广东高考读写任务英语作文训练

如何写好“读写任务”第二部分写作（学案）I.如何写出吸引改卷老师眼球的好句？1.Ifollowedyouradvice.Iwenttothesupermarket.ThereIfoundfourchairs.Theywereingoodshape.Theywerereasonablypriced.使用分词和定语从句合并上述句子：______________youradvice,Iwenttothesupermarket________________________________________________________________________.2.Thecatwalkedslowlythroughthegrass.Thecatwaswatchingthemousethewholetime.使用现在分词合并：__________________________________________,thecatwalkedslowlythroughthegrass.3.Thegoldwashiddenundertheground.Itwassafeformanyyears.使用过去分词合并：________________________,thegoldwassafeformanyyears.练习：1.Tomwaswaitinginthequeueforhalfanhour.Hesuddenlyrealizedthathehadlefthiswalletathome.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.Thetwostudentswerelostinthemountainsforaweek.Theywerefinallysavedbythelocalpolice.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.使用定语从句或形容词修饰名词或代词。1）Thehousehasbeenturnedintoanapartment.Iwasborninthehouse.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2）Youwillhavearoominmyhouse.Theroomisverycomfortable.Inthisroom,youwillfindmanythings.Thethingsarequitenecessaryfordailylife.方法一(使用2个定语从句)：Youwillhavearoominmyhouse,__________________________and___________youcanfindmanythingsthatarenecessaryfordailylife.方法二：（用形容词代替其中一个定语从句，让句子简练）Youwillhavea___________________roominmyhouse,____________youcanfindallthenecessarythingsfordailylife.5.使用介词短语合并（with+O;with+O+OC）Thefireisburning,soIfeelwarm._________________________,Ifeelwarm.Ilostmybike,soIhadtowalkhome.______________________________,Ihadtowalkhome.II.如何写漂亮读写任务第二部分写作？牢记：好的段落是well-connected,clear,economical,tight。1.平时训练要求书写卷面训练：卷面书写给评卷老师的第一印象非常重要，也是作文能拿到高分的第一道门槛，所谓“印象分”。在高考作文备考过程中，要特别注意书写训练,切忌书写不清、涂涂抹抹。具体要求如下：（1）用纯黑色或颜色均匀的签字笔或钢笔；（2）贴底线书写，保持字母大小基本一致，字母主体部分占行线约一半大小为宜；（3）保持单词间距基本一致，一般为两个字母的位置；（4）错词只用一条横线或斜线划掉，尽量不重复涂写同一字母或单词；（5）每段前空格约4个字母的位置。（3个或5个字母）2）避开抄袭陷阱：高水平的“抄袭”其实不是抄袭而是改写，是利用原文的信息内容、词汇和句子结构，通过词汇替换和句型转换等手段进行改写。这也正是“读写任务”这种题型所要考查考生是否掌握的写作技能。3）整篇作文是一个整体，内容要合理安排，语义要连贯，各段之间过渡、衔接要自然，避免对内容要点一问一答式的写作。2.各段之间过渡、衔接常用句型：Whatatouchingstory,whichremindsmeof…多么感人的故事呀，该故事使我想起……例如：Sam’sexperienceremindsmeofmysimilarexperiencehappeningfouryearsagowhenIwasadmittedtoseniorhighschool.Sam的经历让我想起了四年前我上高中时发生的类似经历。IwasdeeplytouchedwhenIreadyourletter.It’sthefirsttimethatIhaverealizedyourdeepestloveforme.读完您的信后，我很感动，我第一次感受到你对我深深的爱。Butinthemeantime,Iamlookingforwardtomynewlifeinthecollege.但同时，我又期盼着大学生活。However,lifeislikeaboxofchocolateandyou’llneverknowwhat’sinsideuntilyouopenit.然而人生就像一盒巧克力，直到你打开时，才知道里面是什么口味。Iwillbeabsolutelyabletoadjustthedifferencesinashorttime.我绝对能够很快适应两者的不同。解题指导：近6年的读写任务第二部分写作都是三个内容要点，三个要点内在的逻辑顺序已经安排好，无须考生重新组织。而且，写作内容要点明确，有时候相当于三个问答题，把三个问题回答好就完成任务了。每一段写一个内容要点，这样让评卷老师清清楚楚地知道你已经完成了三个写作内容任务。每一段都由一个主题句（atopicsentence）和2句或3句拓展句组成。3.主题句的6种常用写法:1.直接回答要点。写作要点是询问考生的看法时，对提问直接作出回答。假如你处在那些动物的处境,你会有什么反应？（2009广东高考读写任务要点2）IfIwereananimalinthewildlifepark,Icouldfeelannoyedwhenpeoplekeepphotographingme.练习：你理想中的大学生活是什么样的？（20XX年广东高考读写任务要点2）_________________________________________________________________________常用词语：Inmyopinion/inmyeyes/asforme/asfarasIamconcerned/Itismypersonalbeliefthat…2.表明立场。明确表示对某观点支持、赞同或反对。你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。(20XX年广东高考读写任务要点3)Ibelievethattakingphotoswithanimalsshouldbebanned.练习：你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法。(20XX年广东高考读写任务要点1)_______________________________________________________________________________表示支持或赞同的常用句型：Iagreewiththestatementthat…；Iaminfavorof…；Iappreciatethat….;Iapproveoftheideathat…;Ibelievethat…;Iagreewithwhatthewritersaid/says.表示反对或不赞同的句型：Idisagreewiththeideathat…;Iamopposedtotheideathat…;Idisapproveoftheideathat…;Insomeway,Iagreewith…but…;Whatthewritersaidsoundsreasonable,butI…3.重述要点。不直接回答写作要点，而是翻译要点作为段落主题句。中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。.（20XX年广东高考读写任务要点3）Asweallknow,collegeiswidelydifferentfrommiddleschool.想家给学习和生活带来的影响。（20XX年广东高考读写任务要点2）Owingtofeelinghomesicktoomuch,Icouldn’tgetaccustomedtotheschoollifeandcouldn’tpayattentiontomystudy.练习：在生活中谅解他人有何重要意义。_______________________________________________________________________________常用词语：playanimportantrole/partin…在……中扮演重要角色;doharmto=beharmfulto对……有害；It’sbeneficial/vital/necessaryforsb.todosth.对某人来说做某事很有帮助/重要/必要haveabad/goodinfluence/effect=affect…negatively/positively影响不好/好;haveacloserelation/connectionwith….=beassociatedwith…closely=beconnectedwith…closely和……有密切联系setawonderfulexampletosb.给某人树立一个好榜样cultivatedmyinterestin…培养我对……的兴趣；showmoreandmoreenthusiasmin…对……表现出越来越多的兴趣=showakeeninterestin…4.总述原因你支持青少年的秘密应该与父母分享的理由是什么？Iinsistthatteenagers’secretsshouldbesharedwiththeirparentsforreasonsasfollows.练习：使我们生活发生变化有哪些原因？_____________________________________________________________________常用句型：Thereareseveralreasonsthatcontributeto……的原因有多种=Reasonsforthisarevaried.Thereasonsforthisareobvious……的原因显而易见…forreasonsasfollows…的原因如下Thereasonwhy…isthat…5.引出建议、方法、措施、步骤等如何才能获得快乐？Weshouldfindsomeeffectivewaystomakeourselveshappy.你（或你朋友）是如何应对日常生活中的冲突的？（2013佛山一模）Itisveryimportantnottorespondtoangerwithangerinourdailylife.你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习。（20XX年广东高考读写任务要点3）Inmyopinion,schoolsandparentsaresupposedtoeducatetheirkidsthroughteachingthemtostudyfortheirfamilyandtheirmotherlandratherthangivingthemmoney.练习：说说人们对环境保护所采取的措施。______________________________________________________________________________常用句型：Wearesupposedtotakesomeeffectivemeasures.Weshouldtryourbesttoovercome/conquerthedifficulties.Weareinquiredtosolvetheproblemsthatwearefacedwith.Itisnecessarythatproperactions/stepsshouldbetakentoendthephenomenon.6.引出经历。用来引出记叙文的具体事例。简述你经历过的一次困难或考验。Itremindsmeofmyownexperiencewhen…讲述一次你（或你朋友）发生冲突的时间、地点和起因（2013佛山一模）Ihadonce曾经experiencedanembarrassingconflictwithmyclassmatelastyear.Itwasrainingheavilyoutsideandtheclassroomwasabitcrowded.常用句型：Itremindsmeofthetimewhen…Itremindsmeofanaccidentwhichhappenedseveraldaysago.Afterreadingthestoryabove,Irecalltheexperienceofmyfriendwho…Thestoryaboveremindsmeofoneofmyexperiences…Whatatouchingstory,whichremindsmeof…Sam’sexperienceremindsmeofmysimilarexperiencehappeningfouryearsagowhenIwasadmittedtoseniorhighschool.4.拓展句的四种常用写法：1）列举：1~2点如：列举学校里的浪费现象Wecouldseesuchkindofsmallthingsarounduseveryday.(主题句)要点：教室时……；吃饭时……；吃完时……Forexample,whenweleavetheclassroom,wejustignorethelightsandcomputersandleavethemon;whenwehavedinners,weoftenusethethrowawaychopsticksandplasticbags;whenwefinishsomedrinksandfood,wethrowtheleftoververycasually.(拓展句)如：作为中学生，我们应该如何配合老师批改作业？（8校联考卷）What’smore,teacherscheckoverourassignmentseveryday,whichisagoodbridgeforustocommunicatewitheachother.（主题句）要点：在错误中学习；得到鼓励从而取得进步；要尊重老师的劳动成果。Inthiscasewecanlearnfromourerrors,getencouragementandmakeprogressinourstudy.Sowewillrespectourteachers’hardwork,nomatterwhethertheyuseredpensornot.2).递进：notonly...butalso...moreover如：就“互联网给人们生活带来的影响”发表自己的观点SurfingtheInternetbringspeoplemorebenefits.(主题句)要点：提供最新信息；改变交流方式；网上购物，方便快捷。TheInternetnotonlyprovidespeoplewithamountsoflatestinformation,butalsochangesthewaypeoplecommunicatewitheachother.Besides,theInternetenablespeopletogoshoppingathomeeasilyandconveniently.(拓展句)3).对比：foronething正面原因；foranother反面原因如：你是否支持该校长暂停表现不好的学生上学。Ibelievetheheadmasterisrighttosuspendthosemisbehavingstudents’class.(主题句)要点：一方面，他们待在教室会……；另一方面，不待在教室会……Foronething,ifthesemisbehavingstudentsareallowedtostayinclass,theywillnegativelyaffectotherstudents’learning.Foranother,iftheyareremovedfromtheclass,notonlytheotherscanlearninpeace,buttheyalsocanhavetimetolearntheirlessonsandthenbehavebetterwhentheyreturn.(拓展句)如：简述老师用红笔批改学生作业的利与弊；（八校联考卷）Generallyspeaking,mostteachersmarkcorrectionsorgradestudents’papersinredpens.（主题句）要点：有人认为用红笔会……；但是，也有人认为用红笔可以……Somepeoplethinkitmaymakestudentsanxiousthusblamingtheirteachers.Howeversomepeoplethinkitcanattractstudents’attention.4.类似故事或经历→故事归纳如：就“如何看待外貌”的主题发表看法Whatmakesapersonbeautifulishisattractivepersonalityratherthanhisphysicalappearance.(主题句)要点：举例：某某同学……Inoneofmypreviousclasses,therewasabeautifulgirlnamedLucywhohadalmostaperfectfaceandslimfigure.Shetreatedherbeautyinamatter-of-factwayandshewasnicetoeveryone.Herpersonalitywasmostlyacceptedbyothersanditmadeheranoutstandingbeauty.(拓展句)要写好举例论证文章的例子，需注意两点：抓住要素，突出要素1.引述事例时要突出能够证明中心论点的部位,可用一定笔墨进行渲染(如:Shetreatedherbeautyinamatter-of-factway…Herpersonalitywasmostlyacceptedbyothers…)2.除必要的交代外，删去与论证无关或关系不大的内容.确定事例的建议步骤：1、确定例子前先确定论点；2、抓住论点的要素；3、寻找与论点有共同要素的例子；4、确定例子。下面有三篇均以海伦.凯勒故事为中心的例子，如果你要写一篇论点为“Effortsarethemostimportantthingtohelpyouachievesuccess.”的文章，你会选择哪个例子呢？为什么？1）TheexampleofHelenKellerbestsupportstheview.HelenKellerwasborndeafandblindbeforeshelearnedtospeak.Shehadlittlerealunderstandingoftheworldaroundher.Fortunately,shehadagoodteacherandherteacherhelpedherspeak.Atlast,shecouldspeaknormallyandgaveherhelptopeoplewholikedher.2）TheexampleofHelenKellerbestsupportstheview.HelenKellerwasborndeafandblindbeforeshelearnedtospeak.Shehadlittlerealunderstandingoftheworldaroundher.Nevertheless,shemadeeveryefforttolearntospeakandwrite.Withagreatdealofpersistence,shefinallybecameawriterandlecturer,whoalsobecameaninspirationtoall.3)TheexampleofHelenKellerbestsupportstheview.HelenKellerwasborndeafandblindbeforeshelearnedtospeak.Shehadlittlerealunderstandingoftheworldaroundher,certainlynothingtogiveherself-confidence.Nevertheless,shebelievedshecouldconquerallthedifficulties.Withthisfaith,shefinallybecameawriterandlecturer,alsoaninspirationtoall.小试牛刀：20XX年广东省高考英语读写任务第二节读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）

阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文

Tomanypeopleeventheword“work”soundsunpleasant,notnecessarilybecausetheyarelazy.Thesameman,whodislikeshisjobinthefactoryorevenintheoffice,mayworkhardattheweekend,paintingthehouseordiggingthegarden.

Whatisthereason,then？Inmostcases,itisbecausethesepeoplesimplydonotenjoythejobtheyaredoing.Itdoesnotgivethemanyrealsatisfaction.Itmaybequiteeasy,likemakingupwoodenboxes,butitisveryboring.Veryoftentheyaredoingajobwhichisjustasmallpartofamuchlargerone,suchasattachingadoorhandletoacar.Buttheparttheyplayinactuallymakingthecarissosmallthattheycanneversay:Ihavemadesomething!

Yetinmodernsocietysomebodyhastodoordinaryjobssuchascleaningstreetsbecausethisisthewaysocietyisorganized,nomatterhowordinaryajobis,itplaysapartinsocietyandthereforedeservesourduerespect.Societycannotfunctionasingledaywithoutthe“dullandboring”jobs.

[写作内容]

1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2.以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法，内容包括：

（1）描述清洁工工作的艰辛；

（2）假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？

（3）你对平凡工作者的看法。

[写作要求]

1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。解题步骤：1.看清文章结构：________________________________________________2.在原文中划出每段的主题句：定摘要的时态、人称、技巧：删细节、删例子、避免重复；使用概括性名词、短语、短小简单的句子来压缩长句甚至段落。3.写出摘要要点（3个，一段一个要点）_______________________________________________________________________________4.用“主题句+支撑句”的模版写出30词的摘要。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法，内容包括：

1)描述清洁工工作的艰辛；重述要点。不直接回答写作要点，而是翻译要点作为段落主题句。主题句______________________________________________________________________拓展句：列举：1~2点:清洁工起早摸黑，要在严寒酷暑中工作，但是收入不高。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2）假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？1.直接回答要点作为主题句：主题句：_____________________________________________________________________拓展句：列举：1~2点:工作环境也会随之变差，导致人们无法高效工作。如果没有清洁工，环境会变得糟糕。街道将会到处是垃圾，臭气冲天，污水横流。在这种环境里，人们的人们的工作环境也会随之变差，导致人们无法高效工作。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（3）你对平凡工作者的看法。2.表明立场作为主题句。主题句：____________________________________________________________________拓展句：列举：1~2点:社会需要各种职业，离不开普通劳动者。我们应该尊重他们的平凡工作，提高他们的待遇。________________________________________________________________________________________________