读后续写瘸腿小狗解析和语料素材 讲义 二模考试英语试题

宁波市二模2023年4月高考与选考模拟考试读后续写解析和语料素材瘸腿小狗阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenIadoptedhim,hehadbeenrescuedfromdeathinsideatightlytiedblacktrashbagabandonedrightbesideagarbagetruckontheroad.Analertgarbagemannoticedthebagmovingandusedametalrake(耙子)totearopenthebagtolookinside.Therewasmyshakingpuppydog.Therakedamagedthenervesinhisbacksohelimpedalittle,buthecouldrunasfastaslightning.Formydog’sfirstbirthday,IenteredhiminafunrunsponsoredbyourlocalSocietyforthePreventionofCrueltytoAnimals(SPCA).I’mnotmuchofarunner,buttherunwasonly3kilometers,soIthoughtitwouldbefunforbothofus.Wepracticedforweeks.Onourpracticeruns,hewasalwayseagertogoandusuallydraggedmealongbehindhim.Iworkedonhisleash(拴狗链)mannerssothathewouldn’ttripmeonthebigday.Ifeltwewerereadyforanything.Thefunrunwasdowntownamongthebigbuildings,sothenoiseofbarkingdogsallaroundusrosetoadeafeningpitchatthestartoftherace.Mydogwasfrightenedwhenthestartingtonewentoff.Hehadtroublerunningintherightdirectionwithalltheconfusionaroundus.Soontherunnersbegantothinout,andmydogwasrunningstraightandfast.Wewerepassingpeopleandmakinggreattime.Iwasdreamingofagold-medalfinish.However,whenweweresixblocksfromthefinish,mydogsuddenlystoppedanddroppedtothegroundlikeasackofpotatoes.IalmostdislocatedmyshoulderfromthesuddenstopasIwaspulledbackwardbytheleash.Hewaslyingflatonhisbellywithhisheaddowninthemiddleofthecrossroads.AtfirstIthoughtsomethingbadhadhappenedtohim.Hewasshakingandsobbing.Ididaquickcheckandcouldn’tseeanythingwrong.Itriedtogethimup,butherefused.Thepoliceofficerdoingtrafficcontrolimpatientlysignedmetomoveawaysohecouldreleasethecars.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ButIcouldn’tgetmyseventy-five-pounddogtogetup.Anotherhalf-blockofcarryinghimbroughttheanswer—amovinggarbagetruck.____________________________________________________________________________________________P1：

描写对象——我、小狗、交警我：行为动作——继续试图让它起来使劲拉绳

感受反应——着急（直接内心描写，也可以通过神态表情等体现比如出汗）狗：不动（利用原文中的描述）交警：再次催

不耐烦我：行为动作——下决定扛起狗离开比赛走过半个街区

感受反应——失望沮丧疑惑究竟是何原因P2:描写对象——我、小狗小狗：更加害怕发抖吼叫等我：轻拍它的头加快步伐跑离开（尽管很累）

情绪转变，不再失落，理解小狗

想要帮助小狗平静

走出恐惧远离卡车后,我帮助小狗走出恐惧，虽然比赛没有得奖，但是与小狗之间的感情更进一步（或是具体感悟）或者小狗：恢复平静摇尾巴快速奔跑起来跑向比赛终点我：惊讶感动感悟：能体现人与动物之间的美好情感的方向WhenIadoptedhim,hehadbeenrescuedfromdeathinsideatightlytiedblacktrashbagabandonedrightbesideagarbagetruckontheroad.Analertgarbagemannoticedthebagmovingandusedametalrake(耙子)totearopenthebagtolookinside.Therewasmyshakingpuppydog.Therakedamagedthenervesinhisbacksohelimpedalittle,Limptowardsthefinishinglinebuthecouldrunasfastaslightning.LimptowardsthefinishinglineFormydog’sfirstbirthday浅层：那天留下了不可磨灭的记忆深层：生日这天，重获新生Thisisagiftformydog'sbirthday-arebirthwithmyloveandalife-likerunwithmycompanion,IenteredhiminafunrunsponsoredbyourlocalSocietyforthePreventionofCrueltytoAnimals(SPCA).I’mnotmuchofarunner,buttherunwasonly3kilometers,soIthoughtitwouldbefunforbothofus.浅层：那天留下了不可磨灭的记忆深层：生日这天，重获新生Thisisagiftformydog'sbirthday-arebirthwithmyloveandalife-likerunwithmycompanionWepracticedforweeks.Onourpracticeruns,hewasalwayseagertogoandusuallydraggedmealongbehindhim.Iworkedonhisleash(拴狗链)mannerssothathewouldn’ttripmeonthebigday.Ifeltwewerereadyforanything.Thefunrunwasdowntownamongthebigbuildings,sothenoiseofbarkingdogsallaroundusrosetoadeafeningpitch一个震耳欲聋的音调atthestartoftherace.Mydogwasfrightenedwhenthestartingtonewentoff.HehadtroublerunningintherightdirectionwithalltheconfusionaroundusConfusion干扰。。。。notmuchofarunner,butthepersonwhocouldholdtheleashtightly,steeringmypuppydogintherightdirectiontowardhope,inthelongrun..Soontherunnersbegantothinout变稀疏,andmydogwasrunningstraightandfast.Wewerepassingpeopleandmakinggreattime.Iwasdreamingofagold-medalfinish最终得到没？？于情于理不要得到！！.Confusion干扰。。。。notmuchofarunner,butthepersonwhocouldholdtheleashtightly,steeringmypuppydogintherightdirectiontowardhope,inthelongrun.最终得到没？？于情于理不要得到！！However,whenweweresixblocksOvercomementalblock克服心理障碍itdawnedonmethatwhatcountedwasnotthesixblocksfromthefinish,buttoovercometheblockinhisheartandembracedarenewedlifeOvercomementalblock克服心理障碍itdawnedonmethatwhatcountedwasnotthesixblocksfromthefinish,buttoovercometheblockinhisheartandembracedarenewedlifeHewaslyingflatonhisbellywithhisheaddowninthemiddleofthecrossroads.AtfirstIthoughtsomethingbadhadhappenedtohim.Hewasshakingandsobbing.Ididaquickcheckandcouldn’tseeanythingwrong.Itriedtogethimup,butherefused.Thepoliceofficerdoingtrafficcontrolimpatientlysignedmetomoveawaysohecouldreleasethecars.注意：ButIcouldn’tgetmyseventy-five-pounddogtogetup.Anotherhalf-blockofcarryinghimbroughttheanswer—amovinggarbagetruck.第一段：keepwavingtomecarshonktheirhorns按喇叭toshoutouttheirimpatienceshakilylayamongthebuildings....heartrelented变软/pathimonhisshoulderratherthan....(strokehisfurryhead)attemptto....butinvain...perceivemyneedysituation/offerahand....(不是必要内容）shakingbodymademerecalltheearlydayswhen.......anxietytearmeintopieces/sweat..............(tear--tore--torn撕feartoremeintopieces\\sbwastornbetweengoodandevil)....yellandurgemeto......hadnoalternativebutto......whichmeanitwasimpossibleto......nottomentionto....dispiritedanddiscouraged....心灰意冷的ignorethesubtleglancesIgetfromotherrunnersjudgingustriedtofigureoutwhathadhappened.第二段thestink/disgustingsmellofthegarbagetruckdrewmebacktothedaywhenI。。。。。。。///////pilesofblacktrashbagonthetruckremindedmeofmyfirstencounterwiththepuppy突然明白刚才害怕什么。。bereluctantto....不情愿holdhimtighterandquickenmypace..takehimoutofnightmare..disappear/vanishoutofone’ssight..gaveabarkto.....andabarktome...wagone’stailin....notgetthegold-medal,getmydogcloserbealwayswithhim...//////或者whatastonishedmemostwas......Neverinmy..........mytinyeffortstorelievehimoutof.....wouldpayoffTheamazingconnectionbetweenhumansandanimalsdoesexistMypuppyhimselfwasmymostpreciousgoldmedal【答案】ButIcouldn’tgetmyseventy-five-pounddogtogetup.TheharderItriedtoscoophimupfromthepavement,themorehefoughtme.Theofficeryellingandcarshonking,Ipulledhimwithallmymight,butinvain.Finally,Igotmyarmunderhimandliftedhimupinafireman’scarry,throwinghimovermyshoulder.AsIstaggeredtotheroadside,peoplearoundweretakingmydog’sside,laughingIwasrunninghimtoohard.Iwasfuming.Mydogwouldrunalldaylongandhewasn’ttheleastbittired.Anotherhalf-blockofcarryinghimbroughttheanswer—amovinggarbagetruck.Itssoundmusthavehitmydog’ssensitiveears,sohecriedlouderandclawedatmybackaswedrewclosertoit.IheldontighterandranasfastasIcouldtogetmysweetbabydogawayfromthatscarygarbagetruck.IranwithhimonmyshoulderuntilIfelthimrelaxed,andthenIsethimdown.Hewaggedhistailingratitudeforsavinghimfromthegarbagetruck.Surely,wedidn’twinanymedals,butIwonhistrustforever.【解析】【导语】文章以作者和狗狗的故事为线索展开，