberRoomisfamousintheworld.Thereasonisthatitisvaluable.ThereasonwhytheAmberRoomisfamousisthatitisvaluable.琥珀屋闻名世界，原因是它非常宝贵。11/21人们不会忘记那段日子，琥珀屋被德国纳粹党人偷走。Peoplewillneverforgetthetime.TheAmberRoomwasstolenbytheGermanNazis.PeoplewillneverforgetthedayswhentheAmberRoomwasstolenbytheGermanNazis.

12/21现在人们能够去夏宫参观，新琥珀屋已经在这里建成。NowpeoplecanvisittheSummerPalace.AnewAmberRoomisbuilthere.NowpeoplecanvisittheSummerPalace,whereanewAmberRoomisbuilt.(注意此处不再有here)13/212.题干中只有一个孤立简单句Solution:找到这个简单句中中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。Forexample:汉语是一门受欢迎语言。Chineseisapopularlanguage.Chineseisapopularlanguage,whichisnowspokenandusedbymoreandmorepeopleallaroundtheworld.怎么受欢迎？为谁所欢迎？14/21Practice:派对将于十二月二十五号举行。李明是一个热心肠人。ThepartywillbeheldonDecember25th.Theparty，whichisdesignedtowelcometheforeignersfromothercountries，willbeheldonDecember25th.(派正确目标)15/21李明是一个热心肠人。LiMingisawarm-heartedman.LiMingisawarm-heartedman,whoalwayshelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.(详细化)16/21质疑提升Which:这(用定语从句增添做这些事情原因或结果)Inthissummervacation,Iwouldliketodoapart-timejob，whichwillhelpmegainmoneyandworkingexperience.Youlookedupsetinclassyesterday,whichmademeworried.Iwouldliketodovoluntarywork,whichwillhelpthosewhoareinneed.17/21进阶练习：依据以下句子，完成短文。

今天我们班就“文化遗址应不应该向公众开放（open）”进行了一次辩论会，同学们观点不一。大部分学生赞成这种观点。他们认为这是一个很好方式，人们能够经过这种方式了解中国历史、传统文化、习俗（custom）和建筑格调。开放文化遗址有利于当地旅游业（tourism）发展，这能提升当地人生活水平。反对这种观点学生认为太多游客会破坏珍贵文物。众所周知，毫无疑问为了赚取更多钱，当地人忽略了对文化遗址保护（protection）。在我看来，文化遗产应该/不应该向公众开放……Todaywehadaheateddebateinourclassaboutwhethertheculturalrelicsshouldbeopentothepublicornot.

18/21Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinion.Moststudentsagreewiththeidea.TheythinkthatitisagoodwaythatpeoplecanknowmoreaboutChinesehistory,traditionalculture,customandbuildingstyle.Besides,openingtheculturalrelicswillbegoodforthedevelopmentofthelocaltourism,whichcanimprovethelivelihoodofthelocalpeople.Studentswhoareagainsttheideabelievethattoomanytouristswilldestroythevaluableculturalrelics.Asweallknow,thereisnodoubtthatthelocalpeoplewillignoretheprotectiono