读后续写写作指导及范文讲义新高考英语写作复习

2025年新高考英语写作｜读后续写写作指导及范文Iwouldn’tsay

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thesymbolofperfection,andIwantedtobejustlikeher.Ifsheworeherhairintwin

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thefollowingday.Iusedtofollowherandherfriendsaroundandbegtobeincluded,butathirteenyearold’slifedoesn’treallyhavemuchspaceforabothersometenyearoldsister.Overtime,myadmirationforherturnedintoindifference.Livinginthesameapartmentasstrangers,wesharedmealsbutbarelyspoketooneanother.IwassounconcernedwhensheinformedmelastyearthatshewouldbespendingeightmonthsstudyingabroadinLisbon,Portugal.IassumedI’dgettouseherCDplayerandwearthedressessheleftbehind.ThatwastheonlywayIthoughtherleavingwouldaffectme.Isatinmyroomthatfirsteveningaftershedepartedandtriedtofinishmy

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Icouldn’tgetridofthefeelingthatsomethingwaswrong,somethingwasmissing.Theapartmentwasfartoosilent.BothThika’sCDplayerandhervoicegigglingonthephonewithherfriendswereabsent.AsIsatthere,Ibecameacutelyawareofhowdifferentlifewaswithouther.Eventhoughwedidn’talwaystalk,justhavinghertheremademefeelsecure.Isobbedthatevening.Wewastedyearstryingtoliveourownlivesandoverlookingeachother’s,andthatmademyheartache.IsobbedthatIdidnotevengiveherahugbeforesheboardedherplane.Butasthenightwenton,mysobsturnedintotearsofpeace,tearsofnewbeginnings.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Ipickedupthephoneandcalledherhalfwayacrosstheworld._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Foralongtimetherewasnothingbutsilenceontheotherend._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】Ipickedupthephoneandcalledherhalfwayacrosstheworld.

Iwaitedforhertopickup,mydoubtsgrowingwitheverysecond.“Hello?”HervoicesoundedasthoughitcamefromnearbyandnotPortugal.“HeyThika.It’sme,Anna.IjustcalledtotellyouImissyou.”Mywordscameoutinarush.IknewthatifIstoppedinthemiddle,Iwouldn’thavethecouragetocontinue.“Iknowwearen’tascloseassomesisters,butthatdoesn’tmeanI’mnotmissingyouaton.”Foralongtimetherewasnothingbutsilenceontheotherend.

Finallyshespoke.“I’vebeensittinghere,allalone,thinkingaboutyouguysbackhome,”shesaid.“YourvoicemakesmefeelasthoughIwererighttherewithyou.”Andbeforeshehungupshesaid,veryquicklyjustasIhad,“Imissyou,too.”I’mcountingdownthedaysuntilmysisterreturnshome,soIcangiveherthehugInevergaveherwhensheleftandtellherhowgladIamtohaveherbackhome.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者小时候认为姐姐Thika是完美的象征，喜欢当姐姐的跟屁虫并模仿她。但是她并没有留出太多的时间给作者，久而久之，作者对姐姐的仰慕变成了冷漠。两个人之间的沟通逐渐变少。去年Thika告诉作者她将在葡萄牙的里斯本留学八个月。起初作者并没有什么感觉，但当独自呆在房间的时候，作者强烈意识到没有姐姐的生活是多么不同。作者非常难过，意识到这么多年两人忽略了彼此的生活，在姐姐登机前甚至都没给她一个拥抱。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我隔着半个地球给她打了。”可知，第一段可描写作者隔着诉说对姐姐的思念。②由第二段首句内容“很长一段时间，那头一片寂静。”可知，本段可描写姐姐的回应以及作者期盼姐姐回来。2.续写线索：作者打——等待姐姐接——作者诉说思念——姐姐沉默片刻——姐姐回应浓浓思念——期待姐姐归来词汇激活

行为类①暂停：stop/pause②继续：continue/proceed③拥抱某人：givesbahug/embracesb/holdsbinatenderembrace情绪类①怀疑：doubt/suspicion②鼓起勇气：havethecourage/workupthe