初中英语作文写作指导

中考作文注意事项一、徐老师的忠告：近几年中考英语作文以看图写话的形式为主，重点考察学生运用一般过去时态讲述过去故事的书面表达能力。因此，be动词一律使用was,were;行为动词一律用动词的过去式形式；重点记忆不规则动词的过去式；注意故事的书写要自始至终使用过去时态；不提倡使用直接引语；不提倡使用没见过和没把握的句子；为提高句子水平，尽量使用几个主从复合句，像宾语从句、定语从句、时间状语从句或原因状语从句，并列句和感叹句也会为你的文章增色，但不能因为上难度而出语法错误，得不偿失，看自己的能力而定；怕出错，就全使用小短句子，正确无误是第一追求；注意每张图片的内容都要有专门的句子体现，要点不能漏掉；每个单句句子都要符合简单句的五种基本类型之一：主系表；主语谓语；主谓宾；主谓宾宾；主谓宾宾补；注意主谓一致；注意避免标点符号、大小写、拼写错误等低级失误；字数要足；打草稿是个拿卷面分的好办法，也避免低级失误。将草稿上的作文抄到试卷上之后，再对照一下，不要漏掉字或出现书写单词不完整的现象。二、中考作文评分标准：1）本大题共10分。2）卷面书写潦草不工整，可酌情从总得分中扣1分。3）拼写错误每两个扣0.5分。同样错误不重复计算。4）书面表达可分为四个等级：（1）9-10分语句通顺，内容完整，书写工整，无语法错误，字数符合要求。（2）7-8分内容较完整，书写较工整，语法错误较少（1-2处），字数基本符合要求。（3）5-6分语句尚通顺，书写较工整，3-4处语法错误，字数在60词左右。（4）5分以下作文内容不完整语句不够通顺，语法错误较多，书写一般，字数在50词以下。三、类型举例：1.做好事Tomisagoodboywholikeshelpingothers/whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Oneday,onhiswaytoschool/onhiswaybackhome,hefoundanoldmanwholookedworried.Hewentuptohimandaskedhimwhatwaswrong./ifhecouldhelphim.Theoldmansaidthathedidn’tknowhowtogetbackhome.Tomhelpedhimtoaskthepolicemanforhelp.ThenTomtookhimtohishomebybus.Hetookgoodcareoftheoldman.Atlast/Intheend,theoldmangotbackhomeandmethisfamily.TheythankedTomverymuch.Tomgottoshoollate/gothomelatebuthewasveryhappy.Whatagood/kindboy!Weshouldlearnfromhim./Helpingothersistohelpourselves.2.节日：Children’sDay儿童节；Teachers’Day教师节；AprilFool’sDay愚人节NationalDay国庆节；NewYear’sDay元旦；SpringFestival春节；Mid-AutumDay中秋节；MayDay五四青年节ChristmasDay圣诞节；ThanksgivingDay感恩节；Mother’sDay母亲节；Father’sDay父亲节Tomisagoodboywholoveshisparents.YesterdaywasWomen’sDay.Hewantedtodosomethingforhismother.Hetoldhisfatherwhathethoughtandhisfatheragreedwithhim.Theybegantowork.Tomsweptthefloorandhisfatherdidsomewashing/washedtheclothes.Whilehisfatherwascooking,heputthedishesontothetable.Whenhismothercamebackhome,hefoundsomedeliciousfoodonthetable.Howhappyshewas!ShehadawonderfulWomen’sDay.类似一篇：IhaveagoodfriendnamedJim.Heisafifteen-year-oldboy.YesterdaywasWomen’sDay,andhismotherwasbusyoutside.Hemadeuphismindtodosomethingforher.Sohecleanedoutthehouseinordertomakehismotherhappy.Atfirst,hecleanedthefloorandmadeitascleanaspossible.HelistenedtothemusicthatwaswrittenbyXuLang,oneofthemostpopularsingersinChina.Thenhedidthedishesafterlistening.Ittookhimalittletimetodoit.Atlast,hecookedsomethingnice.Afterfifteenminutes,hismothercamebackhome.Hesaid“HappyWomen’sDay!”Hismotherwasveryhappytoseesomefoodonthetable.Jimdidn'tfeeltiredintheslightest.Whatagoodboy!3.做错事Oneday，XiaoMingandhisfatherwenttoZhongShanPark.XiaoMingwasveryhappy.Whiletheywerewalking,XiaoMing’sfatherfoundafenceanddecidedtojumpoverthefencesothattheycouldgettothezooquickly.XiaoMingdidn’tagreewithhisfather,buthisfatherjumpedoverthefence.XiaoMingwasveryworried.Thenapolicemancametohisfatherandtoldhimthathebrokethetrafficlaw.XiaoMing’sfatherfeltveryembarrassedandbowedtothepoliceman,“Sorry,Iwon’tdoitagain.”It’sdangeroustobreakthetrafficlaw./rules.另一篇：LastSunday,myfatherandmothertookmetothezoo.Itwasaveryinterestingzoo.Wetookawalkandenjoyedthebeautifulsights/flowersinthezoothewholemorning.Atnoon,wehadapicniconthegrass.Finally,Icouldn’tfinishthecakewithcream.Iwantedtothrowitaway.Butmymothertoldmenottodoit.Then,Iwantedtogiveittothemonkeys.Mymothersaiditwasagoodidea.Atthattimeaworkeratthezoocameuptousandtoldusnottodoit.Thenwerealizedourmistakes.Weshouldobeytherulesandtrytoprotecttheanimals.4.活动Tomisagoodboywholikesplayingsoccer.LastTuesday,hewasverybusy.Inthemorning,hegotupatsixthirtyandthenhadbreakfast.Hewenttoschoolonfootbecausehishousewasveryneartotheschool.Afterhehadfourclassesinthemorningandthreeintheafternoon,hewasverytired.Afterschool,heplayedsoccerwithhisfriends.Theyhadagoodtime.Aftersupper/dinner,hehadtodohishomework.Ittookhimtwohourstofinishit.HewatchedTVandreadnewspapers.Hedidn’tgotobeduntilteno’clock.Hewastiredbuthappy.Whatabusyday!（如果是周末或假期活动，只需要改变时间和活动内容即可）另一篇：XiaoMing’sBusyDayLastweekend,XiaoMinghadaverybusyday.Inthemorning,hisfathertoldhimtogetuptoreadEnglish.Afterthat,hehadtopractiseplayingthepiano.Hismotherstoodbehindhimandmadehimplayagainandagain.Intheafternoon,hisfathertookhimtoanartschool.Helearnedhowtopaintthere.Thewholeday,XiaoMinghadnotimetohavearest.Hewassotiredthathefellillintheevening.Hewastakentohospitalbyhisparents.Whatapoorboy！Inmyopinion,Chineseparentsaretoostrictwiththeirchildren.Theyexpecttheirchildrentobecomesuccessfulinthefuture.Thechildrenaretoobusylearningallkindsofthingsallday.Ithinkit’sbadforthem.四、更多举例：Sunday,May30thSunny/FineItwasMay30thyesterday.WhenIwokeup,Ilookedattheclock.Oh,de